White Creek Ranch -- Chapter 1
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(No, she did it once then pretended there was a naomi)
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[ kk thanks ]
~Jayla~
I rinsed off Naomi and grumbled to myself, watching the newbie ride Callie's horse, knowing that probably wouldn't go over well. I rolled my eyes, tacking up Naomi, only to see Brian, whom I had known practically all my life and had a crush on since first grade. I rolled my eyes again, knowing to get over him, considering he wasn't the go-for-the-ladies type, and mounted Naomi and kicked her into a brisk trot, briefly passing the new guy and Anastasia, chuckling to myself at him.
~Naomi~
She watched Cowboy with twinkling eyes as he and his rider came in. She almost didn't respond to Jayla's command, she was lost in his shining black coat. Naomi finally snorted and snapped back to reality, reaching out and tugging on Anastasia's mane angrily when they passed, as she continued to trot into the ring for dressage, jumping, and drafting, where she waited for her next set of commands.
I rinsed off Naomi and grumbled to myself, watching the newbie ride Callie's horse, knowing that probably wouldn't go over well. I rolled my eyes, tacking up Naomi, only to see Brian, whom I had known practically all my life and had a crush on since first grade. I rolled my eyes again, knowing to get over him, considering he wasn't the go-for-the-ladies type, and mounted Naomi and kicked her into a brisk trot, briefly passing the new guy and Anastasia, chuckling to myself at him.
~Naomi~
She watched Cowboy with twinkling eyes as he and his rider came in. She almost didn't respond to Jayla's command, she was lost in his shining black coat. Naomi finally snorted and snapped back to reality, reaching out and tugging on Anastasia's mane angrily when they passed, as she continued to trot into the ring for dressage, jumping, and drafting, where she waited for her next set of commands.
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[im sooooo lost, i havent been on for awhile......can someone fill me in on whats happening?]
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Brian
Blue eyes burning in the air, Brian led aa bronco, Lance on the leading rope, circling round and round in the pasture.
"Careful, boy, don't buck. C'mon, you're doing fine."
Each time Lance bucked, Brian would whip him, then the bronco would scream.
Brian rubbed his free hand through his hair. It was hot today. Very hot.
Looking around, the young man slid of his black muscle shirt, exposing his built figure.
No one was looking, so that was okay.
(He didn't see anyone so yeah, and he's not riding.)
Cowboy
Cowboy, left alone, was grazing in the pasture. He wondered where all the rest of the horses went.
The black stud neighed loudly, hoping another horse would answer.
Nothing.....
(I have no idea what to put for Cowboy, so, yeah.)
Brian
Blue eyes burning in the air, Brian led aa bronco, Lance on the leading rope, circling round and round in the pasture.
"Careful, boy, don't buck. C'mon, you're doing fine."
Each time Lance bucked, Brian would whip him, then the bronco would scream.
Brian rubbed his free hand through his hair. It was hot today. Very hot.
Looking around, the young man slid of his black muscle shirt, exposing his built figure.
No one was looking, so that was okay.
(He didn't see anyone so yeah, and he's not riding.)
Cowboy
Cowboy, left alone, was grazing in the pasture. He wondered where all the rest of the horses went.
The black stud neighed loudly, hoping another horse would answer.
Nothing.....
(I have no idea what to put for Cowboy, so, yeah.)
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Antasia answered, rather bored. She wanted to train! HEr silky mane cascading.\
Callie-
"If you want real result, go gentle and use the right bit." She told him, patting her horse.
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Callie-
"If you want real result, go gentle and use the right bit." She told him, patting her horse.
(I typed a whole paragraph an d it disappeared.. Sorry for the length
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Phero~
I raise my ears at the sound of a new male. Answering his call. I toss my head and prance over to the gelding "Ello" I joked, nipping his side in an attempt to play fight or instigate something.
[ Sorry, this topic is getting a little confusing... idk how to reply lolz ]
I raise my ears at the sound of a new male. Answering his call. I toss my head and prance over to the gelding "Ello" I joked, nipping his side in an attempt to play fight or instigate something.
[ Sorry, this topic is getting a little confusing... idk how to reply lolz ]
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OOc~ He's not new, or a Gelding. He's five and has been there since he was 1.
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[ oh sorry, then scratch those parts ]
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Anastasia-
Her head fell in disappointment, seeing she wouldn't get greeted. The bit annoyed her, but she showed no sign of it.Her ears flicked around, waiting for a trainer who knew what she was training for to come.
Callie-
She patted her horse. "Ask before you ride." Callie said, leaning on her horse.
Anastasia-
She nibbled on her rider, shifting weight so she could support her better.
Her head fell in disappointment, seeing she wouldn't get greeted. The bit annoyed her, but she showed no sign of it.Her ears flicked around, waiting for a trainer who knew what she was training for to come.
Callie-
She patted her horse. "Ask before you ride." Callie said, leaning on her horse.
Anastasia-
She nibbled on her rider, shifting weight so she could support her better.
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OOC~ Okay.
Cowboy
Cowboy was startled by someone nipping his rump. Then, he noticed who it was.
"Oh, hey Phero. I was wondering where everybody was."
Cowboy turned to the horse and nodded his head.
Cowboy was startled by someone nipping his rump. Then, he noticed who it was.
"Oh, hey Phero. I was wondering where everybody was."
Cowboy turned to the horse and nodded his head.
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[ o___O wow this is getting confusing. how bout we start over? D: i know it'd be erasing all we've already done, but it might help straighten things out ]
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OOC~ Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
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[ Definately ]
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[ all right, even if the other two say no, the majority will rule. Let's start over. Who wants to start? ]
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[ Idc lol ]
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[ -shrug- I'll start, then ]
[ i got it peace xD but ty anyways ]
~Jayla~
I smiled and leaned against the old, beat-up pickup truck, that used to be a beautifully colored blue, but was now more of a toothpaste-aqua-green. I loved that truck and it had been my father's, and i wasn't planning on getting rid of it anytime soon. I watched as a new guy pulled up with his two horses. I wondered if he was the new trainer, and decided I'd be friendly and go up to him and introduce myself, seeing as I was the rightful heir to White Creek, after my father passed on. I smiled gently as I walked over to him and said in my thick country accent, "Howdy. I'm Jayla. I don't suppose you're the new trainer?"
~Becca~
She snorted and cantered around the pastures, her black mane and tail splayed out like a paintbrush painting the wind and air. She bucked playfully and galloped over to Jayla once she saw her. Becca stopped halfway, though, when she realized her owner was talking to another one of those stupid two-legged males. Becca rolled her eyes and whinnied playfully, hoping another horse was in the mood to play with her.
~Naomi~
She snorted and stomped her hoof, narrowly avoiding a mud puddle, as she walked slowly over to Jayla, not caring that she was busy talking to another one of her kinfolk. Naomi nickered gently and began to graze by the fence, and once she was full, put her head over the fence. Her broad freisian neck and head hung right in between the new guy's face and Jayla, but Naomi only managed to be pushed away and hear Jayla apologize to the guy for her actions. Naomi stomped her hoof angrily, not to keen on being ignored.
I smiled and leaned against the old, beat-up pickup truck, that used to be a beautifully colored blue, but was now more of a toothpaste-aqua-green. I loved that truck and it had been my father's, and i wasn't planning on getting rid of it anytime soon. I watched as a new guy pulled up with his two horses. I wondered if he was the new trainer, and decided I'd be friendly and go up to him and introduce myself, seeing as I was the rightful heir to White Creek, after my father passed on. I smiled gently as I walked over to him and said in my thick country accent, "Howdy. I'm Jayla. I don't suppose you're the new trainer?"
~Becca~
She snorted and cantered around the pastures, her black mane and tail splayed out like a paintbrush painting the wind and air. She bucked playfully and galloped over to Jayla once she saw her. Becca stopped halfway, though, when she realized her owner was talking to another one of those stupid two-legged males. Becca rolled her eyes and whinnied playfully, hoping another horse was in the mood to play with her.
~Naomi~
She snorted and stomped her hoof, narrowly avoiding a mud puddle, as she walked slowly over to Jayla, not caring that she was busy talking to another one of her kinfolk. Naomi nickered gently and began to graze by the fence, and once she was full, put her head over the fence. Her broad freisian neck and head hung right in between the new guy's face and Jayla, but Naomi only managed to be pushed away and hear Jayla apologize to the guy for her actions. Naomi stomped her hoof angrily, not to keen on being ignored.
[ i got it peace xD but ty anyways ]
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Anastasia-
Anastasia reared, fore legs striking the air with force. Silver mane flew back in the wind, tail folded on the ground as she got ready to run. The young mare lurched forward, rear hooves kicking back dirt as she took off. Anastasia let out a whinny, tail high like war banner. It was unexplainable why she was so happy, but it happened. One of the trainers would come out to get her soon, she hoped. The maredid not like training, but liked the touch of the female trainers. But mostly got males because she was so rowdy and rough. Her wild brown eyes sparkled as she skid to a stop inches from the fence, dirt splashing up like a brown wave.
Callie-
Callie watched her horse, arms crossed over the fence and head resting on them. "Anastasia!" She called, her horse perking to attention and trotting over quickly. "Hey girl." Callie cooed, feeding her an apple. "Wish I could ride you, but Brian or one of the others should be coming to get you soon. Anastasia sighed, nuzzling her rider.
Anastasia-
Anastasia reared, fore legs striking the air with force. Silver mane flew back in the wind, tail folded on the ground as she got ready to run. The young mare lurched forward, rear hooves kicking back dirt as she took off. Anastasia let out a whinny, tail high like war banner. It was unexplainable why she was so happy, but it happened. One of the trainers would come out to get her soon, she hoped. The maredid not like training, but liked the touch of the female trainers. But mostly got males because she was so rowdy and rough. Her wild brown eyes sparkled as she skid to a stop inches from the fence, dirt splashing up like a brown wave.
Callie-
Callie watched her horse, arms crossed over the fence and head resting on them. "Anastasia!" She called, her horse perking to attention and trotting over quickly. "Hey girl." Callie cooed, feeding her an apple. "Wish I could ride you, but Brian or one of the others should be coming to get you soon. Anastasia sighed, nuzzling her rider.
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OOC~ No prob!
Brian
Blue eyes burning into the southern air, Brian stared at the horses in the pasture.
he was mostly watching his black Fresian/Mustang mix, Cowboy.
Brian ran his burly, blistered fingers through his long brown hair.
Brian was a big man, weighing 300 lbs. and 6' 4" in height, and he was only 20.
Walking around the pasture fence to where his ranch co-worker Callie stood.
"Want me to take her?"
He pointed at Callie's horse, Anastasia. Brian was one of thr ranch's trainers.
He had a soft spot in his heart for horses, though it didn't seem he had a soft spot for anything.
Brian rubbed Anatasia's nose and sractched behind her ears. This mare was a pretty horse, no doubt about it, but
she was hard to handle. You had to have a soft hand with her, or she would go crazy.
Cowboy
Cowboy strutted in the big pasture, weaving through the other horses. His tail was flagged high.
Some mares snorted at him, others flashed him flirtly smiles. He didn't care, he had his eye on just one mare
herself, Naomi.
Cowboy spotted her and trotted to the place behind her, nipped her rump flirtingly, then came up back beside her.
Then he noticed that she was by her owner, Jayla, and a new guy.
Jayla was his owner's, Brian's, crush for sooooooo long, it was pathetic. Cowboy watched the new guy sternly, he
didn't even know and didn't like him already.
"Who is he?"
Cowboy's gaze didn't come off the man, but he leaned towards Naomi.
Blue eyes burning into the southern air, Brian stared at the horses in the pasture.
he was mostly watching his black Fresian/Mustang mix, Cowboy.
Brian ran his burly, blistered fingers through his long brown hair.
Brian was a big man, weighing 300 lbs. and 6' 4" in height, and he was only 20.
Walking around the pasture fence to where his ranch co-worker Callie stood.
"Want me to take her?"
He pointed at Callie's horse, Anastasia. Brian was one of thr ranch's trainers.
He had a soft spot in his heart for horses, though it didn't seem he had a soft spot for anything.
Brian rubbed Anatasia's nose and sractched behind her ears. This mare was a pretty horse, no doubt about it, but
she was hard to handle. You had to have a soft hand with her, or she would go crazy.
Cowboy
Cowboy strutted in the big pasture, weaving through the other horses. His tail was flagged high.
Some mares snorted at him, others flashed him flirtly smiles. He didn't care, he had his eye on just one mare
herself, Naomi.
Cowboy spotted her and trotted to the place behind her, nipped her rump flirtingly, then came up back beside her.
Then he noticed that she was by her owner, Jayla, and a new guy.
Jayla was his owner's, Brian's, crush for sooooooo long, it was pathetic. Cowboy watched the new guy sternly, he
didn't even know and didn't like him already.
"Who is he?"
Cowboy's gaze didn't come off the man, but he leaned towards Naomi.
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Jensen~
I open the door to my silver Ford truck, stepping out into the grey atmosphere. It had just rained, and the evidence polluted everything in sight. A rich accent greeted me as I reached into my car and grabbed two halters and leads. "Hey, I'm Jensen Ackles, the new trainer" I noticed she was slightly unimpressed, but ignored it and opened the back of my horse trailer. Greeted by two geldings, one with ice blue eyes and the other with dark brown ones. They were extremely pleased to see me and excited to explore, but they didn't push to get out. I slip the halters on easily, like I had hundreds of times before. Once on, the horses pushed out into the damp smelling words, eyes wide and ears up. Tying them to the trailer, I close the door and cross my arms over my chest. "I'm assuming you own this ranch?"
Phero~
My nose found the side of Hildago and I nip him roughly, grinning wide with mischief. I loved to pick on him, even if we were like brothers. We had grown up together, the three of us. Playing and riding together without a care in the world. This had all changed recently and Jensen was stressed. Something stupid like money or housing. I then felt the truck stopped and prick my ears up, tossing my mane in excitement to jump out into the world once more.
Hildago~
A loud whinny escaped my maw as he nipped me and I glare at him. He was so childish. I lower my head and smell the trailer out of boredom. I grew up with these two crazy bachelors, always looking for ways to get in trouble. Jensen was like the perfect medium however, like Phero and I both. Serious and cocky. The truck stops and unlike Phero, I barely react. However, as the doors swing open, I quickly greet Jensen at the door and then trail my eyes to the wet world around us.
I open the door to my silver Ford truck, stepping out into the grey atmosphere. It had just rained, and the evidence polluted everything in sight. A rich accent greeted me as I reached into my car and grabbed two halters and leads. "Hey, I'm Jensen Ackles, the new trainer" I noticed she was slightly unimpressed, but ignored it and opened the back of my horse trailer. Greeted by two geldings, one with ice blue eyes and the other with dark brown ones. They were extremely pleased to see me and excited to explore, but they didn't push to get out. I slip the halters on easily, like I had hundreds of times before. Once on, the horses pushed out into the damp smelling words, eyes wide and ears up. Tying them to the trailer, I close the door and cross my arms over my chest. "I'm assuming you own this ranch?"
Phero~
My nose found the side of Hildago and I nip him roughly, grinning wide with mischief. I loved to pick on him, even if we were like brothers. We had grown up together, the three of us. Playing and riding together without a care in the world. This had all changed recently and Jensen was stressed. Something stupid like money or housing. I then felt the truck stopped and prick my ears up, tossing my mane in excitement to jump out into the world once more.
Hildago~
A loud whinny escaped my maw as he nipped me and I glare at him. He was so childish. I lower my head and smell the trailer out of boredom. I grew up with these two crazy bachelors, always looking for ways to get in trouble. Jensen was like the perfect medium however, like Phero and I both. Serious and cocky. The truck stops and unlike Phero, I barely react. However, as the doors swing open, I quickly greet Jensen at the door and then trail my eyes to the wet world around us.
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~Jayla~
I nodded and watched him unload his two geldings. "Fine horses ya got there," I commented and then watched him lean against the fence as if he owned the place. I cocked an eyebrow momentarily, then decided it best to answer his question. "No. Well, not yet at least. My papa owns this ranch, but as soon as he's gone, it's mine." I smiled as I saw Cowboy come up to Naomi and I pet his nose gently, "Hey there," I said, then turned back to Jensen, leaning against the fence, one elbow perched on it, before asking, "Why you askin'?" Suddenly, remembering my manners, I said, "You can put your horses in the pasture, if ya'd like."
~Naomi~
She snorted and turned her head towards her backside, only to realize nobody was there. Who had nipped her? Naomi rolled her eyes when she realized it was Cowboy, who had come up beside her. Naomi shrugged gently and watched the two of them talk, the sound of Jayla's thick country accent soothing to her. That was the kind of accent a real cowgirl owned. "I don't know," Naomi replied, turning her head to Cowboy. "Why do you wanna know?"
~Becca~
She snorted and realized that Anastasia was also romping around the pastures, so she picked up her speed and cantered over to her, tugging gently on Anastasia's mane. Becca whinnied playfully and bucked, only to see out of the corner of her eye two new arrivals. Well, three actually, but she never counted two-legs. Becca neighed loudly to them and stood where she was, waiting to see if they'd respond to her welcoming greeting.
I nodded and watched him unload his two geldings. "Fine horses ya got there," I commented and then watched him lean against the fence as if he owned the place. I cocked an eyebrow momentarily, then decided it best to answer his question. "No. Well, not yet at least. My papa owns this ranch, but as soon as he's gone, it's mine." I smiled as I saw Cowboy come up to Naomi and I pet his nose gently, "Hey there," I said, then turned back to Jensen, leaning against the fence, one elbow perched on it, before asking, "Why you askin'?" Suddenly, remembering my manners, I said, "You can put your horses in the pasture, if ya'd like."
~Naomi~
She snorted and turned her head towards her backside, only to realize nobody was there. Who had nipped her? Naomi rolled her eyes when she realized it was Cowboy, who had come up beside her. Naomi shrugged gently and watched the two of them talk, the sound of Jayla's thick country accent soothing to her. That was the kind of accent a real cowgirl owned. "I don't know," Naomi replied, turning her head to Cowboy. "Why do you wanna know?"
~Becca~
She snorted and realized that Anastasia was also romping around the pastures, so she picked up her speed and cantered over to her, tugging gently on Anastasia's mane. Becca whinnied playfully and bucked, only to see out of the corner of her eye two new arrivals. Well, three actually, but she never counted two-legs. Becca neighed loudly to them and stood where she was, waiting to see if they'd respond to her welcoming greeting.
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Cowboy
Cowboy snorted at Namoi's answer.
"Don't act stupid, I've told you Brian likes Jayla."
He gave the new two-leg and threatening snort. Then, turned to Jayla and nuzzled her hand.
"Naomi, just warn me beforehand, are you in one of those moods today?"
Cowboy looked at his crush and smiled, showing off his teeth.
Cowboy snorted at Namoi's answer.
"Don't act stupid, I've told you Brian likes Jayla."
He gave the new two-leg and threatening snort. Then, turned to Jayla and nuzzled her hand.
"Naomi, just warn me beforehand, are you in one of those moods today?"
Cowboy looked at his crush and smiled, showing off his teeth.
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Jensen~
"Just wonderin'" I commented and heard her comment. Walking around her and opened the gate, I take the halters and leads off Hildago and Phero, allowing them freedom.
Phero~
I quickly respond to the mare who had called, my neigh loud and obviously calling for her to come out from where she was.
Hildago~
I roll my eyes at Phero and the woman. Cocky little jerks. Snorting at my freedom, I turn and sprint into the pasture.
[ Sorry ]
"Just wonderin'" I commented and heard her comment. Walking around her and opened the gate, I take the halters and leads off Hildago and Phero, allowing them freedom.
Phero~
I quickly respond to the mare who had called, my neigh loud and obviously calling for her to come out from where she was.
Hildago~
I roll my eyes at Phero and the woman. Cocky little jerks. Snorting at my freedom, I turn and sprint into the pasture.
[ Sorry ]
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[ gonna take a break from this topic for tonight. gotta let my mind rest xD haha ]
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