Poems I write
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Poems I write
I will update when I write new ones. These two are broken hearted ones.
Staircase
My heart lay broken
At the bottem of the staircase
That it took so long to climb
I guess my hearts progress
Did not matter
To the one who pushed it down
Its lays at the bottem
Trying to fix itself
So it can find
Another staircase to climb
Good Bye
I sat as you paced infront of me
Trying to understand
Why I said Goodbye
You seemed to tire
Turning to me and asking
'What do you mean Goodbye?'
And I sighed
Goodbye
Was the single word I spoke
Before turning around and disappearing
from your life.
I know they suckk but I am new at it so shh
Staircase
My heart lay broken
At the bottem of the staircase
That it took so long to climb
I guess my hearts progress
Did not matter
To the one who pushed it down
Its lays at the bottem
Trying to fix itself
So it can find
Another staircase to climb
Good Bye
I sat as you paced infront of me
Trying to understand
Why I said Goodbye
You seemed to tire
Turning to me and asking
'What do you mean Goodbye?'
And I sighed
Goodbye
Was the single word I spoke
Before turning around and disappearing
from your life.
I know they suckk but I am new at it so shh
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Re: Poems I write
one they do not suck.. i write poetry every now and then when i have an urge to and this is excellent..
two.. tshort sweet and has meaning not just a bundle of words put together which to me gives more effect
and three they are both excellent...
two.. tshort sweet and has meaning not just a bundle of words put together which to me gives more effect
and three they are both excellent...
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