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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:54 pm

Hurricane started to sleep, his breathing light, snores quiet.

this him when he is older (he is the blackish one! http://littlehorselover.deviantart.com/art/A-Tasty-Result-189017338)
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:59 pm

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Quest when she is older-Broken wings (Spiritz) - Page 3 Appaloosa+and+arabian

Quest woke to the warm, fuzzy feeling of having warm bodies side by side with hers. Opening her eyes slowly, she saw that the black mare had brought them to her, and they were warmly nested next to her fuzzy black belly.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:03 pm

http://silmesdragonstable.deviantart.com/art/The-fourth-211261204 he looks abit like that.

Hurricane woke up, the last of his foal fur was on the ground, he was now no longer a baby, he awoke next too the Mare and Quest, feeling rather happy.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:07 pm

Quest got to her feet, shaking her long mane, that fell past he shoulder blades. She nuzzled Maybelle to wake up, but the mare didn't stir. Frowning, Quest sniffed at Maybelles face, then nipped her mane sliightly. Still, no response.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:10 pm

Hurricane fully woke up when no response came from the Maybelle "Oh, Oh No! she not......" he said looking into Quests eye.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:22 pm

Quest's eyes were filled with sorrow, quiet weeping. She licked Maybelle on the cheek softly, crystal tears spilling out of the rim of her eyes. She turned to Hurricane. "Yes." She said quietly.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:25 pm

Hurricane's eyes widened and fillied with sorrow, tears forming in his eyes, he walked up to Maybelle's lifeless body "No, No please not know!" he whimpered, placing his head on Maybelle's neck.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:31 pm

Quest turned desparing eyes on him, but they were happy. "Look." She whispered quietly, and gestured to Maybelles face. There was a tiny smile frozen on that old battered face of hers, and Quest pressed her forhead against Hurricanes neck, buiried in his soft thick mane.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:34 pm

He smiled to Maybelle in heaven, he looked at Quest "Look, we've had some good times with maybelle, but its time to....move on from being foals." he smiled, speaking softly.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:37 pm

Quest nodded once. "I know.." She said quietly, then straightened up. "Were going to have to move on, find somewhere to hunker down." She said, tossing her head.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:40 pm

"well, I lost all my Foal fur last night, and I've finally got my new hide!" he said, the sun making the tears on his cheeck sparkle.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:44 pm

Quest sighed, rolling her eyes. "Why does that matter?" She asked. Being older than him, she had lost it a while ago, and now her own coat gleamed black and white.
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Post by Nicoco177 Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:46 pm

he looked around embarressed "Wel... I don't know....." he laughed.
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Post by Spritz Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:50 pm

Quest shook herself off, then looked gravley back at Maybelle. "Rest in peace." She turned to huricane. "What now?" She asked hesitantly.
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Post by Nicoco177 Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:02 am

"Now, we live on from foals? otherwise I don't know, No. Follow me......" he said, started to walk, then trot, then canter.
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Post by Spritz Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:00 pm

Quest looked regretfully at Maybelles limp body, but turned and followed Hurricane. She didn't know where they were going, but she trusted him with her life, and even more.
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Post by Nicoco177 Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:09 pm

Hurricane stoped outside a familiar cave "Remember this cave? this used to be our hideout! we printed our hoof beats on the wall of the cave..." he said, walking up to the two tiny hoofprints, he pressed his hoof against the tiny hoof mark, his hoof now was probably about 4 times the size of what it is now....A tear formed from his cheek, remebering the times way back then....
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Post by Spritz Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:13 pm

Quest pushed her head against his neck, comforting him. "There's no need to cry you know. There is nothing back then that changes anything between us." She accidentally let out to much, and stepped back, embarrased.
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Post by Nicoco177 Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:17 pm

"yeah, I know." he said, stepping back close to her again, nuzzling her "I'm just a wet lettuce. I let every little thing make me go soft. but, I guess thats just me..." he said smiling, he steped into the cave, looking at all the stuff in the ccave.
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Post by Spritz Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:19 pm

"Soo...."
Quest trailed off. "Are we planning on staying here?" She asked, looking around hesitantly. She knew that there were stallions in the area, she could smell thier strong scent.
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Post by Nicoco177 Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:22 pm

Hurricane smelt other males around "I think we should get moving somewhere... I smell something.....funny." he said, looking around him.
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Post by Spritz Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:31 pm

"Funny?"
Quest said, a bit worridly. She hoped it wasn't her own heat scent. She had been brought into her first heat only 2 days ago, and now it was starting to grow stronger. She pinned her tail to her rump and backed out of the cave.
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Post by Nicoco177 Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:33 pm

"Males, come on, lets move away from the cave." I say, jerking forward.
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Post by Spritz Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:35 pm

Quest hurridly followed, looking anxiously behind her, her tail pinned tightly to her rump.
"Where are we going?"
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Post by Nicoco177 Sat Oct 01, 2011 4:39 pm

"away from this place. Come!" he says, getting worried about her, the thought of Quest getting forced scared him.
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