Re: Shadow, A stallion on the dark side....

[Death Rules]

Eagle
I laughed

[°∞ßlûē•ßãbÿ•Døll∞°]

Demon~
I growled,i reared and stomed the ground,i snorted in his face and bit his neck,telling him to go.

[Guest]

~Bahadrah
I watch as her gleaming coat shines in the sunlight, i begin to stare akwardly. I shake my head a blink a few times, i couldn't help myself. I stared back at the annoying stallion, as my emotion changed immediataly (sp). I thrashed out a warning strike, with my hoove barely missing his weak, skinny legs. He's got nothing on us. I bumped my side into Demons playfully as i laughed, this was kind of fun.

[Faye]

Demonatta~
I glare at Bahahdrah,this was no time for fun and games.While they were fooling the stallion before us could have easily struck one of them,but he was too stupid to act quicky.I position myself in front of the immature ones,watching Eagle`s every move.He he made one wrong step,he would be dead.Within seconds.A frustrated snort erupted from Demonatta`s nostrils,and she lunged forward snapping her jaws in fury at him drawing blood.Then the mare pulled back to wait for the young stud`s response.

[Death Rules]

Eagle
I growled and reared as I came back down on her withers hearing a popping sound, I bit at her neck drawing blood,"You made such a bad move." I said angrily, I had my ears pinned and lashed out at her driving my sharp front hooves on her knee's

[Guest]

~Bahadrah
I was so furious with the stupid stallion.I reared up, staying in the air for a few seconds, with my legs flying above the stallions head. They come down on his head, forcing his head downward. I strike at his knee, knocking out one of them. I stepped back and spat in his face. I nuzzle Demonatta trying to get her to her feet. "Are you alright?" i ask?

[Death Rules]

Eagle
I growled and got up like nothing happened and hit him in the rump sending him to the ground

[Faye]

Demonatta~

Furiously roaring, the mare rolled to her feet. She lurched into a charge and sprung forward, throwing himself into the stallion and knocking him to the ground. A cackle escaped her maw as she reared and brought a hoof down on the male's neck. She started to brutally maul the stallion.

[Death Rules]

Eagle
I clawed at her stomach

[Guest]

~Bahadrah
I turned my rump to him. I started bucking wildly, repeatly smashing him in his ribs. I bolt in a gallop, circle behind the mares, so i am on the other side of the stallion. I bite at his ear, making blood spurt out.

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Eagle
I started to bite his hocks drawing blood as I kicked at him in the face

[Faye]

Demonatta~
"Stupid move"I cackled.With a swift movement of my hoof I shoved him over so he was lying on his side.She reared churning the air with her ash colored fore-legs and came down on the stallions cannon bone with her full weight.A deafening crack rang through the air.

[°∞ßlûē•ßãbÿ•Døll∞°]

Demon~
"I told you if you lay one hoof on her id kill you"i said,i dodged at him and slammed him into the ground,i striked at his neck crushin bones,i heard a few snaps and i grinned in happiness.I reared and slammed my poerful hoofs on his jaws,braking every bone in his jaw.I smiled,she roared and lunged at the stallion,i bit his neck drawing blood,"Dont touch her,.......kill me not her"i said and snorted.

[Death Rules]

Eagle
I laughed

[°∞ßlûē•ßãbÿ•Døll∞°]

Demon~
I looked at my sister,"Im not affraid of dieingim only affraid of you dieing"she said,she knew her sister wouldnt die but she couldnt take any chances.

[Guest]

~Bahadrah
I reared up, as gravity took me down so my hooves landed square on his face. I spat in his face and walked away, leaving the broken horse. There was no way he could not feel any pain, no horse could be invincable.

[Death Rules]

Eagle
I got up and bit her in the wind pipe and ripping it out, her wind pipe was hanging from my mouth

[°∞ßlûē•ßãbÿ•Døll∞°]

Demon~
I dodged him,but he still ripped some of my skin off,i lunged at him,sending him into a tree.

[Death Rules]

Eagle
I pushed myself away from the tree and pined my ears back

[Faye]

Demonatta~ (Gate to Hell,could you be a bit more realistic please..like having your horse feel pain)

Rolling her topaz eyes, she galloped to the side of Eagle and whirled around so her hind hoof caught the studs leg and dragged him forward a bit before she flung out her other leg and thrust it at the stallion's jaw, aiming to at least crack a bone or something of the sort. Lunging forward, she rammed her head into the stud's shoulder, came up to her full height, and forced his hooves down on the soft, vulnerable area on his flank.

[Guest]

Shadow / Shaiman ~ I looked on as they fought, shaking my head, it was clear to me now that these horses werepure evil, down to the deepest parts of their hearts, where as I wasn't really that dark at all..... the mare Demonatta was nothing but a snarling beast, a Bahdrah well..... was like her little puppy, was also a nasty peice of work.. I looked at Riley and asked... " Will you come with me...? " My newly white coat glistening in the sun... I wanted to leave this horible place, that had at one point be a quiet clearing, but was now stained with blood...... I would not leave without her...

( Hey guys, can you give me some pointers on how to improve my writing... Please be completely honest..If it is negative I don't care, I will take it and work on it... I just need to know what I have to work on....Thank you...)

[Saviour]

[hey guys, sorry I havent been on cuz of school but im back, so what happened?]

[Faye]

(In a fight with Eagle,Gate to Hell`s horse.Shadow went to the light and thats about it.)

[Saviour]

[oh ok thnx]

Thinning Blood
I snort and toss my head, getting slightly riled up by the fight. I try hard to keep settled but wander out into the open, eyeing the fighting couple all the while. I flick my perfect forelock out of my gorgeous face and watch as the two go at it.
[sorry for the shortness I dont know what to say]

[Faye]

Demonatta~
My eyes left the ememy for a mere moment to glare at the stallion that finally emerged from the forest.With a flick of my tail I dismissed Eagle,and allowed him to tend to his wounds while I inspected the new stud.He was fit,strong and had a nice face,but was he dark?I began to circle him,getting closer every time my hooves hit the earth."So what bring you here,stranger?"The ash colored mare asked eyeing him curiously.

(Thats fine,we all come to a point where we don`t know what to write.)

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