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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:19 pm

(Oh! Ok I can tell a background. Diablo left the heavens because of the wars. He had a fight with Mindy after a war,running away from the heavens and then a few days later he found Shadow.)
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Post by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:32 pm

(So, Diablo earned a great reputation in the heavens and after one war he got into a fight with Mindy and left? Geez, what did they fight about?)
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:38 pm

(That,is to never be known. As I like to quiz the readers xD)
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Post by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:42 pm

(Alright! Thank you Zelda! I'm logging off now for a little while but I will be coming back on later. Bye!)
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:46 pm

(Ok bye! Your welcome!!)
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Post by Stormsong Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:24 pm

Adrian reached around and touched Angel's hand gingerly.

Bobby had now busied herself with trying to get Harvy to his feet. "Now come on, you have to help me out now," she complained to the foal.
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sat Feb 02, 2013 10:14 pm

Choco snorted to Adrian,his hoof pawing the ground as he looked deeply into his 'charming' eyes.
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 8:37 am

Angel froze, her heart thundering in her chest.

Adrian's hand carefully moved from her hand and cupped her face gently. He could sense her pulse acellerating.

Shadow looked deep into the pond and splashed into the water a little ways. "Diablo?"
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:02 pm

Diablo saw the waves of Shadow,his face growing a childish smirk. He slowly swam behind Shadow,making his way out of the water without a noise.

Choco stood still. If only he could read minds! Choco snorted and wished Diablo was here.
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:08 pm

Harvy slowly lifted until he balanced on his skinny legs. "Look! Look everybody! I'm doing it! I'm doing it!"

Bobby clapped her hands. "See? I told you so."

Carniva had moved away when the angel approached Adrian and was grazing nearby. She lifted her head and smiled at the foal. "Great job Harvy!"

Shadow continued went a little deeper into the water. She spalshed all over the place. "Diablo!"
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:10 pm

Choco jerked his head to Harvy. He smiled at the foal,and neighed a congrats to him. "Nice Harvy!"

Diablo approached slowly behind her. His wings expanded as the tips slowly sinked into the water. He was going to splash her,and greatly to.
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:22 pm

Angel nuzzled his hand and gripped his arm with both of her hands. She smiled sweetly at him.

Adrian froze when she touched him. Sensing the same tingling feeling that anyone else would feel.

Shadow splashed the water again. "Diablo." She felt tears coming to her eyes.

(Guess what????? Very Happy )
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:50 pm

(What?)

With one quick gust of wind,his wings flew toward Shadow and drove water all over her body. Like a tremendous wave,she was caught.

Choco looked toward the two,neighing to Angel and pointing his ears at Harvy.
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:58 pm

The wave hit the back of Shadow legs so hard that it drug her feet out from under her. She let out a high pitched neigh just before her head went under.

Harvy took several steps forward then picked up the pace. He wagged his fluffly tail in concentration.

Angel looked up when Choco whinnied to her and pulled away, her face turning bright red. She looked over at Harvy and smiled. "Good job Harvy!"

(I got the first chapter up! Do you want to see it?)
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:07 pm

Choco trotted to Harvy,running at his pace as he encouraged the foal to look up. "Don't look down,it will only make you more scared."

Diablo rushed into the water after Shadow,leaping up and diving. He swam further out,his eyes opened underwater and shining at Shadow.
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:15 pm

(Did you want to see it?)

Harvy looked up at Choco with big brown eyes. "Like this?"

Shadow had her eyes squeezed shut and her cheeks puffed out from her holding her breath. As soon as her head went under, all her muscles froze and she slowly sank deeper and deeper into the water.
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:22 pm

(Oh yes! Sorry,I'm on and off xD)

Diablo rolled his eyes,smiling under water. He swam to her,opening his mouth as little bubbles spurted out. He gripped her mane quickly and dragged her above water,gravity taking no tole underwater.

Choco nodded,laughing. "Just relax! Remember how you used to run."
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:33 pm

(Alright, I'm giving you the link but just so you know, I have my real name up on this website so.... That will be our little secret. Smile Here's the link: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/miranda_reyes/a-misunderstood-pegasus/chapter/1 )

Shadow felt herself pulling pulled upwards by her mane. She opened her eyes and sucked in a breath of air when her head broke the surface. The whites of her eyes showed with fear and she started kicking out, trying frantically to keep her body a float.

Harvy giggled and picked up a little bit of speed. He paused a moment to sneeze and ended up falling back on his butt.
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:36 pm

Diablo tried to calm her. "Shadow! Just hold open your wings!"

Choco nudged Harvy back up,giggling.
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:50 pm

Adrian stood and walked back over to the foal and ruffled his fluffy mane.

Shadow flapped her wings desperately. She let out distressed whinnies.

Harvy felt Choco nudge him back to his feet and the foal took off running. He bucked his heels. his laughter ringing through the air.
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:53 pm

Choco lifted his head,his ears pricked toward Diablo's direction. "Anyone else hear that?"

Diablo pushed her toward land,feeling quite sorry.
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:54 pm

(Brb dinner.)
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 3:26 pm

(kk)
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Post by Stormsong Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:26 pm

Everyone looked in the direction that Choco pointed in and noitced Diablo pushing Shadow ashore.

Shadow felt her hooves thud on solid ground her and dragged herself from the water. Her wings drug on the ground, too wet and too heavy to lift them.
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Post by ZeldaWolfy Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:59 pm

Choco rushed to Shadow and Diablo,snorting. "What happened?!" he complained.

Diablo frowned.
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