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Post by aphrodite Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:42 pm

narcisuss was surruonded by light,. and swirling water. greek words surrounded he was transofromed into a warrior just like ismeal. he was strong, cov ered with tatoos sybolising the goddess. thuogh he still looked like himself. echo stood silently watching in awe.

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Post by Daydreamer Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:54 pm

Alania's eyes widened when she saw the transformation she shakily climbed onto Amor'a back still watching, she saw Echo watching in awe. Who could blame her.....
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Post by aphrodite Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:09 pm

when the transformation was over narcisuss stood with little balance. dizzily he spoke " what have you done to me?" he pleaded to aphrodite. " i have made you a warrior and fulfilled my punishement" she siad in an erie yet beautiful tone. echo made a little gasp as she repated the words numbly " what have you done?" aphrodite made a waek smile " do you wish to come with me?" she said in a offer of protection fore she could not speak for herself " wish to come" she repaeted with a thrilled smile

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Post by Daydreamer Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:12 pm

Alania stared narcisuss and shook her head *he deserves this...doesn't he* she though to herself as she patted Amor who started to pace
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Post by aphrodite Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:18 pm

aphrodite had almost forgotten, " and you alania," she said with a bright msile and gentle blue eyes, "what are your plans?"

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Post by Daydreamer Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:19 pm

Alania slightly looked down "i don't know..carry on in what i did before" she said but she knew she couldn't not after seeing what she had seen
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Post by aphrodite Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:22 pm

aphrodite looked pleased " why dont you just come with me then?" she instied cheerfuly. eco jumped up and down excitedly " come with me!" she chanted happliy

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Post by Daydreamer Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:25 pm

Alania looked at them happily "yes" she said smiling "i would like that" she said *wow* she though *im going to be friends with a goddess* she thought but then she looked at aphrodite "may Amor come with us" she said patting her
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Post by aphrodite Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:33 pm

" of coarse darling," she said pleased " she will become great friend with cupid and scarlet knight"

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Post by Daydreamer Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:41 pm

Alania looked at Amor and rubbed her neck "ya hear that girl we finally might have a home" she said and raised her head and smiled
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Post by aphrodite Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:44 pm

" then it is settled yuo shall all come to my temple to live with me" she anounced happily. the warriors shifted from foot to foot as they eyed narcisuss, all ready they did notlike him

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Post by Daydreamer Mon Mar 15, 2010 11:41 am

Alania smiled as Amor started to walk behind them, after so many years of wandering she finally had a home, actually never mind, she was going to live in a temple. She layed down on Amor's large back as she walked carefully so that Alania wouldn't fall while she was lying down
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:20 pm

Mia:
i walk around with blank dull eyes, i was a ghost or spirit. i pick my head up hearing voices "wander what that is?" i ask myself and walk to them silently, i stop seeing a goddess,worriers,a nyaed, and a girl. "huh what all this about?" i ask out load they couldn't hear or see me so why keep quiet? i walk to them my guitar strapped to my back. i look at the goddess and bow in respect even if she couldnt see me, i look at the worriers and reach out to touch Ismeal but sighed as my hand passes through his cheek "just once i wish i could touch someone!" i snapped to myself and look at all of them
{can i bring in Eve?}
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Post by aphrodite Mon Mar 15, 2010 8:50 pm

ismael shivered fore suddenly he felt cold. it was strange and passed thruogh him quikly. he looked at the other to see if they had felt the same chill he had, but seeing the others standing perfectly calm made him pass it as just a draft. wearily he stood next to echo, who he was esctorting to the goddess's temple. in the distance he could her the soft ounding paws of cupid, aphrodite's tiger. in a sudden blur of black and white he ran past him striaght to aphrodite. the goddess smiled, gave him a hug, then climbed on his back and conituend walking.ismael looked around them one last time and continued down the trail.

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Post by Daydreamer Mon Mar 15, 2010 8:55 pm

Amor slightly reared when she saw the tiger. Alania quickly got back into sitting position and started to calm her down with a few words but looking at the tiger uneasily.....She whispered something into Amor's ear and she bobbed her head
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Mon Mar 15, 2010 8:57 pm

Mia~
i groaned frustrated "im right here!" i yelled at him, i sighed fallow then "wow mia were a starker now" i joked to myself. i look around and smiled seeing the tiger maybe just maybe the tiger would see me! some animals could see me and it made me feel like i was real. i walk with them listening to them and sighing, i look up at the sky "could you guys please let them see me?" i ask in a pleading voice i was getting lonely from being by myself for almost 20 years. i stop myself from trying to touch Ismael.
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Post by aphrodite Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:12 pm

aphrodite watched carefully as cupid's ears swiveld and twiched. " what is it boy?" she aked with a concerned tone in her voice. cupid stopped and turned around as if he were looking for something. he thuoght that someone was messing with him, or maybe it was the alter whispering thier names. but that thery didn't work, if it was the alter aphrodite and the warriors would be able to hear it too. but he could have swore he herd somone! with one last glance he turned back around and continued walking thuogh he was still listeing

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Post by LoveOnHerArms Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:19 pm

Mia~
i almost started crying when the tiger couldnt see me "im right here! please you have to see me!" i walk after them and walk infront of the tiger "please im right here!" i reach out to touch him but stop myself. i looked at the goddess she was beautiful "my lady maybe you can see me if you try..." i say then look at her "oh please someone has to help me!" i cried out i was cursed to be a ghost until some one either loved some one they couldnt see or a god/godess helped me
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Post by Daydreamer Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:22 pm

Amor finally caught scent...of something.....she could see a faint outline of something, she didn't know what it was and it was scary to her she backed up a few steps and reared thrashing her legs in the air

Alania with no saddle, was not ready for the rear she fell off and hit the ground with a grunt, she lay on her side as she got the wind knocked out of her

Amor slightly stopped but was very jumpy
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Post by aphrodite Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:45 pm

the warriors quikly cuoght the horses reins and helped alania to her feet. what was going on around here? each one of them thuagh to them selves. cupid thaught he had seen somwthing but when he looked back it was gone and everyone was rushing around helping with the horse and girl. " we're not alolne..." cupid put into aphrodite's mind. with casion she looked around searching for.. really she didn't know. it was then that ech saw a girl... standing just in front of cupid, she had'nt been there before! echo was sure of it! but echo couldn't speak, how was she to tell the others?!

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Post by Daydreamer Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:48 pm

Alania gave a small cough "im okay" she said her voice rough as she took the reins from Amor slightly wincing from the pain in her right side she patted Amor's neck
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Mon Mar 15, 2010 10:54 pm

Mia~
i hold back a sob they couldnt see me! i look at all of then wait that pretty girl echo thats what they call her! she could see me! "can you see me?" i ask softly holding back excitement "nod or do somthing if you can!" my eyes turn bright green from the excitement of that some one could see me, i take one step to her "its ok im a friend" i
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Post by aphrodite Mon Mar 15, 2010 11:26 pm

echo hurridly repeated the words with a little shock " see... friend" she said while nodding her head. david looked at ech iwth curius eyes, " i thuoght you couldn't speak unless you were repeating somone elses words?" he asked nervously. eco looked at him strangly , didnt he see the girl? " someone elses words" she treid to explain while pionting to the spot where she was the girl. david examined the spot but found nothing capable of speaking " whats going on echo? isnt there a way you can explain" echo was confused " explain? " she asked what was ther to explain? there was a girl standing right next to him!!

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Post by Daydreamer Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:29 am

Alania looked into Amor's eyes then turned to them "there's a...girl....standing next to you" she said slightly confused as she stared at Amor "yes she's there allright"
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Post by LoveOnHerArms Tue Mar 16, 2010 1:33 pm

Mia~
i smiled and jump up "yes you can see me!" i squealed out i wanted to give her a hug. she could see me! "thank you so much echo!" i take a step back from david "hey! watch i, im right here" i wave my hand in front of hid face i looked back a echo "you repeat words right?, tell then im the spirit of music, i was cursed so no one could see me" i look at the other girl "yes! im real!" i look at all them desperate for all of them to see me, maybe they could help me break this curse!
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