stuck on the reflection of an angel

[aphrodite]

narcisuss was like no other man. he was the spawn of the god of waters; phoesidon. he was young, strong, brave and most of all he was handsom. and he knew it too. every girl he evermet had instantly loved him and tried to steel his heart, but not one succeded. not even echo. poor echo was the most beautiful water nyphm in all the land. her flowing blonde hair ended around her waist and gentle green eyes longed for narcisuss more than any other. she never spoke to him, only watched him carefuly and lovingly. she yerned to be his, to feel his muscular arms embrace her, to feel his lips touch hers lovingly and gently, just to know that he loved her and only her... but hope and long was she could do because narcisuss only loved himself.

narcisiss sat by the slow trickling stream gazing at his reflection contently. he ran his fingers thruogh his hair over and over again telling himself how handsom he was and that every girl wished to be with him and only him. while just beyond the banks echo sat, watching his every move with a deep sigh. struggling to remain where she was sitting instead of running to his side.it was then that narcisuss relized he was being stared at

narcisuss: " Young nyphm, why do you wish to remain silent instead of comfrontling me about your obvius feeling for me?" he qeustioned her

echo: " remain silent" was all she could say

narcisuss: " yes? that is what i said? do you wish to come over here"

ehco could not object and simply replyed " yes i wish" and walked gracefuly to his side.... it was then that they were interuoted by a stranger from the woods

[just come in with your charecter...]

[Daydreamer]

Alania galloped through the garden on her horse Amor she laughed as Amor increased her speed, Alania's brown wavy hair flew behind her as they galloped through the forest she stopped her horse "need a rest" she laughed as Amor answered her "yes please" she got off and led her to the stream and let go of her mane. Amor jumped in the water splashing Alania as she giggled. Alania raised her skirt slightly as she waded into the water closing her eyes as the cold stream rushed around her feet Amor came over and nuzzled her cheek. Alania raised one hand and patted her cheek

[LoveOnHerArms]

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[aphrodite]

shure !

in the distance narcisuss could hear the pounding hoofbeats of a running horse. with a puzzled look he utrned to echo " were you expecting someone?" he asked with a slightly deispleased voice. " were you?" she replyed as her answer meaning no.

[Daydreamer]

Alania got up and lied down on Amor's back looking up to the tree branches she raised her hand and played with the wind making them shake and dance to her pleasure she laughed lightly not knowing she was being watched

Amor craned her neck up then catching the scent of someone else

[aphrodite]

down the stream aways echo could see a girl and her horse standing in the water. echo just watched for she could say nothing, narcisuss, on the other hand said nothing and contiued to gaze at his "perfect" reflection. his complection a sunkissed tan, his eye a icebreaker blue, his pearl like white smille smiling back at him with bleak obsession

[Daydreamer]

Amor gave a loud whinny and pawed the water splashing Alania

Alania turned around still lying down she patted Amor's neck trying to calm her "shh....what is it girl" she said in a soft-spoken voice that could make anyone feel reasured

[aphrodite]

echo herd her soothing words and quikly repeated them to alow narcisuss the knowlege that someone else was there " it girl" she said while pionting down the stream. but narcisuss was angered that she had interupted him " stupid girl! do not pay atteintion to her only me! i am perfect and you have tooken time away from me and my concentration!" he said in furry " pay attention... to me" echo repeated his words sadly and beggingly in a different order making them her own tears rolled silently down her rosey cheeks as she fallowed the banks away from narcisuss to the strange girl and her horse

[Daydreamer]

Amor raised her head "theres someone over there" she nickered to her

Alania sat up and patted her neck she looked up seeing and hearing narcisuss "what an conceited and self-centered idiot" she mumbled and saw the sad echo coming towards her

Amor took a step towards Echo seeing her tear-streaked face

[aphrodite]

echo being reviled to be able to speak mumbled " over theres a idiot" she rearanged the words. she wiped her eyes as her clear wings drooped and dragged on the ground as she walked her green eyes were filled with confusion and tears but ni matter what she would always love narcisuss becuase her heart was to quik to forgive and forgett

[Daydreamer]

Alania jumped off Amor and smiled "are you allright" she asked the girl looking worried

Amor walked over to Echo and lightly touched her cheek

[aphrodite]

ech smiled sadly and repeated the word " allright" in a small fragile voice. in the mean while, upstream was still starring at his elegant reflection in the stream adirming how you could see his veins if he flexed his mussclues a certain way and how his eyes seemed to twinkle if he blinked them this way and that

[Daydreamer]

Alania looked up and saw the man she frowned and looked at Amor and smiled "would you like to see something funny" she asked Echo
Amor bobbed her head up and down

[aphrodite]

echo smiled with a little more ease now and said a little louder than her normal mumur; " see something funny" as she watched they horse bob her haed in a strange manner

[Daydreamer]

Alania smiled "allright then"

Amor took of at a breakneck gallop towards the man and stopped in front of him and created a huge wage drenching narcisuss, Amor gave a shrill whine that sounded like a laugh

Alania smiled "there he gets what he deserves" she says and laughs as Amor paws at the water

[aphrodite]

echo watched wide-eyed as the horse charged towards narcisuss. she smiled as the huge waved covered narcisuss and drenched him to the bone.but narcisuss did not join them in thier humor. he was enraged as he got to his feet. he pulled hie sopping wet shirt over his head and chunked onto the rock wwith furry " how dare you!" he said with eyes glowing with anger " who do you think you are? and why dont you learn to control your beast?!" he spat with hatred

[Daydreamer]

Alania laughed "i do control my beast" she said putting stress on the words as Amor galloped to her and rested her muzzle on her palm "i think i am Alania" she said rolling her eyes "i do believe that I dare putting someone like you where they belong" she said narrowing her eyes

[aphrodite]

nrcisuss puffed if chest out a little in pride " someone like me has honor and etiqute amd belongs in this world unlike uneducatted intolerable nobodies, such as yourself" he said with sass and an triuphant smile. echi sat down and muttered the words " someone like me..." she said saddly

[Daydreamer]

Alania glared at him "uneducated...intolerable' she said "would you look at yourself.....you care for no one except for yourself..that is pathetic, your pathetic" she crossed her arms "and..your very very ugly"

[aphrodite]

narcisuss was now in a state of no return. the slow trickling stream now rushed with all the furry of a flood. " do you have any idea who you are dealing with? stupid girl speak no further, say not one word, fore i love only myself not out of my own doing!" he was infuriated. the waters rushed faster with every wird he spoke. echo sat silenty watching waiting on what she didnt know... it was then that an glowing red orbs descened from the sky. it was beautiful and flowing as it came closer to the ground

[Daydreamer]

Alania looked at the waves she jumped back slightly not wanting to get caught in them she grabbed onto Amor's mane to steady herself she looked at narcisuss while he was talking. When she saw the red orbs she shook her head *ok whats going on* she thought to herself as Amor gave a loud whinnie. Alania wanted to get on Amor's back and gallop off but her gaze was fixed on the orbs, curiously she looked at narcisuss "what are you doing" she said aloud not tearing her gaze away from them

[aphrodite]

narcisuss was as clueless as she was. finaly the orb reached the groud and white light forced them to shield their eyes. from this light stepped beautiful aphrodite, the godess of love. she had been watching narcisuss for years and finaly took action " narcisuss , sin of phoesidon and mortal, you have insulted love itself and in by doing so you have insulted me" echo stood up with bravery in her voice she said " you have insulted me!" she yelled at narcisuss aphrodite looked at the young nymph with gentle eyes " come here echo" she knew that hera had punished her out of jelousy with a curse of only being able to speak what others say. then she turned to alania " tell me what you have wihtnessed" she said calmly

[Daydreamer]

Alania stood there her mouth gaping open she looked at aphrodite a goddess she could barely compose herself to speak she looked at Echo. She still held onto Amor's Mane. Amor nickered to aphrodite. Alania closed her mouth and looked at narcisuss she glared at him as she turned back at aphrodite "that this man doesn't know the meaning of love for others" she said leaning on Amor. "and that he has no respect for anyone, except himself" she said carefully. She didn't like where this was going, she was standing in front of a goddess and to be honest she was scared.

[aphrodite]

"thank you" she said with a gentle smile. she turned back to narcisuss " you shall love yourself and only yourself internaly as punishment for your crulety. but also you must serve me as a warrior thuogh the others will not like you, you must honor love and the wishes of others!" she said her beautiful voice striken with anger. three of her most decoreted warriors appeared; ismeal, misael and david.

[Daydreamer]

Alania looked at the warriors and then at aphrodite. "can something like this even be happening" she mumbled to herself she glanced at narcisuss, what this goddess was saying was all fair, but wait, she thought was he cursed before the goddess came. This was so confusing she thought as she gripped Amor's mane tighter watching what would happen next

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