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Post by • Echo Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:00 pm

~ Heav ~

I nod.
"He's the one that left me," I say, shaking my mane. I shift uneasily, sighing as I look over at the other herd members, anywhere but at him. I lower my head, pawing at the grass, but find I'm not really hungry. I flcik my tail, thinking about everything that had happened in my life. I silently concluded that finding Claude and deciding to join his herd, for however long that may be, was one of the better, if not the best, choice I had chosen.
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Post by Guest Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:38 am

(Um ok ima just say i left...and now im back and i have the foal and yea..ok...)

I slowly walked in, i looked back behind my shoulder, smiling at the dark bay colt that walked behind me.I walked to Claude and smiled.
"Well would you like to meet your son?"
I shrugged slightly and smiled.

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http://www.kbarkarabians.com/images/Delight%27s%20colt%20head%20on%203.jpg

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Post by Guest Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:18 pm

(AAWWWWW what an adorable picture XD)

Claude: I smile at Heav. It made me happy to see her start to slowly open up and talk. I enjoyed having her and the others in my herd. It was a good bunch to be around. I swing my head around and look at my son, I reach out and sniff at the air, smelling him. I grin and turn around to face him, lowering my head down to his level I touch my nose to his forehead and nuzzle him. "He is a strong little fella" I say smiling wider.

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Post by Guest Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:26 am

I smiled and looked to my side, gazing at Claude and I's creation, i still was bewildered by the fact i had his foal. I shook my head and looked at Claude.
"Well lets find some names,these sound ridiculous but i was thinking
Clover
Clever
Toxic
Rala
Ramzi
eh thats all i got.." i laughed slightly rolling my eyes.

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Post by • Echo Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:59 pm

~ Heav~

I smile small to myself, watching them and the new colt. I toss mt head slightly, exhaling loudly, as I turn to give them a little more privacy so Claude could see his son.
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Post by Guest Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:09 pm

Claude: "Hmmm..." I say thoughtfully. "How about Ramzi." I smile and look at both mares then back to my son.

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Post by Guest Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:18 pm

I smiled wide and nuzzled little Ramzi.
"Sounds great!"


(do you want to play him? your a better rper than me. Razz)

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Post by Guest Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:28 pm

(sure lol, thanks Very Happy. you are too)

Claude: I grin as little Ramzi bucked a little bit then took off running. Or I should say, tried to run. He stumbled a couple times but never fell. "He is so funny to watch!"

Ramzi: I come back and nuzzl my mother then tilt my head and walk timidly up to Heav. I extend my nose and sniff curiously.

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Post by Guest Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:49 pm

I watched him run around playfully and energetically. I smiled slightly and then focused my attention on Claude. I stared for a moment, then realized what i was doing and stopped.

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Post by • Echo Mon Mar 15, 2010 4:13 pm

~ Heav~

I hesitait when he came up to me, glancing back at CLaude and Darcy. I lower my head to him, exhaling softly, as I took in his scent, staying stilla nd quiet to not scare him.
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Post by Guest Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:08 pm

Ramzi: Within me a fierce boldness burned and I stuck out my chest and arched my little neck. I prance towards her, lifting my skinny toothpick like legs that were still a tad wobbily, high. The little peach fuzz mane of mine swaying like grass in the wind, my fuzzed out tail sticking out like I had been pumped with static electricity. I stop infront of Heav and squeal loudly and bucked lightly infront of her. Then I toss my small head and grin up at her, nickering softly, I reach out again and sniff her.

Claude: I laugh lightly but watch my son's antics closely. He reminded me so much of myself. I sigh and turn to walk up the slope to over look the area. Once there I raise my head up high along with my tail. I rear up, tucking my head to my chest, and let out a challenging scream. Pawing savagely at the sky before thudding to the ground and letting out a squeal of satisfaction. Deciding now that I would not choose a lead mare. But the mare's themselves would choose. For it was a mares business.

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Post by • Echo Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:10 pm

~ Heav~

I snort softly, keeping my head low as I look at him with large, dark eyes. I breath in and out deeply, taking in his scent and storing it in a section of my brain, where I would always be able to remember it. I raise my head, the wind ruffling my mane and tail to the side slightly. I wanted to paw at the ground, one of the bad habits I had when I was nervous of anxious, but refrained from doing so, afraid I might hit Ramzi by mistake. I breathe in the scent of the wind deeply, somethin inside my mind stirring the way my mane, tail, and hide did. Memories of happier days in spring and autumn when I was a yearling, the harshness of the summer and winter. Memories of my old herd. We had always stuck together, had always made it through, my mom and I. I shake my mane as the wind disappeared, listening to Claude's vocie. I let out a shrill whinny, ears pricked forward as I watch the effects of the wind disappear. The leaves and grass fall silent, the creek's reflection remaining still once more. I flick my tail, placing my earshalf back as I look all around me. THe other mares down in the valley, Darcy behind me, Claude on the hill, and Ramzi beside me. I shake my mand, returning my gaze back to Ramzi. Maybe I would stay here, at least for a year, I decided.
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Post by Guest Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:57 pm

I nuzzled my Ramzi, so happy to have my very first foal.
"The wait was worth it"
I said to myself then shook my mane and smiled with a happy gleam to my eyes. I grinned and nibble at Ramzi's ear and mane.I shook out my body, dirt flinging around, disappearing into the air. I snorted and began to graze.

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Post by Guest Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:01 pm

Claude: I stand there quietly now, resting a back hoof lazily. My mane and tail blow forward in the wind, I rest my eyes with a sigh. I was happy here...And finally, I had a family. An actual family. One that did not put a fake mask of humility on, but was actually humble and kind. I swivel my ears to listen to my son.

Ramzi: I nicker to my mother and nuzzle her back before lookin at Heav again. "Wha-whats your name?"

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Post by • Echo Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:00 pm

~ Heav~

I smile small, glancing at Darcy for a moment.
"Heav," I say, not saying my full name, knowing it could be difficult for foals to remember long names, or pronounce them.
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Post by Guest Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:03 pm

I looked up and shook my mane, watching Claude's expression. I nudged him and smiled lightly. I then looked back to Ramzi. who am i kidding? i will never be his lead mare, nor a fit one i sighed and shrugged lightly.

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Post by Guest Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:05 pm

Ramzi: I grin and prance slightly in place. "Thats a cool name. Heav" I say it to myself, getting used to the way it sounded. Then I turn and bolt, my little legs pumping fast as I climb the hill to my fathers side.

Claude: Turning my head around, I look back at my son, Ramzi. Smiling kindly at him. Then I turned to Darcy and smile at her. She was a good mare, especially to me. I knew she would be a good mother for my son, and future foals that we would have. She may not be lead mare material, but she, along with all the others, each had their own special place. In my heart and in the herd.

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Post by • Echo Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:07 pm

~ Heav~

I smile slightly as I watch him go, ears forward. I turn away from the trio and flick my tail, raising my head as I look over at the hills and the rest of the herd.
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Post by Guest Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:10 pm

I walked down to the stream over the hill and nickered to Ramzi to fallow. I slowly walked into the stream and nickered lightly to the cooling water rippling over my coat.

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Post by Guest Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:16 pm

Ramzi: I buck lightly, following my mother. Prancing behind her until she got to the water, I stop at the waters edge and lean back suddenly. Startled by it I snort loudly and trot along the waters edge. I begin neighing frantically to her as she gets farther away from me. I rear up on my hind legs and shake my head. Coming down I trot a few steps towards the water and only submerge my front hooves partially as I watch mother with wide eyes.

Claude: Smiling at my son's reaction to the water, I turn and look at the rest of my mares. Seeing Heav alone once again I walk slowly to her and stop next to her side and look forward. Sighing I look at her. "Do you plan to stay, or move?"

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Post by Guest Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:14 pm

I snorted and looked back to Ramzi. I slowly swam back over to him and laughed lightly.
"Ramzi, its alright...come on...it wont hurt you, and im here!"
I smiled

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Post by • Echo Fri Mar 19, 2010 4:55 pm

~ Heav~

I watch him come up, flicking my ears slightly.
"I don't know," I say, barely above a whisper. I liked it here, but would I ever truly fit in? Anywhere?
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Post by Guest Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:12 pm

Ramzi: I giggle, then slowly I buckle my knees slightly and jump into the water next to her. Surprised of the wet feeling I kick at the water for a few moments then settle down and follow my mum.

Claude: I nicker to her with encouragement. "You will never know if you'll fit in, unless you try to fit in. You make a good addition to the herd, but others words do not matter, unless you believe them. Do not believe you won't fit in because you think you won't, otherwise you won't fit in. But if you believe you will fit in, then you will. Your own actions and thoughts are whats holding you back, Heav. Let them go, and watch the puzzle pieces fall into place."

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Post by • Echo Wed Mar 24, 2010 1:15 pm

~ Heav~

I snort. Just a bunch of fortune cookie crap that I had dealt with my whole life, I thought to myself, but didn't say it aloud.
"Maybe," I say, my sigh lost in the whisper of wind as it grazed past us. I flick my tail, ears half back as I wondered quietly to myself.
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Post by Guest Wed Mar 24, 2010 11:02 pm

Claude: I lick my lips and yawn. Shaking my head to stretch the tired muscles, and rattling the skull necklace around my neck. My mane landed in even more tangles and my forelock all aray. Not caring a bit about it though I look at the area lazily. My blue eyes thoughful of every single thing that might harm my herd. I snort a couple times as I judge our surroundings then with a content sigh I lower my head to graze.

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