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Post by Nicoco177 Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:10 am

Somewhere, underneath a willow tree, a young mare of 2 was giving birth, whinnies were heard and grunts were made, she finally gave birth too a beautiful Isabelle spotted blanket Colt, gun shots rose from the forest, and the mare jumped too her feet, when a close by shot was made, The mare jumped and looked at her chest, blood started too appear from her chest "Run, Hurricane, I SAID RUN!!!" she said as another shot blasted through her side "Run....." she said, those were her last words, the Colt ran, and he ran, and he ran. Until he came too a cave, he sheltered under the cave and shivered "Hello? Heellllooooooo?!?!" he whispered weakly, he longed for a horse of any kind, any breed, any age of horse or foal too come and give him some company, he whimmpered and the whimmper turned into tears of saddness, a cry of sadness floated through the valley.
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Post by Spritz Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:21 am

Quest merrily pranced over the grass, totally relaxed and at home. Her tiny hooves left indentations in the dirt, her tiny, beautiful head held up high, blue eyes twinkling with mischeif. But the peace was soon shattered like broken glass, as a loud boom sent Quest galloping away, her small ears pinned to her skull, eyes now full of fear and desperation. Her tiny tail flew out behind her, and she ran and ran, as the loud crack of a rifle resounded through the forest, many times. In her blind fear, she saw a large cave opening, and dove in for cover.
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Post by Nicoco177 Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:45 am

Hurricane woke from his mercyful trance, he jumped too his feet and slid too the back off the cave "W-w-whos there?" he stammerd.
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Post by Spritz Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:56 am

Quest squeeled in fear, peeling backwards and bolting out of the cave. Her inquisitive nature nagged at her a bit, so she stopped within a hundred feet and ducked behind a tree, watching the mouth of the cave with fear and curiouity.
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Post by Nicoco177 Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:35 am

"I said whos there?" he stammered again, he took a step backwards and unexpectedly touched the wall, he ran out the cave, his fragile legs wobbling slightly.
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Post by Spritz Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:50 am

Quest frowned when she saw who it was. Her oreo face poked out from behind the trunk, blue eyes taking in the small stranger with intrest.
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Post by Nicoco177 Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:59 am

Hurricane sensed another horse somewhere, so he hid behind a tree and sat down (This foal knows how too sit! cheers )
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Post by Spritz Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:01 am

Quest exhaled a long, exasperated sigh. "I can see you." She said said blankly, rolling her eyes and stepping out from behind the tree. She saw his tiny tail poking from out of the tree, and lied down in the grass.
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Post by Nicoco177 Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:15 am

He jumped at the sound of a voice, he chewed bark off a tree and suddenly remembered his mother, a tear rolled down his cheek but he quickly wiped it of though.
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Post by Spritz Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:55 pm

Quest rolled her eyes. "Come out already. I'm not a colt eating monster, see for yourself!" She said cockilly, and cocked her head at the trunk of the tree.
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Post by Nicoco177 Wed Sep 14, 2011 8:58 am

He slowly stuck his head out from behind the tree and saw the filly "Im going too go back into the cave know." he said, he bolted through the cave and skidded too a halt right at the back, he found a small patch of moss, so he lay down in it.
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Post by Spritz Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:32 am

Quest rolled her eyes. "Fine, go! But this is the last you'll see of me!" She snapped, turning on her heel and whirling away, her tiny tail held high as she trotted out of sight, her spotted coat soon dissapearing into the backround of the forest.
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Post by Nicoco177 Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:30 am

he heard her words and thought about it, he needed some company, he ran out of the cave and saw she wasnt there, he let out a nicker and started running through a tall thicket of grass, his hooves delicatly steped through each blade, the tall, yellow-green grass towered atleast five feet above him.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:49 am

"What!?" Quest snapped, now annoyed. She could see the grass parting and rolled her eyes, cocking a hind foot and waiting for him.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:55 am

his head stook out of the grass, he looked at her softly "I was just, just looking for someone." he stammerd.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:05 am

Quest breathed an exagerated sigh. "Fine. So here I am, what do you want?" She asked, her tiny tail swishing as she tried to act like an older horse.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:39 pm

"Some company would be nice" he said, abit slurry, the words echoed slightly in his mouth.
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 9:16 am

Quest gave a tiny snort. "Geez, you can speak up, I'm not going to hurt you!" She said, then her voice softened. "I'm open.."
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 9:36 am

Hurricane poked his head back into the grass and trotted out, his tiny Hooves shining in the sun "I-Im Hurricane..." he stuttered "Atleast thats what I think." he said, one of his spots on his coat seemed to look like a Thunder cloud, that was probably why he wascalled Hurricane.
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 9:41 am

Quest nodded a hello, her tiny ears pricked upward and foward, watching him. "I'm quest." She said simply, then stomped her tiny black hoof onto the soft ground.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:13 am

"wheres your mom?" he asked politly, looking around the empty wood/forest/plain.
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:16 am

Quest looked away. "I dont know." She said truthfully, then shook her head. "If you're going to come along, you're gonna have to keep up!" She said, the started to turn away, her tiny hooves landing on the soft grass under thier feet. She turned her ehad to loook at Hurricane. "Coming?" She asked.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:29 pm

"yeah, why not, its better than staying in the cave." he said, starting too trot " only about 5 hours ago, my mom got shot by this big thing which goes BANG!" he said, bounding along side Quest.
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Post by Spritz Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:40 pm

Quest frowned, not feeling sorry, because she didn't know what it was like to have a mother, or what it felt like. "Really? Bang?" She asked, curious. She slowed down a bit so his smaller body could keep up with her.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Sep 29, 2011 2:44 pm

"why, did you hear it? it was well loud!" he said, doing a smaller bouncier walk.
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