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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Oct 13, 2011 1:10 pm

A figure hiked up a mountain trail thickly over grown with brush and littered with rocks to boulders, a duffel bag was slung over one shoulder and bouncing off the opposite hip with a old back pack that had seen better days. A dirty mustang baseball cap was low over the person's eyes hiding them from the sun abort hair was pulled into a ponytail and sticking out the back of the cap , worn out blue jeans with a ripped knee with nikes on her feet, a band tee shirt covered her upper body.


It took a couple hours but the girl finely came to a little meadow resting in a valley. It looked like a abandon camp ground but in reality it was the girls hide away, a safe stop for her. Grunting softly she walked over to the old little tent and set her duffel bag on the ground. "Alright if theres any critters in the tent your leaving" She said and unzipped the door slowly. She's found squirrels, raccoons and even a possum once in her tent, the squirrels and raccoons did the most damage and ripped up her sleeping bag. Unzipping it the rest the way she let out a breath of relief seeing no little critters in the tent, it just smelled a little musty "Well thats better then finding a critter" She mumbled and let the flap open to let it air out. Letting out a breath she slowly took the backpack off her bag and winced a little from the sharp pain from her left ribs Couldn't get out of it this time, no matter what I did she thought grimly and set it down beside the duffel bag.


Looking around the small meadow again she let out a breath and finely looked down at her right arm, it had a gash starting a little above her hand and stopped at her elbow, it had finely stopped bleeding a little while back on the trail but the bandage she wrapped it in was a bloody mess, and it needed to be changed besides all that the gash looked like it needed stitches but the seventeen year old was not about to take a needle to her own arm and stitch her own arm but, it would just have to wait a couple weeks until she turned eighteen and them she could leave this mountain. That wasn't all she had gotten from this last beaten her cheek and eye was bruised, a couple ribs on her left where cracked or thats what she thought and a couple other bruises on her body. She tried to get out of his way like she did every time he came home, but this time no matter what she did she couldn't get away. Shaking her head she took off the baseball cap tossed it on top of the duffel bag showing her bruised eye and cheek with hazel eyes.

"Alright get your arm patched up then you can set up 'camp'" Shaking her head ponytail bobbing she slowly knelt down and sucked in a breath from the pain in her ribs, man it hurt. Unzipping her backpack she pulled out her first aid kit and slowly say down with it in her hand. Opening it up she pulled out the disinfect, holding her arm out she sucked it a breath and gritted her teeth pouring it over the gasp, apparently broken beer bottles were really dirty. After it finely stopped burning she dried it off with her shirt and slowly and carefully started wrapping her arm.

(Hey guys! Ok this will be mature topic, but I would like something fantasy vampire, werewolf....you get the idea oh and please male. It doesn't have to be super long but two to five lines please. Thanks!)
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Post by Spritz Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:06 pm

Vampire? What's the topic plot?
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:27 pm

Yeah sure you can be a Vampire and I was thinking it's like a he stays to make sure nothing happens to her up they seem to hate each other and fight all the time? And then slowly like each other......she goes back down to town and her dad finds her and maybe tried to kill or really hurt her?
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Post by Spritz Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:28 pm

Got it, it may take some time for me to post.
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:03 pm

Alright that fine
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Post by Spritz Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:13 pm

Name- Felix
Gender- Male
Personlity- Felix is seductive, keen and smart. He also is very sly and sneaky, and dead quiet when he hunts. He prefer's human females blood, versus males or animals.
Pic-Mountain Hide away. Vampire-boy

Felix slowly made his way through the woods, his long black hair blowing slighty in the breeze. Suddenly, the scents in the air changed, and he raised his head, sniffing the air slightly.
Human.
Female.
The vampire broke into a run, following the scent much like a dog. He leaped easily over tree's and branches, rising over three feet off the ground every time he did so. His bare feet made no sound on the dirt ground, and soon, he saw the figure he was stalking. His dark figure blended perfectly with the shadows around him, and he leaned up against a tree, the rough bark pressing into his bare arm. He was wearing ripped black jeans, but that was it, with no shirt or shoes.
He watched her, trying to size up if she was prey or not, when he saw that she gingerly say down, holding her side and grimacing. One of her eyes was bruised and the skin around it was yellow and purple, forming a mottled bruise. Felix winced, knowing how those shiners felt, then stepped forward, and out of the shadows, hands thrown casually into his pockets.
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 11:22 am

Hearing footsteps Nicole's head snapped up and she gave a silent sneer seeing a guy walk out and stopped wrapping up her arm and carefully got to her feet wincing a little. "Who are you?" Her tone was even but she tensed up looking at him, he was shirtless just in ripped jeans. A sneer on her lips she looked at him keeping her eyes on him, for the moment ignoring the pain all over her body and wrapping up her arm.

(Blah sorry couldn't think of anything)
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Post by Spritz Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:00 pm

Stopping, the male raised an eyebrow at her haughty sneer, and stopped in his tracks, his hands shoved deep into his pockets. His jaw was set in place, and he leaned back on his heel's slightly, watching the female with a unerving gaze, his black eyes glittering slightly. The scent of her blood was heavy in the air, and his nostrils flared once, pupils threatening to dialate, but he forced himself to calm down. He felt clear poison oozing from the tips of his fangs, and licked it away as soon as it touched his lower lip. His skin was smooth and pale, contrasting greatly with his dark hair and eyes, though a slightly unerving look was about him. Something was odd, something was different. Though he had all of the features of a human, something held him back from blending in completley, and he blinked once, drawing hismelf out of his thoughts. His sharp eyes trained on her wound, and dialated slightly as he saw blood slightly oozing under the bandage. He took in a deep breath, her scent filling his nostrils as he did so, and shuddered with lust slightly. He wanted to taste her. Sink his fangs into the soft flesh of her neck, feel her warm, sweet blood pulse into her mouth with every slowing heartbeat.

"My name is Felix."
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:12 pm

Still sneering at him Nicole stood a little taller standing her ground as she looked at this strange guy, there was something about him that made her want to run and hide but she refused to give into that feeling. His skin was pale like ivory contrasting with his dark shaggy hair and eyes that seemed almost like a endless black, the opposite from Nicole's own sun kissed skin auburn hair and hazel eyes that had bits of bright green in them. Her eyes fallowed his down to the gasp on her arm, blood oozed out from under the wrapping making her mumble something under her breath, eyes snapped back to his face sneering again when he shuddered, what was wrong with him? The warning bells were starting to go off in her mind now but being stubborn Nicole refused to give in and run. "Great, cool name and all that. What are you doing here?"

Even thou her mind told her not too she took a step to him still tense and sneering if it turned into a fight she wasn't going to back down, even with her body in pain. Taking her gaze off of him for a moment she quickly finished wrapping her arm, it needed stitches badly but that would have to wait until she turned eighteen.
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Post by Spritz Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:17 pm

Felix's mind exploded into sweet, heavy crimzen, forcing him to straighten and blink a few times in order to see again. The heavy blanket of lust had started to drape over him, and now he was fighting it with everything he had in him, at least for the time being. He snorted distainfully as the girl spoke again, and narrowed his black eyes, that seemed to go on forever, a deep abiss. They glittered softly, and if you looked closly, small shards of gold were intertwined with the deep ebony shade. Shaking his head slightly, his hands unknowingly curled into loose fists, tensing slightly as she took a step towards him.

Fear, she reeked of it. Fear and curiousity, at the same time.

Felix saw that she was at war with herself, not knowing to stay, or to go. He looked deep into her eyes, his own starting to swirl slightly, and he parted his lips to speak.

"Stay...."
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:36 pm

Nicole looked at the guy still sneering eyes snapping with anger as he still didn't tell her why the hell he was here. She would have crossed her arms over her chest if her ribs weren't in such pain and her arm, she could feel some blood soak through the wrappings getting a soft groan from her, she had to her the bleeding to stop soon. Pushing stray hair out of her face Nicole let out a breath one hand now on her hips. The warning bells ere still going off in her mind, but she ignored them just like she did the pain, the girl wasn't scared of this strange guy. He held her gaze, looking into his eyes she saw his started to swirl slightly.

"Duh Im staying, your leaving" She snapped right back a challenge in her voice now "Just leave alright, I don't want any trouble right now, so just do us both a favor and get out of here"
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Post by Spritz Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:43 pm

Felix's hand swiftly shot out, catching her arm. He didn't grip it tightly, only enough to make her stay where she was, hold her there as he stepped forward. His mind threatened to give in to the temptation of her blood, and he softly, with light fingers, peeled the bandage back enough to see the open, bleeding wound. A silver drop of poison dripped down off of his lower lip, falling to the ground. He raised his head, dark eyes deep and forboding, and parted his pale lips to speak again. "I can help you."

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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:50 pm

Nicole let out a surprised yelp when he suddenly reached out and grabbed her arm "Hey! Let me go!" She tried to yank her arm away but he had a good grip, and pain shot through her ribs make her wince and suck in a hiss of pain. Gritting her teeth she glared at him, he unwrapped the bandage with light fingers so that she barley felt it, but when the air hit the bleeding gasp she sucked in a hiss. Looking up at him she snarled bristling but her eyes widened a little when his pale lips parted again and then she saw it....He had fangs! But then he told her he could help. "How? Your a...your a vampire aren't you, what are you going to do kill me?" There was venom in her tone now, but she was deflating fast from the hick up here with broken ribs and in such pain, the blood loose wasn't helping either.

(Nah your fine)
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Post by Spritz Thu Nov 17, 2011 1:16 pm

(I dont want him to seem like he has magic, but vampire posion can be used for more than one purpose. Do you want him to heal her wound or to try to feed on her? I'll just post a few lines, and you can answer me in the next post. After all, she's you're character.)

Felix stiffened. The blood was slowly trickling out of the wound, the crimzen liquid drawing him in. He felt his own pupils dialate into one of a cats, tall and slit like, and he shook his head, blinking once to clear his vision. Blood lust was growing inside of him, and he tried to push it away. Something was holding him back from tearing into her flesh, but he wasn't sure what it was. At war with himself, he felt more of his poison run down his chin, and shivered slightly, raising her arm and licking away the blood, but making sure not to go too far.
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 1:25 pm

(Hmmmm nah your fine with him. Ummm wanna say he heals her and later on feeds off her?)

He acted like he didn't hear her at all making Nicole shutter looking at him, she gave up on trying to yank her arm free and huffed "Hello?" Her eyes widened when he raised her arm and started licking the blood away "Hey! What are you doing! Stop it!" She snapped and smacked him on the face with her free hand, it wasn't hard, she was just trying to make him stop, it was creepy and weird, he was licking up her blood for gosh sake!
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Post by Spritz Thu Nov 17, 2011 1:31 pm

(Kay. But he wont kill her, dont worry. Thanks for bearing with me.)

As soon as her blood touched his tongue, his mind exploded into a crimzen rush. He wished nothing more than to sink his fangs into her jugular, and suck her dry of all blood. But he had told her he could help her, and that would be doing nothing more than lying. Though he had a shady personality, he never, ever broke a promise. She tried to pull her arm away as he licked at her wound. It would seem disturbing and gross in her eyes, but for him it was just a way of surviving. He wrenched his hand away, forcing himself to calm, his heart racing in his chest. His senses had sharpened from the metalic taste of warm, female blood, and now he could hear her blood rushing through her veins, hear her heart pumping wildly.
"I can help you."
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 1:48 pm

(KK Nah hun your fine )

When he finely let go of her arm Nicole snatched it back cradling it against her chest ash she glared up at him "You were just licking my blood! Do you know how creepy gross and weird that is?" She snapped, her heart was pounding in her chest as she looked up at him, a little pale and light headed now. "How can you help? Besides killing me and sucking me dry" She said dryly, she was taking a big chance trusting this vampire but she was running out of options on what to do.
"What...What are you going to do?" She blinked getting light headed as tears stung the back of her eyes from the pain in her right side, that and her bruised cheek was hurting again.
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Post by Spritz Thu Nov 17, 2011 1:55 pm

The girl's harsh words made Felix narrow his eyes, the pupils slit like as he did so. They seemed to flash with anger, and he stepped forward, roughly grabbing her arm, and pushing her up against one of the trees. Pressing her back to the trunk, he held both of her wrists tightly in his hands, and held them by her sides. His chest was pressed against hers, his face inches from her own. "You dont just stero-type us like that!" He hissed out, his fangs glinting softly. "If you were like this, you would understand!"
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:24 pm

Nicole yelped surprised when he roughly grabbed her arm and pushed her up against a tree, that made her suck in a breath from the pain the shot threw her ribs, it was only worse as he pressed her back against the trunk pinning her wrists at her sides. Sucking in a hiss she had to bit down on her bottom lip so she wouldn't start crying from the pain she was in. His chest was pressed against hers face inches from her own. "I didn't stero-type you! You were the one that just grabbed my arm with out a word and started licking it!" Her breathing was getting shallow and painful "Get off me! I can't breath!" She would have spit in his face but that would only tick him off more and she wanted to breath again.
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Post by Spritz Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:29 pm

With a harsh hiss of anger, he sharply stepped backwards, his face twisted into a mask of anger and revenge. It was pointless, and all so, so stupid. There was no reason to explain to her what went on in his twisted mind, the blood lust that grew to be so strong, to the point he would sink his fangs into his own flesh, just to taste the wonderful warm blood flooding his senses, flowing down his throat. He started suddenly, breaking out of a slight trance, and turned to the girl, his eyes hardening once again, glittering slightly with hatred. "You dont understand. You never will!" His words were sharp and peircing, each one accented and clear. Another drop of poison fell onto his lower lip, running down his chin and dripping onto the dirt below.
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:48 pm

When he stepped back Nicole sucked in air and fell to her knees sucking in pain painfully as her side throbbed in pain, holding her side with her good arm she looked up at him and winced. "Maybe...if you told me I would understand" She watched a drop of something fall from his lower lip down his chin and onto the ground. Nicole squeezed her eyes closed as a wave of nausea and pain came over her "Oh god..." She swallowed hard and fell onto her good side with a groan trying now to keep from throwing up, the angry vampire not the bigger worry for her at the moment.
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Post by Spritz Fri Nov 18, 2011 10:01 am

His movements were swift, and he turned from her, his eyes hard. He now had no intention of staying, not now! As he started to stride away, before he heard the mortal's soft voice. It made him pause for a second, his jaw set tightly, and he turned around. He saw that she was lying on the ground, clutching her side with her hands. Her face was twisted into severe pain, her face bruised. Bright hazel eyes were squeezed shut, and she practically writhed on the ground. Felix couldn't help but step forward, narrowing his dark eyes. "You look terrible." He said, being frank. She probably wouldn't apreciate what he had said, but he was no mood to get into a verbal fight. "You need help you know..." He supposed that feeding off of the deer yesterday was helping his bloodlust cool down a bit, and now he knelt beside her, pulling up her shirt. He wasn't careful about where exactly he touched her, as she was a tool, just a mortal. He also didn't care about what he saw, before running his fingers over her bruised side.
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:41 pm

Eyes squeezed closed Nicole groaned in pain holding her side, almost in the fetal position, her ribs were killing her, making it hard to breath and her stomach was rolling threatening touring up whatever she ate in the morning. Whimpering she creaked open a eye and looked over at the vampire "Heh thanks, I feel worse then I look right now" SHe groaned again as tears spilled over now from the amount of pain she was in, "Yeah well the Doctors is going to have to wait until these two weeks are up" Whimpering she groaned again didn't-couldn't fight back when he lifted up her shirt and started feeling her side making her bring and made a whimpering sound in pain. "Stop...that hurts" She breathed out, her breathing was uneven and getting swallow. "Oh god.....make it stop please" Blackness started to wash over her from the amount of pain that took over her body.
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Post by Spritz Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:51 pm

Felix was stooped down, his hand on her side. He rolled his eyes as she complained, but didn't remove his hand from her bruised flesh. Soon enough, she passed into unconciousness, making everything a hundred times easier. If he had been hungry, he would have sucked her dry within a few moments, but seeing her writhing on the ground, in excruciating pain had changed his mind. For what he was trying to acomplish, it would take a ton of self control, and he hoped that he had it. Picking up her body, he cradled her slightly in his arms, and tilted her head back and to the side, exposing the smooth tan flesh of her neck and throat. Lowering his head, his lips brushed against her skin, before he inserted his fangs into her juglular.
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:04 pm

Nicole passed out from the pain and found herself in sweet blackness. She made a whining sound when he picked her up and tilted her head to the side, she made a softly sound when he sank his fangs into her throat but didn't wake up or anything just stayed in sweet painless backness.


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