Re: A Misunderstood Pegasus (M)

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:14 pm

Diablo stopped,snorting. He thought Adrian was joking,his head lowered as he felt the nasty substance on his body. He then shot up and reared,throwing Adrian into the tree behind.

Choco covered Angel's eyes,looking away himself. "Good lord.."

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:19 pm

Adrian slammed into the tree with a thud before he collasped on the ground. He clutched his stomach and groaned. "I warned you."

Shadow had stopped bucking and was rubbing the vomit trying to get it off her face. It stank and it burned her eyes.

Bobby continued to laugh on the ground. She pointed at Adrian. "The look on your face!" she paused to breath before she finished. "Was classic!"

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:21 pm

Diablo walked away toward a nearby pond,rolling in it to get the puke off his back. "Whatever."

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:26 pm

Shadow trotted over to the pond with Diablo and dunk her head in the water. She pulled her head back out after a minute and shook herself vigorously.

Carniva stepped over Bobby and walked over to Adrian. She nudged his back. "Are you okay?"

Adrian shook his head. "I'm just waiting for my stomach to settle."

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:27 pm

Diablo walked deeper into the water,his wings and above showing as he then plopped himself under it,nothing showing now.

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:32 pm

Shadow looked up and saw that Diablo had disappeared. "Diablo?"

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:33 pm

He swam deeper and deeper,his big and wide body allowing him to hold his breath for about an hour or so. He rested at the bottom,enjoying the cooling feeling as he looked up to the blurry sun.

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:39 pm

Angel lifted her head and looked at Adrian. She stroked Choco and whispered in his ear. "Can I go see if Adrian is okay?"

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:41 pm

Choco turned his head to view Angel,then nodded. "Sure."

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:46 pm

Angel slid off his back and approached Adrian. "Are you okay?" She placed her hand on his back.

Adrian shuddered under her touch. "I'm fine," he responded.

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:47 pm

Choco watched closely,not really trusting a fallen angel.

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:51 pm

(Hey, let's take a little intermission because I need to ask you a few questions. Also, I can't think of how to respond quite yet. Is that okay?)

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:06 pm

(Yes it's fine xD)

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:10 pm

(Okay, I've started writing the first chapter of the this story and I'm stuck on when the POV switches from Shadow's to Diablo's. I'm looking at the first post that you made and I can't figure out how to pull it apart and re-word it then adding something to to make his PO a little bit longer. Do you have any suggestions?)

by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:11 pm

(I wish I could help.. If I knew what POV and PO were xD)

by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:17 pm

(POV means Point of View. I know that when I introduced Shadow I included something from her past. Maybe you can tell me why Diablo left the heavens?? Oh and PO was actually supposed to be POV, I just forgot the V.)

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