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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:46 pm

Quest nodded. "Yeah, I got scared. What was it?" She asked, curious as always. They reached the forests edge, and the thick dark tree's broke into a soft, green meadow, with a crystal stream cutting through it.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:49 pm

"It was a bullet hitting my mom, you know, killer two leggeds." he said, remebering the sight and smell of blood...... it made him feel sick.
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:59 pm

"Oh." Quest's ears pricked slightly,and she broke into a slightly faster trot, into the meadow.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:01 pm

Hurricane broke into a canter, his tail bobbing slightly in the wind
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:03 pm

Quest laughed as her tiny hooves splashed into the stream, and she braced her legs,lowering her small head and dipping her muzzle into the water.
(Hey, if it gets boring while they are babies, do you want them to grow up and turn into adults? I think thier gonna fall in love, but they shouldnt grow up for a little while yet.)
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:22 pm

(yeah, okay)
Hurricane laughed too, until he came to the water "what is this stuff?" he says poking a hoof in and spins around in the cool liquid (he's never seen water!)
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:27 pm

Quest snorted. "Water." Looking at it distainfully, her mouth felt dry, and her stomach rumbled in hunger. She didn't have any teeth yet, and she couldn't eat grass.

(Is it ok if a rancher finds them and bottle feeds them both untill they are old enough to leave?"
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:31 pm

(yeah)
He putts the liquid in his mouth and has the urge to swallow it, so he does "Ahhhh! I swallowed it!" he coughs.
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:34 pm

Quest frowned. "I'm hungry." She says, then trots out of the water. Lying down in the shade of a large willow, she rests her head on the ground, watching him.

(Or an older mare with milk?)
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 2:51 pm

(what ever you wish?)
Hurricane made a slight whinniy and started to swish his tail, when, his tummy rumbled "I'm hungry too...." he said, looking around, he would eat the grass, but he didn't have any teeth.... he carried on swishing his tail as he looked around for some thing soft to eat.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 2:57 pm

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Maybelle was finally reaching the end of her life. The old mare was swaybacked and thin, her health declining. She slowly walked into a lush meadow, her joints litterally creaking as she moved. Her eyes were dull, her breathing ragged. She knew she would die within a few months, if that. But she lie down in the shade of an old tree, looking much like her. Old, bent, and black. But, she had a full bag of milk, due to some sick young forcer. Her colt had been taken from her.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:08 pm

Hurricane got fed up, he wanted food, he whinnied pawing the ground "Is anyone out there!" he whinnied, looking at the motionless field.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:11 pm

Quest snorted, her head shooting up from the ground. Her tiny ears pricked forward, and she scrambled to her feet, her muscles tight and ready to run. Then she saw a bedragled mare limp her way into the meadow, and the tiny filly's heart went out to her. The old mare looked so, sad and old. She whinned to Hurricane and raced towards her.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:13 pm

Hurricane whinnied back and raced after her, his heart racing as fast as he was.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:20 pm

Maybell lifted her head at the sound of light hoofbeats, and lifted her head to see the crest of a tiny spotted mare racing towards her at top speed, followed closely by a smaller male. She struggled to her feet, her joints creaking, and gave the two a warm smile.
"What are you two doing all alone, where are you're mothers?"
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:22 pm

"My mother? oh......shes....ummmm.......dead" he said, giving a warm smile back to the mare.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:25 pm

Maybelle looked taken aback, but the young filly nodded once. "They both are..." The small filly trailed off, then her stomach rumbled hungrily. Maybelle smiled kindly, gesturing to the source of milk. "You are both welcome to dinner, if you wish." She said softly, and Quest glanced at Hurricane.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:27 pm

"But how? I can't eat anything coz I have no.... oh right!" he said, looking at Quest.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:30 pm

Quest swallowed, but decided to trust this mare. She stepped forward, then began to drink hungrilly, the warm milk soothing her and trickling down her throat.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:33 pm

Hurricane stepped forward uneasily, but trusted the mare so he steped forward and started to feed on the milk.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:36 pm

Maybelle closed her eyes, happy that she was doing something helpful before she passed on. She cocked a hind leg, and relaxed.

Quest bumped muzzles with Hurricane, and gave an embarrased smile, her lips coated with white foamy, creamy milk.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:38 pm

He laughed and carried on feeding until he could drink to more, he laid down next to the mare, he let out a groan as he sighed.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:41 pm

Quest finished, daintilly extending one of her long front legs, and wiping her muzzle on it, before trotting around the mare and lying down, sidling up to Hurricane. Maybelle's front legs folded, and she also lie down, resting her head on her front legs.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:43 pm

Hurricane was so full, he couldn't rest, he rolled onto his back and closed his eyes.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:47 pm

Quest's eyes soon closed, and her breathing became deep and regular, the small spotted filly falling fast asleep.

(Hey, soon I'm going to make them a bit older, then Maybelle is going to dieD'X)
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