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Some poems i wrote... please read and tell me what you think :)

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Post by ~BrokenHeart~ Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:13 pm

I wrote these about a guy i like... and i'm a 14 year old girl incase you didn't notice haha

Dreams~

We always want what we can't have.
But in dreams you can have them.
Sleep is where i have to go
To make the things i want possible.
I can't seem to forget..
I see you every day
And it continues in my dreams.
Sometimes i start to wonder
Which life is actually real.
When i go to sleep,
My dreams seem so wonderful and real.
But sooner or later,
You always have to wake up
And find out nothing has changed...


I Should Know Better~

Even though the world is so vast, I fell for only you, and fell fast.
I really should know better than this, but as i look in your eyes, i feel sudden bliss.
My heart beats fast like it's in a race, it takes off whenever i see your face.
I know that this is probably no good, I can't have you, but i wish i could.
'Cause in your world i'm so small, i hate the fact that you don't need me at all.
My heart is yours, can't you see? No matter how much i try, i can't get free.
It's amazinghow quickly things can change, Trying to move on feels so strange.
Everything you said and did was a lie, I really should do this, but i don't wanna say goodbye.


Why~

When i see those bue eyes, I'm lost at sea.
I have to force myself back into reality.
I'm mezmorized by everything you do.
Why do you have to make me keep wanting you?
If you don't even like me, then why do you stare?
I'm so confused, you act like you don't even care.
Why are you so complicated? You're messing with my head.
Stop doing this, just do nothing instead...


Just Another Girl~

To me you're everything
You spin my head in a whirl
But to you I'm nothing...
Just another girl.


Been Here All Along~

You may be very close, but it seems like you're far away.
I bet nobody even knows, i think about you every day.
All this time, you've been right there, just open your eyes.
I see you everywhere, but my eyes are telling me lies.
I wish that you sould only see how i really feel about you.
But i know there's no guaruntee that you feel the same way i do.


I Need You~

Just keep on talking...to everyone but me.
You may not realize it, but i do care.
I really wish you'd see that it does matter.
You have no idea that i try so hard.
I need you to see that i have feelings.
Not everything's a joke, but obviously it is to you.
I know i should stop..stop wanting you.
But my heart does not agree with my mind.
All i want is, for you to feel the same way.
The way i feel about you.


---Thanks for reading, tell me what you think Smile. and the poem in my signature is also a poem i wrote.
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Post by Saviour Sat Apr 28, 2012 3:37 pm

Wow, these are really good! I never knew you liked poetry Smile

And just hold in there, maybe he'll change his mind ~
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Post by ~BrokenHeart~ Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:08 pm

thanks ^.^
and i dont like to read poetry but i loooove to write it lol
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Post by Saviour Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:30 am

My favorite is probably Just Another Girl, probably because I've been there =P
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Post by Guest Sun Apr 29, 2012 12:37 pm

Wow those are really good. Idk why but instead of reading them I sort of sang them and the sounded like they would be good as a song. Seriously. Smile

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Post by themagus Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:57 pm

Well umm... i've read them... and just wanted to say... since you asked...



*Blank&dumb expression*
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Post by ~BrokenHeart~ Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:17 pm

Wild One~ i do that too when i read poetry lol i also write songs, want me to post some of those?
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Post by Guest Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:16 pm

Yea, I love songs and poetry. But I'm not the best at either, not one of my strengths.

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