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Post by Nicoco177 Wed Aug 17, 2011 11:18 am

How can I repay you, brother mine?
How can I expect you to forgive?
Clinging to the past, I shed our blood,
Shatterd your chance to live.

Though I knew the laws, I payed no heed.
How could I return your wasted breath?
What I did not know has cost you dear,
For there is no cure to death.

Beautiful mother, soft and sweet;
Once you were gone, we were not complete.
Back through the years, we reached for you.
Alas, 'twas not meant to be.

And how can I make ammends,
for all I took from you?
I led you with hopeless dreams.
My Brother, I was a fool.

Dont cry for the past now,
Brother mine,
Neither you nor I are free from blame,
Nothing can erase the things we did,
for the path we took was the same.

Beautiful mother, soft and sweet;
Once you were gone, we were not complete.
Back through the years, we reached for you.
Alas, 'twas not meant to be.

My dreams made me blind and mute.
ILong to return to that time.
I followed without a word,
My brother, the fault is mine.

So where do I go from here?
And how to forget and forgive?
Whats gone is forever lost.
Now all I can do is live.


Sparx~
Them words went around in head, I chased my brother to a cliff, "Were you gonna go now, Wuss?" I snarled, My lips curled, I lashed out at him bitting his back, He howled in pain, Dagger, my brother, was hardly able to stand "Why, brother, why have you changed?" he whimpered, "Its my destiny..." I growled, I lashed out at him and bit into his neck. He howled his last howl, "Sorry, Sparx" he squeaked, and he dropped on the floor, why was he saying sorry to me? I looked at his lifeless body, a tear rolled from my cheek, "Why! Why do I have to be a monster!!!" I shouted. I turned to see my real Mom and Dad, I shook my head and ran, I ran to the cliff, to my fake dad, "Well done, We need your parents dead now." He said, his once white teeth, now stained with red. "No we don't..." I snarled, "Why can you not kill them? You killed your brother!" He snapped, "That was a mistake, there is no point to kill my parents." I snapped back at him, He stood up straight, drawing the claws from his paws, "Why not?" He growled, "Because you wont be alive to see them get killed." I said quietly but firmly. He lashed out at me, but I dogded, I quicky pounced on him, tearing all the fur from his back, But he managed to throw me off, I chased him over to a cliff, "Forget it Evan, I dont kill anymore." I growl, forcing him to the edge, I bit into his neck, just like I did with my brother. "Curse you..." He spoke his last words, before he collapsed. My father took a step closer to me, But I just Ran into the forest, hoping to find another wolf, male or female.
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Post by Spritz Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:16 pm

(Can I post, or are you tired of me?? )
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:19 pm

sure, you can post!
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Post by Spritz Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:31 pm

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I slept quietly, shaded by the shadows. I was perfectly concealed, the only thing that could give me away, was the soft sound of my breathing, and sometimes whimpering in my sleep. I wasent worried about any othe wolf, for I knew I was well hidden. I thought.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:53 pm

Blackthorn~
I went up to a random hill ans sang the song softly but loudly:

How can I repay you, brother mine?
How can I expect you to forgive?
Clinging to the past, I shed our blood,
Shatterd your chance to live.

Though I knew the laws, I payed no heed.
How could I return your wasted breath?
What I did not know has cost you dear,
For there is no cure to death.

Beautiful mother, soft and sweet;
Once you were gone, we were not complete.
Back through the years, we reached for you.
Alas, 'twas not meant to be.

And how can I make ammends,
for all I took from you?
I led you with hopeless dreams.
My Brother, I was a fool.

Dont cry for the past now,
Brother mine,
Neither you nor I are free from blame,
Nothing can erase the things we did,
for the path we took was the same.

Beautiful mother, soft and sweet;
Once you were gone, we were not complete.
Back through the years, we reached for you.
Alas, 'twas not meant to be.

My dreams made me blind and mute.
ILong to return to that time.
I followed without a word,
My brother, the fault is mine.

So where do I go from here?
And how to forget and forgive?
Whats gone is forever lost.
Now all I can do is live.
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Post by Spritz Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:57 pm

I lightly wake, my ears perked towards the sound of a soft voice, singing in the dark, the music dancing in the pure breeze. At the end of the sad, but wonderful song, I throw a howl, long and painful, a cry for the sadness that was possesing the singer.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:08 pm

I squeaked at the screech like howl "Qui est là? montre-toi!" I said, I used french to cover my identity, I learnt it off my dad.
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Post by Spritz Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:13 pm

I frowned, then thumped my tail angrilly. Excuse me for singing along! I got up and streched, before trotting in the oposite direction, not caring about how much noise I made.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:16 pm

"She speaks english." I mutter to myself, "I'm sorry, I'm alittle shaken up by the past." I shuddered.
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Post by Spritz Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:20 pm

I stop, hearing faint words in the distance. I was poised to flee, but turned around, eyes sweeping the dark area.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:27 pm

"Dont go,
How can I repay you, brother mine?
How can I expect you to forgive?
Clinging to the past, I shed our blood,
Shatterd your chance to live.

Though I knew the laws, I payed no heed.
How could I return your wasted breath?
What I did not know has cost you dear,
For there is no cure to death.

Beautiful mother, soft and sweet;
Once you were gone, we were not complete.
Back through the years, we reached for you.
Alas, 'twas not meant to be.
" I start to sing, hoping that she would join me.
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Post by Spritz Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:36 pm

I didnt know the words. But I slowly crept forward, seeing the male in the moonlight. My ears pricked forward, his beautiful voice seeming to dance in the air.
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Post by Nicoco177 Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:39 pm

"I'm Blackthorn, I was a killer." I say, my silver grey coat glimering in the moonlight.How can I repay you, brother mine?
How can I expect you to forgive?
Clinging to the past, I shed our blood,
Shatterd your chance to live.

Though I knew the laws, I payed no heed.
How could I return your wasted breath?
What I did not know has cost you dear,
For there is no cure to death.

Beautiful mother, soft and sweet;
Once you were gone, we were not complete.
Back through the years, we reached for you.
Alas, 'twas not meant to be.
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Post by Spritz Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:03 am

And the end, I gave a long howl, then trotted up beside him. "That what you were looking for?"
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Post by Nicoco177 Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:17 pm

Blackthorn~
I sighed and turned to see the female sat beside me "I'm Blackthorn, and I have come to these part of the woods to seek company." I say, my breath coming out as frost, flying up into the Midnight sky.
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