Re: Elixer comes to claim

[Faye]

Linde stumbled to her hooves."MOMMY! The other horse says hi."She squealed,bucking slightly with excitment.She pranced around her mother occasionally bucking and rearing.

Broken watched as Elixer galloped away.She breathed a sigh of relief jogged over to the stream and drinking while Linde pranced aimlessly around the meadow.As she drank Broken came up with a great idea.Perhaps with Elier was away she and Linde could escape...

[Emoticon]

(can my chacecter be here but you not know?)

I look at them, with pity. i don't know what i was going to do next. just watch i guess

[Faye]

(Yes,that is why they are going to try to escape because they think he is gone..=) )

Broken loped slowly over to Linde.She leaned down.."Honey,it's time to go."She whispered wheeling around and breaking into a lope towards the forest,Linde following close behind.Though they didn't know that they were heading straight towards Elixer.Once in the woods they went faster,going into a gallop..

[Man O' War Lover]

"Dont go that way I yell to theme!" I run after theme my long strong leg's take me swiftly toured theme. There going straight for him!

[Emoticon]

I headbutt the mom, in her chest making her fall backwards. I look at the foal with gleaming eyes, then turning into rage when i see the other stud. I walk towards the foal and try to escape with her. I nip her while her moms down so we can escape. when she refuses to go i nip her harder, and tapping her with my foreleg to let her know i will do it harder.

[Faye]

Linde squealed,suddenly her rump flew upward,slamming him in the muzzle with her rump in a buck.She darted forward away from the stud and towards her mother,but stumbled on her new legs and fell to her knees to catch her breath.

Broken's nostril's flared as she tried to catch her breath,she had gotten the wind knocked out of her,but that was all.Slowly she rose on shaky legs and charged towards her filly and standing over her."What do you want with her"She snorted,her motherly instincts taking over..

[Man O' War Lover]

I run at him my head low when I crash into him pining him against the ground. "Run!" I yell at the mare and foal. "Run for it, I can't hold him down much longer!" I yell. I kick him in the rib's hard.

[Emoticon]

I rear and put my forelegs on him, trying to. It was like taking a skipping 3 steps on a stairs. I then jump over the stud, then kicking him hard in the leg. I wonder if i broke his leg. I dart across the field and quickly then ahead of the mare. "Oh no you don't!" I ram her in the neck, at this high speed, i was going 40 miles an hour. She stumbles, i wonder if anything is broken. "You won't get away from me this time!" I grab the foal by it's mane, and lift her up off the ground. i keep her sideways so she can't kick. I gallop across the clearing the stumble on a log, realizing the I had droped the foal. I get up, then my legs twitching rapidly. I stand strong and pick up the foal, going as fast as i can. I get a better grip on the foals silky mane.

[Man O' War Lover]

(Sham is a Fresian stallion that stand's 18 hands he is very strong and hard to take down, he is not looking for any mates just protecting.)

I run after him he as the foal. Then I let out a strong loud screaming whinny. "Let... her... go!" I yell between breath's. I ram him in the side nocking the foal's main out of his mouth. I bare my teeth going for his throat. I grab his throat and pine him to the ground. "Live or die." I say with my mouth full. I don't bit down but hold him there.

[Emoticon]

I smile. "Can I say any last words?" I say and I roll over and get up and kick him right in the belly. I get off, and ram her in his belly. I go for the foal, this time kicking her with my foreleg to make her go.

[Faye]

Broken tumbled to the ground,her sides heaving and her eyes desperate.Soon she rose to weak legs and broke into a dead gallop,crashing through trees and branches.When she finally reached the stallions and Linde she had this crazy look in her eye."Don't you dare touch her"She bellowed a blood curdling cry erupted form her maw as she charged down,ramming into Elier full force with her chest.Her body was pained but she managed to stumbled over to Linde."Please..just leave her alone..what do you even want with her?She's of no use to you."She muttered looking deep into the stud's eyes.

(I have the image that Linde is like a ragdoll lol )

[Man O' War Lover]

I got up quickly screaming in rage, no one had ever made me so mad, I was mad enough to put fear in his cold eye's. All my power seemd to be focused on him and all my rage and strength. I ran straight into him, missing the mare who tried to convince him to stop. I knew he wouldn't so I would drive him away. I screamed agian rising on my hind leg's bringing my hooves down on the side of his belly tearing at his pelt. I screamed agian and broght all my 2,000 pound's on his rib's. "Leave theme alone." I screamed. I tore at him again. My teeth bare I went for his throat one more time, knowing this time I would tear it out. "I'm done beeing nice!" I screamed grabing his throat.

[Emoticon]

I kick him right in the fore lock making him fall down on me. I quickly get up and walk to broken. "Your right, there is no use for the filly. I will let you guys out alive if you go somewhere else." I say and back away."Sham if you attack me i will fight." Just then i cough up some blood almost spilling almost. I lay down, on my side and continue coughing up blood. "Tell...Linde i said............" I cough up my last cough. "bye." I stop struglling and close my eyes, knowing my brother would come and claim this land for me.


(Toxic is his brother.)

[Faye]

Broken stiffened seeing the motionless body lying down.She was more surprised than anything.He died just like that,right?Cautiously Broken walked over to Elixer's body and nudged his foreloch from his eyes with her nose tenderly."Bye..Elixer."She whispered.Even though this stud had abused her,she still felt quite sad about his death.Broken wheeled around snapping her maw at the other stud."Your deed is done,now leave."She snapped with a sour tone..

[Man O' War Lover]

I got up and walked slowly away, mares where hard to understand, why feel sad for a horse after he tride tacking her foal from her. I turned to look at the dead stallion. Should I burry him? I walked over to his side. I fellt angry at myself so I began to dig up dirt with my front leg's. Scooping it up the earth with my hooves. When the hole was so deep it went up to my shoulder's. When it was big enough I went to the stallion's side and pressed my neck agianst him, pushing him toured the hole. I heard a heavy thud. I then started to fill the hole up with dirt covering him up. I looked at the mare, then walked slowly off toured the tree's.

[Emoticon]

I slow to a Trot as i come in. Seeing the lump of dirt and the stud with the mare and the foal, i already know what happened. My cherry roan coat shines in the bright sunlight. "Elixer has brought me here to guard this place while he is....." You guys can stay if you want to. I look at the stud, showing him I'm different then his brother "My name is Toxic, and the mares in my herd are Sparrow,Cola,Pepsi.(If your name wasn't mentioned sorry i can't remember all of them). Unlike my brother I didn't force breed them, there are here at the will. But there are a little violent." I was trying to warn him.

[Man O' War Lover]

I turn to look at him, what will I say? How can I tell another I killed there brother? I finaly meet his gaze. "I'm Sham." I said.

[Emoticon]

"nice to meet you"

[Man O' War Lover]

"Nice to meet you." I repeted. That's what he said to me, why? I looke dat him surprised a little.

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