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Post by Emoticon Thu Dec 16, 2010 9:57 am

~Elixer~

I come cantering in. I smell the leaders scent and my hair stands up like static.I shouldn't have com here maybe someplace different. No, This is a beautiful land. I will claim it in battle fairly!He neighs darkly, he gets pumped for the battle."Leader, do you dare defend your challenge against me?" He rears and bucks at a tree, and breaks a thick branch off the tree. He slowly walks away and hears the branch fall to the ground, it makes a roaring sound that you could hear from 4 miles away. He doesn't Flinch, and stops the ground hard enough that another branch falls off the tree. It almost touched him, but he didn't move. this act brought fear to every horse that heard it.
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Post by Faye Thu Dec 16, 2010 1:05 pm

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Slowly,with slight caution the fair aged mare stepped into the lush meadow that was obviously occupied already by a stud.For Broken had lived here her whole life she was quite surprised.Suddenly her ears were flattened against her cranium and her leg were moving swiftly across the earth in a rhythmic motion.She came to a sliding stop before him,Broken`s lips peeled back in nasty grimace.Her mind wandered to why he could possibly be here.Perhaps to challenge the leader,capture the mares and upset the balance.Though by just looking at the stud it appeared that he didn't intend to cause that much trouble.Broken snapped her maw in fury at him."What do you want?"She spat her unforgiving eyes turning hard..
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Post by Emoticon Thu Dec 23, 2010 11:04 am

~Elixer~

I see the mare, and her anger. I look at the tree that i destroyed, looking at the branches on the ground. If I force breed this mare, will it send a suitable challenge to the leader? Perhaps if I could force breed a higher rank mare. no, She seems good."I'm sorry for the destruction of your land, I wanted to send a challenge to the leader. I wonder if the leader could hear me, since the land is very long."I walk a little closer to the mare, trying to make sure she sees me as no threat."Could you inform the leader? The waiting is taking forever."I come closer then stop a few feet away.I could force breed here now, but it wouldn't be very fun or time consuming.I stop and graze to try to ease the tense air, I move towards her body, to get a better look. But I act like i am moving towards a good patch of grass, which i am.Play it cool, I don't need to fight with this mare. Just to spread my genes.I lift my head and speak when I am done chewing."What is your name? My Name is Elixer. Your a beautiful mare, you belong in this pretty land."I say, trying to get a positive emotion in the mare."Say, whats your name?"
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Post by Faye Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:45 pm

Broken~

Her muscles tenced under her pelt as he stepped closer and began the conversation as if they were old friends.Though his aura seemed friendly and relaxed so Broken soon calmed also.A small smile crossed her lips as he complimented her,though she knew enough not to sink into his trap..
"No,he does not need to be disturbed in this season."She snapped her ears flattening against her crainium.Broken hadn`t seen the leader for months,though she didn`t want some renegade ruling it.Perhaps the leader had been killed but this stud had no buisness knowing that.But the stud seemed quite nice..causing her distant smile to return and her ears to prick."Broken."The mare replied.Though she was not lying when she told Elixer that it was a very busy season,it was breeding season.
Her untrusting,hard eyes never left him incase he tried to pull something."This land will never be yours."She snapped,turning her rump to him.Suddenly she lifted her left hind hoof from the earth in a attempt to kick him,but missed.
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Post by Emoticon Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:24 pm

~Elixer~

I look at the mare, and smile back at her when I see her smile."Your smile is beautiful." I try to act like I don't notice her hostile attitude."I will try though. I won't fight to the death. The land doesn't need much blood." hmm, this isn't going to be easy. I will have to think my plan, but the mare is persuasive.I notice as she turns her rump towards me. Her kick made my skin crawled as I feel the air from the kick. I bolt and stop an look at her.hmm, I don't like to hurt mares, I won't damage this one badlyAs soon as my hoofs stop moving, the start moving. I gallop the short distance and jump over the mare, putting my hoof down just an inch to cut the mare on her back. I tumble and fall, but barely scrap myself. "I don't like hurting mares, maybe we could get along." I say it happily, trying to. I shake myself off and whinny with a rear to increase my intimidation.
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Post by Emoticon Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:28 pm

(can i force breed your mare?)
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Post by Faye Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:59 pm

(Sure)

Broken~

She lifted her left fore from the ground then dropped with a dull thud a small cloud of dust rising around her.As the cut sliced across her withers she cringed,it pained her.Then with a wild bellow she charged,her dagger-like teeth digging into his shoulder."Don't test my patience."She bellowed her eyes turning hard with hate.He had complimented her on her smile,but it didn`t change her negative attitude towards him.Did he really plan to fight her?His attempt to scare her had failed,it had causing her blood to boil in rage.Though he was strong,stronger than her she had her advantages also..
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Post by Emoticon Thu Dec 23, 2010 5:09 pm

~Olasis~

I shake it off the blood as I try to gain an edge. "Fine, I hate to beak your bubble, but your not going to win without out a scar!"I say loudly as I charge at her, raming her in the neck. As she recovers I mount her and try to pass my genes. I put my wait hard on her to prevent her from kicking, and putting my feet beside her. I tighten them so she can't raise her feet. I get of I soon as I can and bit her neck, then turning around and biting her. I gallop a distance away and get ready for another blow
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Post by Faye Thu Dec 23, 2010 5:21 pm

Broken~
She squared her feet so she wouldn`t fall,the mare lowered her head as she tried to catch her breath.It had al happened so fast the mare hadn't time to react.Blood stained my beautiful golden coat.I felt defeated..
Minute by minute her health continued to get better,but now he she was scared by this stud. Previously she was unaware that he was a forcer,now that he was things were different.This fight was all the more important now.If she lost this stud would be dominant over her..and could do absolutely anything to her.A tremor of fear ran down her spine and she was frozen in place..
Her tail was pinned to her rump in case he attempted to rape her again,though she was sure she would tear him to shreds if he came close or at least try to..
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Post by Emoticon Sun Dec 26, 2010 6:35 pm

~Olasis~

I look at her body, and the blood. I see as she shivers though her body as I calm down.that felt good to breed, but the mare is hurt. I better apolgize.I sigh, tensing up to her reaction."I'm sorry, I try not to be volent with mares, or any other horse unless I have too. I'm sorry I had breed with you without your permission, It was the heat of the moment and I didn't have time to think. If you acept this apoligize it would make me more comfortable with what happened." I say as a rear up and go to the stream and wash out the wounds. The cold water felt good against my skin but stinged my wounds. I rear and buck at the pain. I calm down and get out of the stream, looking at my wounds. I hope that wasn't salt water"So, do you acept my apoligy?"
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Post by Faye Mon Dec 27, 2010 10:35 am

~Broken~

Her unforgiving eyes glared upon him."No,I'm fine.Bastard."She muttered between clenched teeth.Slowly Broken rose to her hooves and jogged over to the stud with a devilish smirk."You will wish you had never been born if only you knew."She sneered. Just moments later she stopped before him to face him.
A frustrated snort erupted from Broken's nostrils just moments later, and she lunged forward. Swinging her head around, she bashed skulls with the larger male and whipped out her hooves, aiming jabs at the stallion's chest and nipping his face in return."Big Oaf"She mumbled under her breath..
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Post by Emoticon Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:54 pm

(Sorry I get confused with my males.)
~Elixer~

I endure the pain and back away from the mare."UGH!"I say and crunch my teeth together."No more mercy! I won't give you a second chance, leave or DIE!"I say as I ram her in the stomach and rear and I cut her in the stomach and leave a gash. Blood comes out of her like a small stream. I bite her in the leg 'causing her lots of pain, but not breaking it. The affects from the kick start to revenge in my head. I try not to notice but the pain is tremedous. I shake but don't fall. I step still in massive pain.
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Post by Faye Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:37 pm

Broken~

She squinted for long moments trying to ignore the blood that continued to gush from her body.Slowly and painfully she rose on shaking legs.Her silky pelt was stained with dark red blood.Broken felt quite dizzy and weak.."You shall rue this day for the rest of your few days alive."She muttered gritting her teeth together.A large flap of skin hung from her stomach,making her all the more angry.Though she stood her ground,mostly because she was too weak to travel very far..
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Post by Emoticon Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:38 pm


"Fine, I'll see you when my son is born." I rear in dominice of the mare. "I own you now Broken!" I buck in front of her to make sure she got the message. I back away from the mare to be ready for any other attack and have my ears pinned for the leader.
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Post by Faye Tue Dec 28, 2010 9:55 am

Broken~

Shamefully the mare lowered her head in defeat.If only the mares of the herd had seen this fight they would be quite angry with her because it was not a mares' job to fight a brute.His words stung her,and she shook her head at him."NO."She whispered."I am not yours nor am I anybody's"She continued her eyes closing halfway..
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Post by Emoticon Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:30 pm

~Elixer~

"Let's see what your leader says." I shake off the blood and revel my shiny Bay coat. "Do you object?" I say and smirk, and paw my hoove at the ground. She knew I gave no mercy unless she serrenders to me, or I can force her too. "Do you want to surrender to me mare, Or would you like to foal then die?" I would keep her if she surenderred. If she didn't, I would force her again then would keep her till the foal was weaned. If the leader dosen't come she will be my little mare, muahaha. "Your leader won't be here to save you, if your alive." I say darkly.
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Post by Faye Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:05 pm

Broken~
"I would NEVER surrender to a nasty,cocky stud like you."She sneered,snapping her maw in warning at him.Then speaking to herself..*Of course he will come..why wouldn't he?*She snarls in rage,thrashing one foreleg out savagely.Broken is a stubborn mare that won't listen to anybody but herself and once her mind is set there is no changing it.All she could say to the stud was Good Luck...
"The foal won't die..."Broken snickered..well not unless Broken went through tremendous pain or surprise/shock.But she was pretty sure that she had seen it all..
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Post by Emoticon Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:19 pm

(Could she foal soon? i gtg soon)
~Elixer~

"Poor little broken, your leader will never come!" I wink at her and grin. "Let's hope your other mares of the herd come, maybe they will end up broken, and forced to join my little herd in a weak herd." I say and act like i never feeled her foreleg kick, I was too happy now. "If you don't follow me, I'll torture you to death when your little foal is old enough." I rear and buck at the mares chest, then i go and mark trees.
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Post by Faye Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:33 pm

(Sure.I'll have her foal in the next post..lol.What does he look like? )

Broken~
Suddenly the palomino mare felt ca sharp pang in her stomach and groaned,her eyes going wide."Bastard"She managed to mumble between gasps.Her stomach was bulged with a foal and the pain was tremendous.Suddenly Broken fell to her knees,her nostrils flaring and her sides heaving to bring each breath in and exhale.Her eyes rolled slightly back into her head,not knowing how she would overcome this obstacle.Hoof Marks were imprinted on Broken's chest..a brand more or less.
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Post by Emoticon Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:02 pm

(k. my friend ill be joining ous from my other horse site)
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"Hmm, fanily. I have another mae willing to join the rebell." I look behind my back for her. "You could just surender and your foal could live peacfully, or not."
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Post by Guest Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:28 pm

WarStorm~

My pure black pelt shined in the sunlight, as i started walking forward to Elixer. I was pained to see a mare covered in blood and in pain, but I acted like I wasnt that soft, and it turned out pretty good.

{when I start out on a post its usually short until I get used it it}

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Post by Emoticon Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:33 pm

(faded your pic is soo LOL!! idk what it will look like. i gtg be bnack tomorrow)
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Post by Guest Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:36 pm

{xD, i dont know what that thing is in signature..^^}

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Post by Faye Sat Jan 08, 2011 3:52 pm

Broken~
"No."Broken sneered,she would never surrender to him..well at least that was what she thought.Moments later a very small palomino filly appeared.It seemed weak,which caused a great name to appear in Broken's mind."Linde."She whispered..Linde meant weak,soft and gentle which fit the filly at the time.When Broken was younger she had often wondered why mares would go and get pregnant again after all the pain.But one day a wise old mare told her that labor pains awaken motherly love.In this case it was true."I surrender."For now she thought.Once the filly was big and strong they would form a rebellion.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Sat Jan 08, 2011 5:43 pm

May my fresian stallion Sham aproch he helps horses in need?

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