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Post by Man O' War Lover Thu Jan 20, 2011 11:49 pm

Suddenly I bolted forward down the hill, I would follow and damand another chalenge. I saw his lone figure in the shadows of the tree line. My stride grew wider, my front leg's kicked up dirt and threw it behind me. I was a going a dangurus speed but I was gaining. I drew closer, my feet barly touched the ground. I kicked into a faster gear, I was a black demon on a hunt for another stallion. Then at the tree line I stopped, I would be quiet. My pace a quick but soundliss walk. I stopped at the edg of the shadows of the trees. I saw a large feild before me a heard of horses not far away. The black stallion praticly just like me stood not far from theme watching for intruder's. Then I ran in the shadows the echo of hoof beat's the only sound I made, no one could see me, not even the stud. I was a confusing horse let theme try and keep up with the sounds to try and ketch me. I didn't know if I was scaring foal's or old mares in the heard, or forcing the young stallions to scot out and look for me. But I did know I was faster and I had the shadow's. Let the black stud come for me.

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Post by Guest Fri Jan 21, 2011 12:42 pm

Shadow's Hidden Dream: I freeze in the water when I hear the stallion then bolt out of the small pond and gallop back to my mother, even though I was now a full grown mare. When I reach her, she already has her ears flattened against her head and her teeth bared aggressively at the hidden stallion, the white of her eyes showing. I stand beside her facing the opposite direction and pin my ears back, looking for the stallion but can't find him in the shadows.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Fri Jan 21, 2011 12:57 pm

I run through the fersom blackniss of night my nostril's flaring and eye's large. They know I'm hear and I keep to the shadow's waiting for the black stallion to come for me. I stop to see a mare run from the pond over to another they stand close together and I wait. I wasn't hear for any of theme, I was hear for him, the black stallion, and I would not leave tell I won. I would not runaway and forget the fight. I was hear to chalenge him. I jumped into a gallop and in a burst I emerged from the shadow's. Though it was almost dark the sinking sun gave a hint of light for theme to see me, let thme. My face was no longer handsome but in a terable exspresion of hate and anger. I let out my battle cry and sudenly came to a halt. i pawed the ground tearing up the earth and tossed my head. I rose into the air screaming scaring any of the othere horses who stood by. I then came back down and waited for a awnser.

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Post by Guest Tue Jan 25, 2011 12:57 am

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The young stallions scent had long told me he was here before he showed himself. Let him hide. I thought amusedly in my head. My slender black ears laced back against my cranium as he begun to make my herd a little bit nervous. Seeing a flicker of movement towards the north-east, I turn to look. My eye's fell on the form of the young stallion who reared up and screamed his challenge. Squealing I lunge forward a few feet, the whites of my eyes and the fine red lining of my nostrils showing, my sharp front hooves slamming back onto the ground forcefully from my weight. A deep growl, almost hissing, noise erupted from my throat as I snapped my bared teeth at him. Nose wrinkled back in disgust, I flick my tail in motion for the mares to back up some and take the foals with them.

"You pesky fool!" I snarled, my head snaking into the air but my eyes keep trained on him. "How dare you follow me here." My voice now took on a deadly low tone. My whole form was still as a statue as I stood there not making a move. "I told you, you are not going to fight me until you have fought the rest of the stallions." Eye's flickering in a glow of rage, I shake my ebony coloured head causing my thick slightly wavey forlock to fall over my face.

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Post by Guest Tue Jan 25, 2011 7:49 pm

Shadow in the Mist: I bare my teeth at the young stallion when he emerges from the forest, but back off at El Sheton's command and trot to the edge of the forest, out of the two stallion's way. I stop and turn to watch the stallions with my daughter at my side, our pitch black coats blending in with the shadows of the trees.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Sat Feb 05, 2011 4:46 pm

I bare my teeth and scream coward! Fight me, let's finish what you and I started! Tell one of us dies! I rear my forleg's scaring the air shacking my head with my black main flowing around me. I come back to the ground and strick him with my slender forleg. I would finish this and not run away like a coward.

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Post by Guest Sat Feb 05, 2011 6:11 pm

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I squeal my rage when one of his powerful legs strike me, but I make no move to fight him back. Instead I remain where I was with a toss of my head and pinned ears. "Keep this up and I will have no choice but to hurt you." I snap, tail flicking back and forth agitatedly. "You make speak your words, but they do not harm me."

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Post by Man O' War Lover Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:31 pm

"I'm hear to claim land for my family." I said. "And I'm not leaving tell I get some." I spat.

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Post by Guest Sun Feb 06, 2011 11:00 pm

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Pinning my ears tighter I shake my head. "You'll have to search else where." I state flatly. "There is many lands, but this is not one that is available. Only those that live here with their herds reign under me." Flicking my tail, I look at my mares and foals quickly then return my gaze to the stallion.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:07 am

"Well there is noy enough room for the both of us hear. I'm bringing my heard in tomarrow and I don't take order's from othere stallion's." I narrowed my eye's and lowerd my head with my ear's pined back. "If you don't like that then that's your problem." I said sharply.

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Post by Guest Mon Feb 07, 2011 2:26 pm

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Instantly my eyes lit up. "Bring your mares on my land, and i'll kill them like the last bastard that brought his here!" I hiss, my voice fully showing that I truely meant it. "Your disrespectfullness will earn you nothing here." I say flatly as I flick my tail and stand straighter, ready to battle for my land if needed. Snorting loudly I snake my head into the air. "I'll be damned if your type ever lives on my land." I spat disgustedly.

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Post by Guest Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:12 pm

Shadow's Hidden Dream: I watch the two stallions argue with my ears flattened against my head irritably and aggressively swish my tail. I perk my ears when I hear El Sheton say that he will kill the other stallion's herd if they are brought to the land as a dark smirk creeps its way onto to face. I was usually very calm and nice, but I had still inherited my father bloodthirstiness and cruelty, and my mother's apathetic attitude toward blood and violence. I look over at my mother to find she was calmly grazing by the trees, completely ignoring the fight that was taking place .

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Post by Man O' War Lover Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:09 pm

I lughed "So much for a kind stallion, killing inocent mare's and foal's. Wow that's realy mercyful of you." I said. "What a bad exsample you are, keep you stupid land if that's how you feel I don't see your name on it thow, so I can come and go as I please." I said turning to leave. "Just trie and kill my family."

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Post by Guest Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:48 am

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"Innocent?!" I spat. "Anything that is in company of a rat is not even close to innocent." I say disgustedly before narrowing my eyes in a deadly manner. "Don't take my words lightly foolish stallion. I promise you that I will keep them, and I always keep a promise." Raising my head I look him up and down, almost visibly I bring my head back as if he reeked. "Any stallion that would knowingly put his herd in danger obviously does not deserve one." Those that knew me, knew I was not playing. I would kill. Not for myself, but for my herds sake. Already the land had its max of herds. My first thought would always be that of my herd and the future of the foals. Even if the stallion did come here with his supposed herd, he would end up finding himself seeking for a new land a few weeks later. Though this land was very large, you had to consider that each horse ate so much a day. If the land had to support another herd, it would soon become like the dessert part of it.
Flicking my tail I watch him closely. The muscles under my shimmering black pelt twitched and moved gracefully. Snorting I snake my head into the air as I rear up to my full height and strike out in the air, screaming my final warning.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:10 am

" A stallion's heard is alway's in danger." I say turning to leave, "Know if your just going to talk all be on my way, not beacuse you thank your so scary and I don't thank you are, but beacuse I'm board and want to go home, I can bring my heard hear any time I like. You don't own this place and who want's to live next to you any way." I turn sliding around on my back feet and walk off toured the tree line's when I hear the percing whinny of Jafar my uncle.

(Jafar is a silver dapple stallion, highly musculer crested nech, dark untrusting eye's, brother of Shetan's mother, he is very thick and strong, he has a weaird acsent, his main and tail start out black then fad to a yellow white color and the end's, he is pure Arab and from a long line of fighting stallion's.)

~Jafar~

I walked slowly my sleek strong muscles rippled under my silk coat, I carreyd my small hadsome head high. I saw Shetan and another black stallion and a heard standing around. I had followed Shetan's scent, his mother had asked or had damanded I find him. I walked slower and let my self be known "Hello, I'm Jafar of the fighting clan, may I aproach lead stallion El Sheton? I only wish to return my cousin Shetan back to his family."

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Post by Guest Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:27 pm

El Sheton~
I would have attacked that smart mouthed brute that though he was all tough, but I did not. Solely because he wasnt facing me and another stallion came. Snorting I spit where the black one had stood, then turn my perfectly shaped head to face this other stallion. Yet as I do, I mutter under my breath. "Fool. I'll let the guardians take care of you." Pricking my ears I look over this other dapple coloured stallion with suspicious eyes. At least he had the decentcy (sp) to address himself and state where he was from and what his business was. Dipping my head I nod. "You may." I say strongly. Turning my head I nicker to my herd. There wasnt any real danger. I no longer felt the need to defend my land from this other stallion named Sheton. He appeared weak. Yes he was a good fighter, but fighting only got you so far. You had to have the wits and determination to live on land such as this. Flicking my tail, I swing my head further summining my herd.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:44 pm

~Jafar~

I bow my head to the other stallion then look at Shetan, "Well I see your still alive, how bout we go home and leave El Sheton alone, he allready must have more truble and does not have time to put up with you."

~Shetan~

The black stallion Jafar called El Sheton did not know Jafar like I did, he was crule but I guess that's what made a lead stallion. I thossed my head and walked past Jafar giving him a look that would make the end of his hooves curle.

~Jafar~

"Please forgive him El Sheton he's a lot like his sire alway's jumping in without thinking about it first. That's why I have to take in that I'm not a very good teatcher for him, oh he's such a handfull, but I'm shore you know how I feel, sorry for disturbing you and your heard." I paused and thought I heard the whinny of Adiva. "I thought I told you to stay back by the tree's as I got your brother." I called. I turned to El Shaton. "Sorry she's a little hard headed." She galloped toured us then came to a stop only a few yard's away.
(Adiva (means gentle in arabic)
Color- white
Eye's-brown
Breed-Arabic but she is not so shore of it.
Age- 3
If you want El Shaton can end up beeing her sire, she does not know who her parent's are she was taken in by Jafar's clan as a foal.)



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Post by Guest Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:52 pm

Shadow's Hidden Dream: I perk my small ears forward when El Sheton nickers to the herd then immediately trot over to him with my pitch black Arabian tail flagged out like a banner. I dip my head respectively when I reach him then look at Jafar curiously, wondering how a respective calm stallion like him could be related to such a arrogant loud mouthed brute like Shetan. I flick my ear back then turn my head to my mother and nudge her neck when she comes to my side.

Shadow in the Mist: I watch the stallion as he turns away from the El Sheton, but still do not relax even when El Steton tells us it's okay. I pin my ears back again when a new stallion enters the meadow who, according to his scent, was related to the young black stud that had challenged the leader. I look at my daughter who was closer to the two studs then I would like and walk over to her, but continue to watch the two foreign stallions. I stop at her side with my ears still flattened against my black head, showing my obvious displeasure at having the two stallions here. I snort and stomp my hoof when a mare enters the feild from the other stallion's herd.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Wed Feb 09, 2011 2:02 pm

~Adiva~

I look at the tall black stallion, a older version of Shetan my brother. Battle scared and strong he stood ith his head helld high, he looked familure but I said nothing. He had many mare's and yung stallion's. I walked slowly forward. "My name is Adiva I'm Shetan's sister." I turn and look at my brother.

~Shetan~

I sigh and turn to face El Sheton, "I have already introduced myself but I'm Shetan." I bowed my head then looked back up at the tall stallion, I slowly pricked my small curved fine ear's. I was like a small foal peeking throw my silky forlock up at a stallion when they get in trouble. I cleard my throat and said "I'm sorry for this intrusion lead stallion El Sheton, I'm much more well mannerd than I have acted and wish that you acept my very deep apolagy's."

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Post by Guest Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:46 pm

(yeah that would be cool)

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Though Jafar acted innocent and formal. He had a dark sinister, that he seemed to hide. Still cautious, I pin my ears momentarily and flick my tail as I stomp a back hoof, telling Dream to step back. Returning my eyes to the stallions infront of me, then to the young filly that galloped over. Raising my head higher and pricking my ears in slight interest for a second. I lick my lips thoughtfully then flick my tail as I listen to Shetan's words.

(I'll edit this in the morning, adding more. My dad just wants me off right now.)

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Post by Guest Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:34 pm

Shadow's Hidden Dream: I look at El Sheton and lower my head respectively as I take a few steps back. I glance at the filly before turning around and walking over to the pond on the other side of the clearing. I lower my head when I reach it and take a few sips then start to walk back to my mother but stop when the scent of another stallion reaches my nostrils. I look over at the others who had yet to notice the scent then at where the scent was coming from then back at the others. I think for a minute then decide to go investigate and quietly slink over to the trees, quickly disappearing into the shadows of the forest. I stop and look back to see if anyone noticed I was gone then take off toward the scent at a slow gallop.

Shadow in the Mist: I look over at my daughter when she walks over to the pond then return my attention back to the two stallions. I look coldly at the filly when she stats her name then look at her brother and curiously perk my ears forward at his words before flicking them back once again.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:25 pm

~Jafar~ I watched the horse closly as she walks to the pound, then run's out into the tree's. I stood puzzled and waiting for El Shaton's responce.....

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Post by Guest Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:36 pm

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I listened to the one they called Adiva who stated she was the sister of Shetan. Flicking my tail, my head instantly snaps to the direction where Dream went. Raising my head higher, I let out a piercing neigh calling her back. Shaking my head I smile for a moment. For a mere second, reality had slipped away and the old memories flooded in my thoughts. Sighing I return to the present. Shetan apologized, surprisingly. Nodding my head, I mutually accept it. For now that would do. I still did not trust them. Taking a step forward, I address them. "Besides fetching Shetan, why do you come here." I ask.

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Post by Man O' War Lover Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:51 pm

~Jafar~
I smiled ofcourse he would aske me that. "I'm hear to fetch Shetan that is all but if it would be allright I would like to ask you if my family can stay just the night hear then will be on our way. There is only two other's a mare and foal, Shetan's mother and brother, the mare is my sister. Or we can go and leav you to your heard I don't want to be a bother we wouldn't be hear if... I pused to look at Shetan. "Well you probably know what I mean."

~Adiva~
"Mother and brother wont be a problem." For some reason I wanted to learn more about this stallion.

~Shetan~
I did not know why Jafar wanted us to stay over night but if Adiva agread then I was OK with it.

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I draw in a thoughtful breath, as I release it with it came my answer. "Yes, you may stay the evening." I say slowly, again throwing a look towards the woods were Dream had disappeared. Though I was not surprised. She was one that like to travel around and explore.

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