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Broken Trust [ JayzPF ]
Evie whirled around, momentarily chasing her tail. She flicked her ears back towards her long-time friend. She'd known him ever since they were pups: born and raised in the same area. Forever they'd be friends, Evie thought. She loved him like her brother, though over the recent years it may have become more than just a friendship, but she was perfectly content with only being his friend. At the moment, Evie was sniffing around the place, haphazardly chasing down a rabbit she'd seen go by this way, though she wasn't necessarily hungry. Evie snorted and rolled her eyes at her friend, who was a ways behind her. He seemed to actually be trying to hunt like a real wolf would, but Evie wasn't hungry, and she really only was looking forward to the chase, whether she made the kill or not, "Hurry up! You're so slow!" Evie barked back at him before turning around and bounding away a few paces, sniffing the ground, then snorting and staring back at him. Evie wasn't about to leave him behind, but she was getting impatient, and the more she waited, the more she actually got hungry. "C'mon, c'mon!" She called back to him, sitting down and tilting her head, ears pricked forward, as she stared at him, tail plopping up and down beside her impatiently.
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{ Extra Info ~ She's 3 years old; born December 30th. Want any extra info and i can supply it ]
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{ Extra Info ~ She's 3 years old; born December 30th. Want any extra info and i can supply it ]
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Mike(sorry such a weird name i might change it) grunted, muscular body crouched and ready to pounce. The squirrel he was stalking grew alert, minuscule ears pricked and swiveling. It scurried away at the sound of his girl partner, Evie, speaking. "Great, just great." he muttered, upset at loosing his prey. He watched Evie bounce around impatiently and sighed. "I'm coming! Geesh." The handsome brute crept forward, eyes darting over the landscape around him in hope of finding some other prey. His golden eyes rested on his friend and he shivered ever so slightly while going over her perfect body. Evie might be just his friend, but that didn't have any affect on how his hormones acted. He shook his coat and straightened up, taking steady steps forward. A piercing shriek rang out from under him and he lifted his paw to see a squished vole. It was rather plump, so he dived down and brought his strong jaws around it's neck, crushing it's windpipe and killing it almost instantly. Mike lifted it out of the little hole and proudly shoved it towards Evie, who was looking a little hungry. He was the more practical of the two, always calm and reasonable. This difference caused them to fight often but they had always made up before. Mike teased her lightheartedly saying "Don't eat too much or you'll get fatter than you already are!", unaware that this statement would end their friendship.
(sss and ssb this is mature and graphic, right?)
Mike(sorry such a weird name i might change it) grunted, muscular body crouched and ready to pounce. The squirrel he was stalking grew alert, minuscule ears pricked and swiveling. It scurried away at the sound of his girl partner, Evie, speaking. "Great, just great." he muttered, upset at loosing his prey. He watched Evie bounce around impatiently and sighed. "I'm coming! Geesh." The handsome brute crept forward, eyes darting over the landscape around him in hope of finding some other prey. His golden eyes rested on his friend and he shivered ever so slightly while going over her perfect body. Evie might be just his friend, but that didn't have any affect on how his hormones acted. He shook his coat and straightened up, taking steady steps forward. A piercing shriek rang out from under him and he lifted his paw to see a squished vole. It was rather plump, so he dived down and brought his strong jaws around it's neck, crushing it's windpipe and killing it almost instantly. Mike lifted it out of the little hole and proudly shoved it towards Evie, who was looking a little hungry. He was the more practical of the two, always calm and reasonable. This difference caused them to fight often but they had always made up before. Mike teased her lightheartedly saying "Don't eat too much or you'll get fatter than you already are!", unaware that this statement would end their friendship.
(sss and ssb this is mature and graphic, right?)
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[ yeah, graphic/mature ^^ ]
Evie rolled her eyes and stared at him as he stepped on a vole. She rolled her eyes, "Sloooooooowpoke!" she snorted, flicking her ears in annoyance. Her brown eyes scanned him intently and she sighed inwardly. They seemed like a perfect match; that's why they were best friends. Snorting as he tossed the vole her way, a proud look on his face, she bent her head down and eyed it warily. Evie's head snapped up however, when he made that extremely rude comment, and glared at him harshly, getting to her feet, "If I'm so 'fat' why even bother to give it to me!?" Evie snapped, a slight growl rolling off her tongue as she batted the vole back towards him with a bit of a push upwards, so it flew at his chest. Snuffing angrily, Evie turned and stalked away from him, her ears pinned to her cranium. The nerve he had! If he thought she was so "fat" why should he even bother giving her food? Did he like teasing her about her weight? She never thought she was too fat before. The thoughts swirled around her head and she narrowed her eyes, pinning her ears farther and her claws digging into the dirt as she walked. "Stupid brute." she muttered under her breath.
Evie rolled her eyes and stared at him as he stepped on a vole. She rolled her eyes, "Sloooooooowpoke!" she snorted, flicking her ears in annoyance. Her brown eyes scanned him intently and she sighed inwardly. They seemed like a perfect match; that's why they were best friends. Snorting as he tossed the vole her way, a proud look on his face, she bent her head down and eyed it warily. Evie's head snapped up however, when he made that extremely rude comment, and glared at him harshly, getting to her feet, "If I'm so 'fat' why even bother to give it to me!?" Evie snapped, a slight growl rolling off her tongue as she batted the vole back towards him with a bit of a push upwards, so it flew at his chest. Snuffing angrily, Evie turned and stalked away from him, her ears pinned to her cranium. The nerve he had! If he thought she was so "fat" why should he even bother giving her food? Did he like teasing her about her weight? She never thought she was too fat before. The thoughts swirled around her head and she narrowed her eyes, pinning her ears farther and her claws digging into the dirt as she walked. "Stupid brute." she muttered under her breath.
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Mike looked stunned. "It was a joke!" he called to Evie, but she was out of earshot. He grunted and looked down at the vole she'd thrown at him. It had barely felt like anything, considering how much muscle he had. The brute picked it up with jaws like steel and turned his body the other way, head still watching the retreating form of the female. If Evie was his true friend, she would realize that he didn't mean it. Soon she was gone, so Mike continued on his own path bitterly, thinking about how wrong that had turned out. Oh well. On second thought, he went back to the site of the fight and carefully placed the fat vole in it's hole, covering it a bit in case some other animal would smell it. He knew that Evie was never a pro at hunting and tended to rely on him or steal for food, so she might be hungry and come back. The male surveyed his work and nodded once. He backed away and urinated, leaving a clear trail of his scent. Then he turned and ran, back to the cave that they shared and took a deer slab and heaved it away. Mike kept going until he found a smaller cave that suited him and dumped his load in the far corner, then dumped his load in one corner. He circled around once and fell asleep.
(how about she runs out of food and steals his and he gets mad so he forces her later?)
(how about she runs out of food and steals his and he gets mad so he forces her later?)
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[ okeedokes ~ sounds like a plan ]
-- 2 Hours Later --
Evie growled, as well as her stomach. She frowned and sat down by the banks of a river, staring at her wavering reflection. She wasn't really that fat, was she? She snarled and whirled to her feet. She passed by the place she'd left only a few hours before, smelling Mike. Evie snorted and stared at a darker patch of the dirt, and tentatively walked over to it. She dug up the insides, only to see the vole. Evie grimaced and rippd it up before scattering it everywhere for any other carnivorous beast that wanted to eat it. Evie's stomach growled again, and the smell of meat filled her nostrils. She padded up to it, silent as a mouse. She'd perfected her stalking skills, as most of the time she stole food instead of getting it herself. Evie walked up to the entrance of the cave and stopped when she saw Mike. Her ears pinned back as she stared at the deer in the corner of the cave, before silently making her way towards them, her claws not even making a single sound on the cave's rocky flooring. She ripped off a mouthful before padding out of the cave, the large slab hanging from her mouth. She trotted off, but not too far, in case she was hungry afterwards and wanted more to eat. With that, Evie's stomach growled again and she began to eat the meat.
-- 2 Hours Later --
Evie growled, as well as her stomach. She frowned and sat down by the banks of a river, staring at her wavering reflection. She wasn't really that fat, was she? She snarled and whirled to her feet. She passed by the place she'd left only a few hours before, smelling Mike. Evie snorted and stared at a darker patch of the dirt, and tentatively walked over to it. She dug up the insides, only to see the vole. Evie grimaced and rippd it up before scattering it everywhere for any other carnivorous beast that wanted to eat it. Evie's stomach growled again, and the smell of meat filled her nostrils. She padded up to it, silent as a mouse. She'd perfected her stalking skills, as most of the time she stole food instead of getting it herself. Evie walked up to the entrance of the cave and stopped when she saw Mike. Her ears pinned back as she stared at the deer in the corner of the cave, before silently making her way towards them, her claws not even making a single sound on the cave's rocky flooring. She ripped off a mouthful before padding out of the cave, the large slab hanging from her mouth. She trotted off, but not too far, in case she was hungry afterwards and wanted more to eat. With that, Evie's stomach growled again and she began to eat the meat.
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Mike twitched in his sleep, dreaming he was chasing a female. She turned, and he gasped, realizing that the female was Evie. The sleeping male woke up from his dream and looked around, noticing that the deer piece was gone. "Evie!" he scolded quietly. He stood and stretched his legs, and padded out of the small cave. His nose confirmed that Evie had been here not too long ago and that she was in the area. The brute turned away, still upset at her, and trotted in to the woods to kill another animal, since Evie had taken his only food, the slab of deer. He heard a fawn and it's mother and easily located them resting under a tree. He pounced on the larger deer's back, killing it almost instantly from his weight and a good solid bite to the jugular vein. He left the fawn crying for it's mom, and he knew that a fawn without it's mother was a dead fawn. Evie would be able to find and kill it without too much trouble, that is, if it wasn't already deceased. He grunted and dragged the carcass to his cave, but, as it was now too small to contain him and the body, so he shoved it in and went in search of a new den.
(OMG SO MANY COMMAS! How about she keeps taking the kills because she is too impatient[no offense] to hunt and he gets mad because i really don't know how he is going to get mad enough to forcer her with one steal)
(OMG SO MANY COMMAS! How about she keeps taking the kills because she is too impatient[no offense] to hunt and he gets mad because i really don't know how he is going to get mad enough to forcer her with one steal)
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Evie finished off the carcass and snorted, licking off her maw and paws before padding back towards his den, planning to apologize to him. However, when she reached his cave, she found it empty of everything but another deer carcass. Evie looked around and shrugged, padding into the cave and grabbing the deer by the tail, dragging it out of the cave with her, leaving a thick trail of the deer's stomach in the dirt. Evie didn't drag it very far, however, considering it was a full deer and it was much larger than she could carry for long distances. Instead of eating all of it, she finished off the stomach-part and clambered on top of it, yawning and gnawing on the bones frmo her position.
[ okeedokes ! ]
[ okeedokes ! ]
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Mike growled, frustrated that he couldn't find a proper den. He padded around the rocky area again, peering in to cracks hoping that a cave might follow. He leapt onto the tall monument of stone. There was a small entrance to the rock that was well concealed by an Ivy vine creeping up the side. The male squeezed in, finding that it was very roomy inside the hollow form, almost big enough to be a cavern. He glanced around the dim room, noting that there was a smaller area in the back. He wandered around, claws plinking on the hard stone floor, until he was at the little space. It was the perfect size and temperature to store several deer or a buck. The brute nodded approvingly and squeezed back out, marking his territory on the Ivy. He quickly ran to the forest and surprised a rabbit, then grabbed and killed it. He shoved it in to his den for later and trotted back to his first den happily, thinking about how well his search had turned out. He went into his place and stopped in the entrance, shocked that the deer was missing. He growled and galloped away angrily, plotting about what he could do in revenge. He ran to his den and curled up inside, nibbling at the rabbit that he'd tossed in earlier.
(FAIL...)
(FAIL...)
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[ nah, it's fine ]
Evie snorted as she finally finished what she could of the deer before letting out a quiet howl as the moon rose into the sky. She dragged the rest of the deer carcass into the den, and stopped, looking around when she smelled rather fresh scent of Mike. Her hackles raised immediately and she dropped the buck and ran for it, not caring to hide her scent. She kept running until she reached the end of the forest, where there was a large lake. Evie sighed and washed the blood off of her muzzle and paws before wading into it and bathing herself thoroughly. Her mind continued to wonder if Mike was still angry at her. She'd taken food from him plenty of times before, and she hoped this time it wouldn't be any different, but something deep inside her made her feel like she had done something terribly wrong, and she wasn't going to get off easy like she used to. After all, she hadn't even bothered to share Mike's kill with him either time.
Evie snorted as she finally finished what she could of the deer before letting out a quiet howl as the moon rose into the sky. She dragged the rest of the deer carcass into the den, and stopped, looking around when she smelled rather fresh scent of Mike. Her hackles raised immediately and she dropped the buck and ran for it, not caring to hide her scent. She kept running until she reached the end of the forest, where there was a large lake. Evie sighed and washed the blood off of her muzzle and paws before wading into it and bathing herself thoroughly. Her mind continued to wonder if Mike was still angry at her. She'd taken food from him plenty of times before, and she hoped this time it wouldn't be any different, but something deep inside her made her feel like she had done something terribly wrong, and she wasn't going to get off easy like she used to. After all, she hadn't even bothered to share Mike's kill with him either time.
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Mike scowled to himself, gnawing at the rabbit. Sure, Evie had taken food from him lots of times, but she had always shared. He seethed at her for getting the prey that HE had killed. Oh well. The next time he saw her, he was going to apologize. He was like that, attitude changing by the second.The brute sighed and peeked out of the cave, watching the silvery moon rise higher and higher in to the sky. He crawled out completely and sat on the ledge, gazing across the landscape. The cool night sea breeze caressed his tannish coat, making him shiver. He yawned and walked back in to his cave, circling around the rabbit and lying down and falling asleep.
(like he goes to apologize but he gets mad again because she teases him and forces her I think or something)
(like he goes to apologize but he gets mad again because she teases him and forces her I think or something)
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[ that works ~ ]
Evie sighed and waded out of the water before shaking herself off and pawing at a baby squirrel, but she couldn't find herself to kill it. Sighing, Evie curled herself up into a ball by the riverside and stared into the ever-darkening waters, thinking to herself. Evie looked up at the moon and let out a low, long howl, wondering where on this earth Mike was. She'd have to say sorry the next time she saw him, and then things could go back to normal: the teasing, the chasing, the everything. Content with her plan, Evie allowed herself to drift off into a very pleasant sleep, without the trouble of having to face Mike with a bad attitude. Maybe things would work out after all...?
Evie sighed and waded out of the water before shaking herself off and pawing at a baby squirrel, but she couldn't find herself to kill it. Sighing, Evie curled herself up into a ball by the riverside and stared into the ever-darkening waters, thinking to herself. Evie looked up at the moon and let out a low, long howl, wondering where on this earth Mike was. She'd have to say sorry the next time she saw him, and then things could go back to normal: the teasing, the chasing, the everything. Content with her plan, Evie allowed herself to drift off into a very pleasant sleep, without the trouble of having to face Mike with a bad attitude. Maybe things would work out after all...?
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You too Merry Christmas and Good Night!
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Bye! <--Poop
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(arg! I had like 10 lines and then i lost it all!! I'm so mad right now sorry for not posting a lot)
Mike woke up and yawned, showing his large fangs. He got to his feet and crept outside and his golden eyes surveying the beautiful scenic valley below. He let out a sigh so soft it was lost in the refreshing breeze. The brute turned and carefully picked his way down the rock, claws making small clicking sounds. At the base of the monument, he looked around, sniffing the ground to try and locate Evie. This fight has gone on long enough! Mike thought and trotted in to the woods to where the female was.
Mike woke up and yawned, showing his large fangs. He got to his feet and crept outside and his golden eyes surveying the beautiful scenic valley below. He let out a sigh so soft it was lost in the refreshing breeze. The brute turned and carefully picked his way down the rock, claws making small clicking sounds. At the base of the monument, he looked around, sniffing the ground to try and locate Evie. This fight has gone on long enough! Mike thought and trotted in to the woods to where the female was.
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[ it's fine, it's fine ~ ]
Evie snorted when she woke up, and waded into the water. She snapped up a fish in her mouth and had just dropped it down by her feet. She had just began to chew on it, ripping off scales, when she heard pawsteps from the forest that wasn't too far away from her. Her ears pricked up and she got to her feet, whacking the fish back into the water with her hind leg, her ears pinning themselves to her cranium until she figured out who the stranger was. As soon as she confirmed, Evie's tail started wagging and she yapped happily, her ears moving forward again. Of course she didn't want to seem too excited, so she sat down and wrapped her tail around her. "Hello Mike," she commented.
Evie snorted when she woke up, and waded into the water. She snapped up a fish in her mouth and had just dropped it down by her feet. She had just began to chew on it, ripping off scales, when she heard pawsteps from the forest that wasn't too far away from her. Her ears pricked up and she got to her feet, whacking the fish back into the water with her hind leg, her ears pinning themselves to her cranium until she figured out who the stranger was. As soon as she confirmed, Evie's tail started wagging and she yapped happily, her ears moving forward again. Of course she didn't want to seem too excited, so she sat down and wrapped her tail around her. "Hello Mike," she commented.
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(I don't know now...should he really force her?)
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