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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:34 pm

( sure )

I whinny sadly as I watched my human leave me to get ready to go to the doctor's, which I knew both she and I dreaded.

(What's the mom's name again?)

She sang to herself in the shower, combing her fingers through her hair until the rest of the conditioner was out. Afterwards, she turned off the water and dried off, putting on some jeans and a snuggly-fitting T-shirt. She placed some tennies on her feet and laced them up before walking downstairs to see her daughter wearing clothes that seemed fit for yoga. She gave a disapproving look and said, "You've been acting strange lately, Allie. I think maybe you're getting sick." She stepped closer to her daughter and felt her forehead. "You need to spend less time around that horse of yours. Now let's go," She said, collecting her cell phone, purse, and keys.

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:38 pm

(Her name is Anna, thanks)
I sigh, pushing my mother away from me. "Mom, do I have to go? I am feeling a bit sick-" I say, before realizing how stupid that sounded. I could feel another wave of nautia(sp?) wash over me as I sat down in the car, in the back seat, not my usual place to sit. I cross my arms over my chest and scowl, waiting for mom to join me in the car.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:48 pm

( okay thanks and you're welcome )

Anna frowned as her daughter pushed her away and she scowled, but before she had time to respond to her daughter's question, she was already sitting in the car, in the backseat. Worried for her daughter, Anna put the keys into the ignition and pulled out of the driveway, she said, "I think I may have them do an extra thorough exam on you today. You've been acting very strange lately." Anna sighed and glanced at her daughter through the rearview mirror. "Does your stomach hurt? Do you have a headache?"

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:50 pm

I turned away. "Leave me alone." I say softly, curled up in the backseat. "And no, I dont feel sick!" I lied, though I felt like throwing up any second. I watch the scenery fly by, and I knew that with each passing second, the time was getting closer. Mom would know soon, and I almost vomited just thinking about it. Her heart would be broken.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:56 pm

Anna sighed, and fifteen minutes later, pulled into the doctor's building parking lot. She got out of the car and tossed the keys in her purse, which she strung over her shoulder. She opened the door for her daughter and said, "Come on, hoeny. Let's get going. The sooner we find out what's wrong the sooner we can help you get better." She gave her daughter a weak smile.

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:59 pm

"There is NOTHING WRONG!" I scream, and refuse to leave the car, my arms crossed over my chest, frowning at the back of the drivers seat. "Give me a minute, and you can go and start to get your checkup done, ok?" I plead, not wanting my mother in the room when the doctor found out my secret. I sighed, and glared at my shoes.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:06 pm

Anna frowned and sighed. "There is something wrong, and your appointment is first. Now get out of the car right now before I ban you from seeing that horse for the rest of the week!" Anna pointed angrily to the ground beside her. "I will sit outside in the waiting room if you want me to, but you're going into the building right now if I have to drag you there!"

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:12 pm

I reluctantly get out of the car, and walk sulkily up to the dull grey building, my shoelaces dragging on the ground, as I had not tied them. I open the door and slip though, and the receptionist looks down her pointy nose at me. I walk up to the desk. "You are?" She says in a nazel voice, firing up her computer. I sighed. "Allie Hamelton." I say, tapping my fingers on the desk impatinetly. "Alright, Doctor Alex should be right out." I groan. It just had to be a guy doctor.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:15 pm

Anna nodded and motioned for her daugther to sit down. She glanced at her daughter once more before seeing the tall, broad-shouldered doctor walk out of another room only about ten minutes later, and she walked up to him. "Hello, I'm Anna Hamelton. My daughter has an appointment right now with you, and I was wondering if you could make sure you did an extra thorough exam on her. She's been acting weird for almost two months now, and I'd like to figure out what's going on." Anna smiled and walked off, patting her daughter's shoulder. "Go on in, he's right there." She pointed to Doctor Alex and then took her seat in the waiting room.

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:21 pm

The doctor smiled a chilling smile, that unerved me to the bone. "I will be extra thorough with her-" He says, and I walk into the white sterile room, my hands shaking slightly. "Sit down," He says, pointing to a paper wrapped table. I sit, my legs swinging nervously. He then goes through the usuals, checking my heart, shining a stupid light in my eyes, knocking on my knees with a miniature hammer. He finishes, and I sigh in relief. "Miss Hamalton,when did you last menstruate?" He asks. I frown at him. "What?" I say, and I was not about to share that with a guy. "Your period. When?" "Last week-" I lied. He scoffed. "When?" He asks again. "2 months ago." I say, and he asks me other questions, then asks me to please lay down. He then pulls up my shirt over the belly, and pushes on my swollen abdomen. "Ouch!"
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:24 pm

[ double plot twist here o.O OOOOH ]

Anna sat in the waiting room, her legs crossed and her hands clasped neatly in her lap, fingering the edge of her T-shirt, wondering what the verdict on her daughter was going to be, and thoughts swirled around her head, but none of them lead to pregnancy -- no, never.

-----{mind playing Kyle? I was thinking Kyle could kidnap Diablo while they're away o___o that's what i mean by 'double plot twist'}----

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:30 pm

Kyle-
I sneak into the empty barn, to find Diablo fast asleep. I quickly inject him with the medicine, and I see his head droop, and he falls limp, asleep.

Allie-
He looks at me solemly. "Let me take a Ultrasound." He says, then smooths a bunch of gross gel on my stomach, then holds a contraption on top. I then see my baby on the screen. "Miss Hamelton, you are pregnant." He says, then calls in my mother.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:35 pm

[ xD thank you ]

Diablo snorted and nearly woke up when he felt a pinprick in his skin, but as soon as his eyes fluttered open, they were closed again in a matter of seconds.

Anna heard Dr. Alex call her in and she walked in to see the ultrasound hooked up on her daughter, and a small moving picture in black and white on the screen. Anna felt her heart stop as she stared at her daughter, then regained herself and looked at Dr. Alex pleasantly. "You called?" She asked, taking a seat in an empty chair.

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:40 pm

"Miss Hamelton, your daughter is pregnant," He says, his voice layered with face sorrow. I sat up and yanked the ultrasound off, using the papertoweling to wipe off my stomach. I then jump off of the table, and race out of the room, and out onto the street, and I ponder standing in the middle,ending this horrible nightmare at once.

Kyle-
Me and the guys load the drugged horse into the trailer, then take off, leaving a note in his stall. Come Find Us. I wanted her to come, I wanted to catch her again unawares.

(He has a criminal record)
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:47 pm

Anna was about to respond when she saw her daughter run out of the room. "I'm sorry, please excuse me. I'll come back in a second, and pay. I have a few questions, as well." Anna ran out of the room, leaving her purse on the chair. She saw her daughter in the middle of the street and yanked her daughter out of the way, holding both of her arms and looking at her. "Sweetie, what happened?" Anna's first reaction was anger, but she looked and saw the fear in her daughter's eyes. "I just want to know what happened." Anna sighed and looked around. "I was a year younger than you, actually, when I first got pregnant. If you're afraid I'm going to make you get an abortion, I promise i won't. My mother did that to me, and I still regret her decision to this day. I just need to know what happened to you."

My head wavered slightly in the trailer, and my eyes fluttered open as I hit my head, rather hard, against the side of it. My vision was blurred, but I could definately tell this wasn't home. I immediately paniced and tried to get to my feet, but fell, as my body fought to keep conscienceness, but I eventually faded back into the oblivion.


[ hope you don't mind the history check i added to Anna ]

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:50 pm

(nope:) )

"It was Kyle!" I gasped, and fell into her arms, sobbing. "The, the old owner, of Diablo!" I sobbed, my face burried into her shirt. Tears streamed down my cheeks and I gasped for air, the shame washing over my like a wave of cold water.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:55 pm

I snorted and shook my head, waking up again only a few minutes later. My head pounded and I neighed loudly, wondering where the heck I was. I smelled around, but I didn't smell Allie. Alert once more, I pulled my head up and whinnied desperately, wondering where my girl was.

---+

Anna stiffened and hugged her daughter close, rocking her back and forth. "You mean he did it to you without permission?" Anna's anger at Allie was replaced by anger at Kyle. She had always known he was a shady character, but raping a 15-year-old girl? What kind of evil bastard was he? Anna sighed and hugged her daughter closely, kissing the top of her head. "We need to go back in there and see if Doctor Alex can get proof it was Kyle. That way, we can take legal action against him." Anna said, but made no move to make her daughter go back inside just yet.

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:57 pm

"No, mom, I let him!" I say sarcastically. "He raped me! Twice!" I say, and walk back inside, me eyes still red and my nose running. I wait for my mother, wanting anything I could done against him.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:00 pm

Anna sighed but allowed her daughter to snap at her. Anna walked back into the room with Doctor Alex and sighed, "Is there any way to have evidence whom the father is?" Anna rummaged through her purse and got a tissue out and handed it to her daughter.


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[okay, switching back to 1st person permanently on diablo xD]
I snorted and stood up, my legs shaky, and rammed into one side of the trailer, only to fall down again. I neighed loudly and kicked the cold flooring agitatedly.

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:05 pm

"We could run a few tests.." He says, shaking his head. "Pricy though." I take the tissue and wipe my face, then throw it into the white trash can. I didnt care about tests. I just wanted to go by Diablo.

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I park the truck and kick the side of the trailer. "Shut up mule!" I yell, then look at my surroundings.
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:07 pm

Anna sighed and looked at her daughter. "What price range are we talking about?"

I heard Kyle's voice and froze, then fought with renewed vigor. I snorted and got to my feet, still rather wabbly, and pounded against the doors of the trailer, desperately trying to break free. I had to get back to my human!

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Post by Spritz Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:12 pm

"Were talking at least a few thousand-" He breaks off, looking at mom. I shake my head. "No mom. Its ok."

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I ignore the brute and sling my bag over my shoulder, and dump it in the moble home.

(Soory, im tired.)
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Post by Guest Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:12 am

Anna looked at her daughter and pat her shoulder, "I'm not going to let him get away with what he did to you, honey," she said lowly so that only Allie could hear. Then she turned back to Doctor Alex. "I would like the tests done." Anna sighed. She might have to sell a few unneeded items to be able to catch up for the payments she was about to make.

I snorted angrily and realized he wasn't going to come and get me free. I whined angrily and rested my head against the wall of the trailer and pawed the ground.

[ it's okay ]

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Post by Spritz Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:06 am

"No, mom." I say, then turn on my heel and exit the room, walking past the stunned secretary. I glared at her. "What!?" I snapped, and pushed the glass door open, and unlocked the car, sliding into the back seat. I tapped my fingers on the window as I thought about what had just happened. I needed to see Diablo. I was going to leave this wreched place behind, and Kyle would never see his precious baby. Never. I scowled as I thought about the brute, how he had made my life and Diablos life a miserable wreck. Almost like he had been planning it. I then exit the car, not wanting to wait for my mother. I jog down the street, towards the house. It was going to be about a 3 or 4 mile walk, but I knew I could make it. I needed to see Diablo.
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Post by Guest Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:37 am

Anna sighed and began to write a check, then handed it Doctor Alx. "Thank you..." she said before getting in the car and following after her daughter, seeing her jog down the street, anna got in her car and began to drive slowly, stopping by Allie. "Come on, get in the car. We'll go home."

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