Re: Burn (Mature, any one can join)

[Stormsong]

Terra turned her head at a sudden splash and turned her head. She spotted the stallion struggling feebly in the water. "Ash!" she cried and ran to him. She snorted nervously as the water swirled around her hooves. She nudged him so that his head was above the water. "Please get up!"

[Guest]

I snorted out water. Blood washed down the river as I laid there to weak to get out as I was in pain that showed on me.

(The horse that's my avatar is Ash)

[Stormsong]

(He's pretty. )

Terra snorted and nudged him again. "Please, get up," she pleaded desperately.

[Guest]

(Sorry, I was replying to a two hundred word limit post on another site)

Ruby laid in the distance where she had went to when they started breeding. She then heard their fuss and stood snorting, she smelt the air...the smell of smoke entering and leaving a smokey taste on her tongue. She looked over at them as they, they, they just left her. She ignored them stumbling to the water, barley able to walk. She crossed the river then tried to bolt but fell dramatically down. She stood and walked slowly to the trees, looking back to see the stud fall and yell at Terra to leave him. She looked forward and so ply moved herself on, she wouldn't travel nearly as fast. At some point the quick moving fire was just inches behind her and she could only walk, it was horrible! As it surrounded her she caughed loudly feeling her coat ignite. With determination she tried to bolt making it a few steps out of the fire before falling and quickly getting back up. She kept going, bolting, falling, standing, bolting, falling, standing, till she made it ahead of the fire some. She moved on still repeating, eventually breaking through the woods. She spotted a pond and limped badly over to it. Her coat was blazing with fire as she plopped down diminishing the fire. A sizzle filled the air and she rested her head, the fire grew on the grass but she was to tired to move on across the small pond, she forced herself up and went in father and fell down. She only allowed her noise to break through the top. She would try to hold out long enough for the fire to end.


(Ugh, horrid post...sorry.)

[Guest]

I got up seeing Ruby. I got up and went to her, I used my nose and got her up and let her lean on me even though it hurt.

[Stormsong]

Terra sighed in relief and trotted after them. She got on the other side of Ruby, feeling relieved that she was found, and helped Ash support her.

[Guest]

(You must of misread my post because she is far away from them in a lake half way surrounded by fire.)

[Guest]

(Oh Sorry)

"Terra stay here until I return." I said getting up and trotting off to find Ruby. "RUBY!!" I yelled over the roar of the fire

[Guest]

Ruby couldn't hear him, the water filled her ears as she staid submerged in the cool water. Her noise breathing in thick smoke, making it hard to pull in oxygen.

[Guest]

I frantically looked for her ignoring my own injuries. I looked by every water source but soon saw something sticking out of the water and waded into the water,"Ruby." I said coughing as I tried to get her on her feet,"Please, I don't want to lose you." I said nuzzling her

[Guest]

Ruby pulled her head up hearing the water swoosh, "I can't swim that deep with this knee." She said looking across the pond at the other end, it was at least 16 ft deep towards the middle.

[Guest]

I looked around, looking for a way out."Get on top of me." I said pushing towards my back

[Guest]

Ruby listened and asked, "You sure you can carry me?" Nervously as she clampered on top of him.

[Guest]

"I'll try to survive long enough to get you across, when you on the other side go north along the river you'll find Terra." I said as I headed for the deep water wincing but keeping it to myself

[Guest]

Ruby naturally corrected him, " You mean woods, the creek starts about five miles south of here.

[Guest]

I snorted to keep the water out of my nose as I got half way across the deep water

[Guest]

Ruby nervously waited for them to finish across the pond. Her eyes were tightly shut as he swam.

[Guest]

I got her to the other side and my legs gave out and I went under the water and was pushed down stream

[Guest]

(Ummm its a pond, that couldn't happen.)

[Guest]

(Sorry, stuff on my mind)

[Guest]

(Its fine)

Ruby stood and watched him colaspe she tried to help him up.

[Stormsong]

Terra whinnied and rushed to Ruby and Ash's side. She bent over and tried to help up.

[Guest]

I went shakily to my feet and looked at them, I've given them no reason to save me but they did any way.

[Guest]

Ruby snorted feeling no longer in his dept.

[Guest]

I looked to her and snarled

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