Re: Broken wings (Spiritz)

by Spritz Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:06 am

Quest hurried along behind him, her white mane flowing behind her as she broke into a smooth lope.

by Nicoco177 Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:14 am

Hurricane stopped infront of a forest, it was time for him to tell her how he felt for her, he looked her in the eye "Look, its about time that I tell you my secret, ever since we were foals, i liked you, I liked your spots, I liked your hooves, I like your mane, but most of all......your eyes........its your eyes....... there beautiful." he said, looking at his hooves shyly.

by Spritz Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:38 am

Quest's ears pricked upwards, but she noticed he was saying he liked the way she looked... Not who she was. She lowered her head and snorted softly, her nostrils opening. Her eyes glanced away from his.

by Nicoco177 Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:41 am

Hurricane thought he had offended her in someway "Whats the matter? was it something I said? I'm sorry..." e said, looking at her beautiful mane.

by Spritz Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:03 am

Quest started to speak, swishing her tail, then pinned it to her rump as she remembered that she was in heat. "No... I'm just afraid that you like my looks, my spots, my eyes, more than you like me."

by Nicoco177 Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:11 am

"you have got a personality the size of a dinosaur, your a kind, fun loving mare, the best mare I could of met...." he said, hoping that that would make her feel better.

by Spritz Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:16 am

Quest laughed, her eyes sparkling. "Dinosour, eh?" She said, then nuzzled his cheek. "Lets get going, I'm not comfortable here."

by Nicoco177 Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:38 pm

"neither am I, were stood right infront of a clearing, and if we're not careful, well, what happened to our mother might happen to us..." he laughed, nuzzling her back.

by Spritz Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:43 pm

"Or worse.." Quest made sure to pin her tail as she walked forward, then broke into an unsteady trot, glancing sideways and eyeing the tree line around them. Her ears pricked forward as she heard a sound, and she stopped abruptly, her demenor stiff and ready to run.

by Nicoco177 Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:56 pm

Hurricane ran infront of her, protecting her "what is it?" he said bravely.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:35 am

Quest snorted and lowered her head. "I dont know..." She trailed off, but still eyed the treeline.

by Nicoco177 Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:46 am

he snorted lightly "Don't worry, what ever it is, i'll always be beside you, even when i'm dead." he said whilst nuzzling her cheek.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:48 am

Quests ears drooped as she heard the word 'Dead.'
"Your not going to die any time soon, are you?" She asked, alarmed.

by Nicoco177 Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:55 am

"No, of course not!" she said looking at her alarmed face.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:56 am

Quest stomped a striped hoof. "Good. I dont want you to." That was obvious, but hey, why not mention it. She continued to walk forward, her ears rotating around her skull.

by Nicoco177 Wed Oct 05, 2011 10:17 am

"look, ummm, I don't know how to say this but, how would you feel if we were to become mates?" he said, blushing slightly.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 10:43 am

Hurricanes slight, soft voice reached Quest's ears, and she stopped in midstride, her hoof poised above the ground. Her delecate ears pricked backwards, and she cocked her head, her mane blowing in the breeze. Her deep chocolate eyes looked into Hurricanes, and a small smile formed on her lips.

by Nicoco177 Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:16 am

"is that a yes?" he said, jogging on the spot, waiting for a reply.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:26 am

Quest turned, her side brushing against his. Her eyes looked into his, and she again, smiled. "Yes."

by Nicoco177 Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:38 am

"Great....." he said, he stomped his hoof lightly.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:43 am

Quest snorted softly, her soft velvet muzzle resting on Hurricanes back. "Now what?"

by Nicoco177 Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:45 am

"well, are you still in heat?" he asked, regreting what he had just said.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:50 am

Quest rolled her eyes, swishing her tail. Even she could smell her strong scent drifting on the breeze, and wondered how a stallion couldn't smell it. But yes, he was younger.

by Nicoco177 Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:53 am

"Is that the smell?" he said, getting excited.

by Spritz Wed Oct 05, 2011 11:55 am

Quest moved her muzzle off of his back, and again, raised her tail. She swished it again, her scent spreading and climbing up Hurricanes nostrils. She didn't know what there was about it that made every stallion exited, but she nodded. "Yes."

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