Re: Faerie's Curse (Spritz)

by Daydreamer Mon Nov 07, 2011 8:41 pm

Kallie looked around, knowing that thet had been beaten. There was nothing she could do now. As she was held back by one of the soldiers, she watched them beat at Zane. She started to struggle again once she saw how bad Zane's injuries were becoming. Pretty soon he passed out. Kallie raced over to him falling to her knee's by his side no longer trying to change her voice. "Zane!" she called out loudly giving him a rough shake, in doing so covering her hands with his blood. "Come on.." she muttered as she saw the soldiers advancing. She stood up, walking in front of his limp body readying herself for them to kill both of them

by Spritz Mon Nov 07, 2011 8:50 pm

Zane~ (Floating in the world of unconciousness)

The Captain~
Striding forward, the man roughly pushed the soldiers to the side. Had he heard a woman!? He was imedietly anxious to find out, and as he made his way to the middle of the group of soldiers, he was confronted by a scene that made a cruel smile stretch across his thin, pale lips. Leaning down, he saw that Zane, one of the most wanted fighters, was lying unconcious in the dirt, bloodied chest barley rising and falling. A boy was leaning over him, crying, and the captain grabbed his arm, dragging him away from Zane's body, before kicking him harshly in the ribs with his hard leather boot.
Suddenly, he whirled to face Kole, eyes full of evil intent and mystery. Shoving him against a tree trunk, he leaned into him, clasping a hand around his throat, and starting to squeeze. He wasn't planning on killing this chap, not yet anyway, but just for the fun of seeing that face, he continued on.

by Daydreamer Mon Nov 07, 2011 8:54 pm

Kallie stayed by his side until she felt someone roughly drag her up. She started to struggle against him trying to punch him and kick him. Zane was badly hurt! She needed to help him! Then she was slammed against the tree, she couldn't help but let out a gasp of pain. Then his hand went over her throat. She started to choke, not being able to breath. Her eyes filled with panic. As she tried to tear his hands of without suceeding. His vision started to swarm as she started to kick out at him again.

by Spritz Mon Nov 07, 2011 9:01 pm

As soon as the man saw him gasping for air, his face turning red as he tried to breath, he only then let him drop to the ground, leaning down and lifting him up by the collar, holding his feet a foot above the ground. His breath smelt of tobacco and rotting flesh, litterally, and he hissed in Kole's face, before throwing him to the ground, his body sliding and colliding with Zane's own bloody one. Soon, both of the bodies, (Zane and Kole aka Kallies) were picked up by the soldiers, and hurled into a wooden cart that was being drawn by a magnificent roan mare, who pawed the ground anxiously, watching and not understanding what was happening. They were dumped into the back of the cart, Kole appointed to watch over Zane less he try to escape. If Zane did escape when he woke up, Kole would have his own throat slit, slowly and painfully.
Soon, the convoy of warriers and defeated men started to trudge away from the bloodied place, all of thier hands tied behind thier backs cruelly.

by Daydreamer Mon Nov 07, 2011 9:08 pm

Kallie closed her eyes hoping it would end soon before she fell to her knee's as he let go if her throat. She gasped for air, takung huge gulps filling her lungs with air. She coughef loudly and was picked up by the collar again. She stared ito the man's eyes with pure hatred. She thrown over to Zane and hit the ground hard. She held in a moan of pain and shakily tried to raise herself off the ground failing to do so. She collapsed on the ground next to him. Kallie didnt struggle as she was picked up and thrown into the cart with Zane. She looked at the man, refusing to show fear when he threatened her. Once they were on the move she started to shake Zane again "Zane please wake up" she mumbled touching his shoulder.

by Spritz Mon Nov 07, 2011 9:14 pm

The convoy started to move forward at a rapid pace, every rut in the narrow dirt road bouncing the wagon and making Zane's head hit against the floor. He let out a low, gutteral moan of pain after a few minutes, and forced his eyes open, his lids threatening to close, feeling so, so heavy. He made himself prop to his elbows, his lip split and bleeding, his arms wrenched tightly up behind his back. Wincing in pain as each bounce made his bones knock against eachother, he saw Kole and looked at him desperatly. "You have to get out!" He whispered hoarsly, his voice cracking.

by Daydreamer Mon Nov 07, 2011 9:21 pm

Kallie flinched as the cart went over the bumpy road. She was so glad that Zane didn't have to watch her go through all tbe pain the captain had put her through. She hoped he still hadn't made the connection. She grimaced as she hit her side as the cart jumped. She realized that Zane was finally waking up. She blew out a breath of relief, "im not leaving you here, anyways I've been threatened by them, if i let you escape ill be killed and you'll be killed" she put a hand to her aching head "we must find another way to get out of here"

by Spritz Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:42 am

"No!" Zane's voice cracked harshly, his lips dried and peeling, face smudged with dirt and blood. His arms ached painfully, and as the old wooden wagon went over another harsh bump, he fell down to the floor of the wagon, before trying to push himself up, every movement gruesome and extremley painful. Twisting his head to one side, he tried to see where they were, but he didn't know, after having lost his bearings. If he would have been awake when they had left, he would have been able to track thier progress, and if they escaped, could bring them all back to the campsite.
But now it was too late for that. He leaned forward, pressing his lips near Kole's ear. "You go!" He hissed, glancing around warrilly. Before he was able to say another word, one of the guards that was walking aloneside the wagon growled, then pulled out his sword, grabbing Zane by the wrists and leaping into the cart, before slamming him against the floor, holding the blade close to his heart. He soldier wasn't going to kill Zane, as it wasn't the captains orders, but he still wanted to see this mighty warriors blood spill on his own sword.
Pressing the tip onto his chest, the blade cut into Zane's flesh, going about a half an inch deep, blood starting to spill out of the wound. Zane winced but didn't say a thing, already to bloody and hurt to even try to fight. The soldier gave a harsh snarl, before moving away and slamming him backwards, kicking Zane harshly in the ribs, taking advantage that the warrior couldn't do anything about it, not now, not when he was bound.
To make sure nothing happened, the soldier slumped down in the wagon, his sword coated with a bit of Zane's blood, resting atop his knees as he snarled at Kole, and Zane, daring them to try anything.

(As soon as they reach thier destination, the'll find out she's a girl)

by Daydreamer Wed Nov 09, 2011 5:16 pm

(okay thats great with me! And ill be on and off tonight cause im writing an essay and I have a math test)

Kallie's head was throbbing from the captain throwing her around. The wagon was throwing her around. She held back a curse when she hit the side of it. She turned her expression onto Zane, she could see he was also trying to form a plan. Kallie shook her head, "I said I wasn't going to leave without you....and all the other soldiers too" she added before a guard had come up to them. She gave him the most hateful glare she could muster. She watched him press the sword into Zane's chest, and she held herself back from throwing herself at him, knowing that would get them both killed.
She winced as she saw more blood running down Zane's shirt, she hated that she couldn't help him. She glared at the guard once more before turning her gaze onto Zane. She flinched away when he kicked him. She gritted her teeth together hoping that they'd get to their destination soon.

by Spritz Fri Nov 11, 2011 10:34 am

Zane didn't bother to try and move, as he knew it would be punished, and probably severley. Leaning his head back against the wood, he tried to ignore the pain signals that were firing off from every part of his body, his ribs hurting the most. His breathing was restricted as he tried to expand his lungs, and he was forced to take concentrated, small breath's of air. Opening his eyes, his arms ached from being twisted cruelly behind his back, his lips cracked and dry, throat parched.

Turning his head to glance at Kole, he managed a slight, weak smile, that he didn't think looked encouraging, as his lip split open.

by Daydreamer Fri Nov 11, 2011 5:32 pm

Kallie sat on the wagon, she put her head onto her knee's. Waiting for them to arrive at wherever they planned to take them. She glanced up, Zane was beat up pretty badly and she doubted they would give him the proper care he now needed. She felt another wave of anger surge through her. She wished Zane didn't have to leave the village, they could still be spending time together, just like old times. She winced as she saw how weak he looked. She looked up and saw that they were nearing some sort of camp

(Just wanted to skip through to the part where they arrived Razz

)

by Spritz Fri Nov 11, 2011 9:34 pm

Tired eyes glanced upwards, belonging to a tired, beaten face. Zane looked around him slightly, realizing that within a few hours, they had reached thier temporary destination. The village he had grown up in, the village where he had left Kallie was left far behind, and he was thankful that they would be safe, at least for a little while, nestled deep inside the forest and hard to find, unless you had been there often and knew the way by heart. Letting his curiousity and common sense take over, he pushed himself into an upright position, seeing that the warrior had also stood, as soon as the wagon stopped. Another burley man quickly clambored abord the wooden wagon, before grabbing Kole by the shoulders and heaving him into an upright position, before hooking his fingers under the rope that bound Kole's wrists, and forcing the boy to stand.

by Daydreamer Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:34 am

Kallie looked at the camp, there were men everywhere. She tried to crane her neck to see, then one of the men grabbed Kallie and forced her too stand. Her legs shook with protest but she stood up and faced him with a scowl. She let her gaze wander, and saw that they were grabbing most of the prisoners now, and were leading them off the wagon. She was pushed by the man off, she tried to look for Zane. If she got separated from him, she wasn't sure what she would do. She struggled slightly with the man before seeing that they were also bringing him with them. She stopped and they all started walking towards the camp in a big clump. She prayed that they wouldn't find out that she wasn't really a soldier, but a women in disguise. The men here looked cruel and mean and she didn't want to imagine what they would do to her if they did find out.

by Spritz Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:45 am

Someone harshly hauled Zane to his feet. He didn't resist, not now. Later, when he was alone, or with the others, he would find a way for them all to escape. Lowering his head slightly, he stumbled off of the wagon, the mare who had been pulling it pawing the ground and prancing slightly, tossing her large head and whinnying to the other horses that were at the camp also, tied to posts. He saw Kole, who had started to strugle quiet down slightly, and winced as his hands were twisted cruelly behind his back.

(Any ideas for how they find out she's a girl?)

by Daydreamer Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:51 am

Kallie winced as the man pushed her...hard. She wasn't sure how much more of this she could take. Her body was covered in purple bruises, and deep cuts. She felt drained of energy, she wasn't use to everything. She should've thought of the fact she wouldn't be able to continue physically. She stumbled slightly but caught herself quickly before following them into the midst of the camp.

(Is thinking....

im not actually sure... UM, UM

oo how bout they decide to kill Zane but Kallie stops them by offering herself as a deal for his life?)

by Spritz Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:45 am

Zane was roughly pushed down, his hands tied behind him. All of the prisoners were in a hut, all of their hands tied harshly. Kole was thrown down near him, and he looked to the young boy, giving him a tired smile. "Dont worry Kole." He said softly, but he wasn't sure if those words meant anything. Shaking his head, he leaned back against the wall and watched as more and more of his fellow soldiers were thrown down into the hut.

(Good idea, but how would they get out?)

by Daydreamer Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:51 am

(thats going to be a problem XD we'll worry about it when we get there i guess)

Kallie was thrown down onto the ground with a heavy grunt, she landed awkwardly onto her arm and held back a loud curse of pain. She glared up at the soldier, who didn't even give her a second glance. She pulled herself up beside Zane. Now she was thoroughly worried about what they were going to do. Pretty soon the hut was full with soldiers, bloody and tired. She remembered she had a dagger in her boot, though she wasn't able to use it under the heavy watch of the soldiers. There were guards on the entrance to the hut, and they wouldn't be able to get out at the moment anyways, bloody and tired.

by Spritz Sat Nov 12, 2011 11:07 am

"I've been in worse situations before." Zane muttered softly as Kole picked himself up and sat near him. "Be thankful they took us as prisoners, instead of killing us on sight you know." Zane's voice was seemingly dry, his throat parched. He needed water, but was sure that they werent going to give them any, so just sat there, seemingly in silence, but his mind was quickly thinking of opportunities of escape. The map of the camp was laid out in his head as he closed his eyes, but knew that they couldn't risk anything yet.

by Daydreamer Sat Nov 12, 2011 6:29 pm

Kallie watched him, he was deep in thought. She sighed and put her head against the wood of the hut, closing her eyes. She rested for a while before she heard a loud banging of doors and a ragged looking soldier come in. She opened her eyes watching him. He then turned and saw Zane, and something glittered in his eyes, although she wasn't sure what. "That one" he said loudly, his voice was harsh, and scratchy and she cringed from just hearing it. She saw that he was talking about Zane. She widened her eyes as two guard turned to grab him.

(can you play that warrior? He's the one who was sent to kill Zane)

by Spritz Sat Nov 12, 2011 11:18 pm

Zane raised his head as a slight stirring of comotion broke out in the tent, and his eyes fell upon a sturdy group of warriors, who had their greedy eyes set on him. Stiffening as they started tromping towards him, kicking at anyone who was in there way, and even those who werent, Zane was slammed against the wall, before behind dragged into a standing position. He whipped out his arms, managing to hit someone harshly, but another grabbed him and twisted his arms so that he couldn't move them.

by Daydreamer Sun Nov 13, 2011 9:13 am

Kallie watched them, grab Zane. She started to stand up herself but another warrior grabbed her by the shoulder's making sure she didn't get in the way. The rugged looking one didn't even glance at her, as his eyes were all for Zane. "The Captain said that we should just get rid of you before you cause anymore trouble" he said with a gleam in his eyes. The soldier's held Zane tightly making sure he wasn't going to get away. The warrior started to unsheath his sword and put in near Zane's heart. "I'll glady make sure that you won't" he said with a small laugh.

by Spritz Sun Nov 13, 2011 11:38 am

Zane stiffened as the warrior drew his sword, and pressed it against Zane's bare chest. He imedietly knew why they had come in for him after all, and quickly twisted painfully out of the holders grip, spinning and delivering a hard elbow to one's stomach. He was socked hard in the jaw, and stumbled backwards slightly, grunting as another fist was slammed into his ribs, making him double over, but quickly scramble to his feet, doing his best to fight as his hands were tied.

by Daydreamer Sun Nov 13, 2011 11:56 am

Kallie watched him struggle, a desperate look on her face. She knew that there was noway out of this one, he wouldn't be able to beat 4 warriors tired and hurt as he was. "Grab him" the man with the sword yelled at them. One of them punched Zane right in the gut, and then another grabbed him by his arms pushing them back so he was on the ground again. The soldier started to raise his sword before he could attack again. Kallie felt the soldier's grip on her loosen, thinking she wouldn't struggle anymore. She quickly ripped herself out of his grip, her shoulder lurching from the quick movement. She threw herself in front of Zane. "Stop!" she yelled quickly, tears were threatning to spill out of her eyes. She didn't try to hide her voice, or herself any longer. Knowing that it was a lost cause, and she was doing the only thing that she could think off to save Zane's life.

by Spritz Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:29 pm

Zane gasped out slightly as he hit the ground hard, another socking him in the stomach, making the remaining air leave his lungs. Forced to lie still while he tried to regain his breath, he managed to take in a quavering breath, his stomach muscles clenched and tight, as he tried to sit up, but was forced down again. As the warrior raised his sword, ready to drive it through Zane's heart, Kole stumbled out of the grip of another soldier, and throwing himself in front of Zane, before crying out, his face a mask of despair. His voice, his voice..... KALLIE! Everything then clicked into place, and Zane bolted upright, clasping her hand and pulling her around to face him, his eyes hard. "What the hell!"

by Daydreamer Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:36 pm

Kallie didn't look behind her, knowing that Zane was starting to decipher everything. She kept her eyes on the man with the sword in front of her. Who now looked confused, and furious. The soldier's were also confused letting their grip slacken on Zane who now grabbed Kallie, spinning her around to face him. Kallie looked at him, her eyes sad but she didn't break away from his gaze. "I had to come" she just said, her voice slightly shaking. The soldier's grabbed Zane again pushing him to the ground, while one of them grabbed Kallie who stopped struggling. The man finally seemed to understand what was going on. "A women..." he said and looked her over with hungry eyes. Kallie faced him, "I'll go with you, I won't struggle and I won't fight. Just don't kill him" she said desperatly, but her voice now loud and even. The warrior seemed to think as he shot Zane another look.

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