Re: Horse Racing-Jennie's back

[Faye]

Aaron~
I stared ahead ready to race.The gunshot sounded and the gates were opened.

Eight Belles~
As soon as the gate opened I flew out.I started out at a medium gallop,which was dead gallop for most horses.My hooves drummed hard against the earth in a rythmic pattern.I didn`t even break a sweat yet and I was already half way done.Now I would put on the real speed.For the onlookers all I was,was a black blur.

[Death Rules]

Big Brown
I watched them

[Faye]

Eight Belles~
I leaped across the finish line.Once across I was praised.I just beat this stable`s record!22 seconds for 2 furlongs!I was rode out of the track,in a lather.I was so proud of myself.MAybe now Aaron would race me in a real race!

[Death Rules]

Big Brown
I smiled

[Faye]

Eight Belles~
After being groomed,fed and praised some more I was released out into the paddock.I saw Big Brown and whinnied to him calling him over

[Death Rules]

Big Brown
I turned my back on her and walked off

[Faye]

Eight Belle`s~
I snorted and pinned my ears at him.Why was he such a jerk?He wasn`t at all special.I could beat him with my hooves tied behind my back.Here I was trying to be nice,and he acts like poo.

[Death Rules]

Big Brown
I laid down

[Faye]

(I`m not trying to be rude or anything,but could you be a bit more decriptive and write longer posts, like when you wirte "I lied down".I doesn`t give me too much to respond with.)
Aaron~
I walked out into the yard and sat down on the bleachers watching the jockeys run the horses.I was battling myself on whether or not I wanted to race Eight Belle`s in the First Fillies Race in a month.It was only for a fillies that have never raced before.
Eight Belles~
"Old Lump"I mumbled under my breath.I walked back and fourth along the fence line.That run was so exhilarating.And I was positive I could do better if I was in better shape.I looked around nervously.

[Death Rules]

Big Brown
I laid on my side and began rolling in the dirt to relieve my scratch that was there on my back and i made dust go up in the air as i rolled

[Faye]

Aaron~
Two stallions came onto the track.My eyes were glued to the track as the horses leaped forward and began to battle for the lead.The black stallion looked like he would win.

[Death Rules]

Big Brown
I got up and trotted seeing if one of them was Grand Slam

Grand Slam
I leaned on the fence wanting to show what i got as for speed

[Faye]

Aaron~
I watched as the two horses were neck to neck for the entire race,until the finish when the black put on a burst of speed,it was a good race.But I disliked the rider`s stategy.I would have ran it differently and better.Maybe I should quit my job as groom and try out being a jockey again.My eyes scanned the yard looking for Crystal or the boss`s daughter.

[Death Rules]

Sarah
I looked around and found Grand Slam and walked to him and put tack on him getting him ready for his run

[Faye]

Aaron~
I watched Sarah shaking my head.She had no experience with horses,and here she was.Trying to race Grand Slam.A very powerful horse with a spirit."Stupid Girl"I mumbled.I stood up and walked into the barn.I didn`t want to see this.

[Death Rules]

Sarah
I got on him and tapped his sides wanting him to go

Grand Slam
I started to trot forward toward the gate, i smiled i was going to really show these horses that I'm worth something, i dig my hooves into the ground and hear/see the gates open and took off dirt flying up behind me and dashes forward

Sarah
I smiled,"Good boy." i say patting his neck as he went forward

[Faye]

Aaron~
I sighed and finally made up my mind,I knocked on the office door,waiting for a Come In from The Boss.I knew Eight Belle`s had potential and I couldn`t keep that potential hidden away any longer.

[Death Rules]

Boss
I sighed,"What?" i say irritated

[Faye]

Aaron~
"I am quitting my job as groom,but will pay for Eight Belle`s board here."

[Death Rules]

Boss
"You want to board that horse here?" i asked,"This is a place for world champions." i say

[Faye]

Aaron~
"This afternoon I raced my horse on the track and she beat this stable`s time for 2 furlongs."I stated.
"She has potential,I am only quitting because I would like to work with her more."

[Death Rules]

Boss
I leaned back in my chair,"And where do you plan on training her on a track?" i asked

[Faye]

Aaron~
"Oh course."

[Death Rules]

Boss
"So you want to train that female, but where do you think your going to find a track for you and that horse?" i asked

[Faye]

Aaron~
"I will make a deal with them"I sat down in a chair believing this conversation may go on a lot longer.

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