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Post by horsegodess Tue Jan 15, 2013 8:13 pm

(haha okay. thanks. i was just wondering.)

Pince had now moved down to her rump, and moved himself so he was almost parallel to her rump. It was time. The time for Prince to start a family. The time that Prince secured his love for a mare. The time that Prince started the rest of his life. this moment was now. Prince nibbled at her dock now, nosing it out of the way. His tool began to slightly unsheathe itself.

(kinda ani-climactic. hehe sorry)
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Post by Greed Wed Jan 16, 2013 7:20 pm

[ haha yeah, i kinda went over and beyond with that description... but whatevers xD ;;; and don't worry about it, lol! It's all good. ]

Saffron turned her head to gaze at him in a thought of wonder for a second. She didn't believe in love at first sight - no. So she couldn't say she loved this stallion. But if he was about to become the father to her children, she would learn to love him eventually, right? That's the way it worked, right...? Saffron had no idea. Being a young mare in her first heat, she was young and inexperienced. She knew she'd mate for life, like her father had with her mother, unless she was stolen away by another stallion... The heavy thoughts weighed down on her a second. When it came down to things, deciding to have a family was a life-altering decision, and it could go one of two ways: well, or terribly. Snorting, Saffron decided it was a risk she was going to take. Bobbing her head slightly she brushed her tail out of the way, planting herself firmly in the ground, braced for his weight.
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Post by horsegodess Thu Jan 17, 2013 6:35 pm

(hehe you know, after you and i snapped at each other, I thought we were just kind of continuing this thread because we had to. i thought i was not going to like this thread. But it turns out, i love rping with you. you are a great writer who provides me with stuff to work with, and I think our personalities just mesh. we both like a good joke right? you're probably my favorite in fact!)

Prince detected her signal giving him permission to mount her. First, he nosed her swollen vulva, beckoning the heat scent out of it, he needed this to become fully sexually stimulated. His tool unsheathed all the way. As her heat scent poured out, he lifted his muscular neck high in the air and cocked his head. he extended his top lip. His tool erected at intervals, hitting his belly. Judging from her scent, she was high in heat it was high time for her to be fertilized. And Prince was high ready. He moved his back hooves forward, allowing himself to gently mount her He remained on her back for a moment, his tool fully erected. He waited for approval from Saffron to enter.
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Post by Greed Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:16 pm

[ haha i'm sorry for snapping. I kinda have an attitude. And I really love rping with you too!! :) To be honest, you're the only person who RPs with me, but you're an awesome writer and I love working with you! It's awesome. :D ]

Saffron snorted as she felt his nose against her. She stiffened for half a second before flicking her tail against his shoulder playfully, and in a sudden bout of explainable impatience. Saffron's front hooves dug into the dirt as he landed on her back, gently, but his weight was still a bit more than she'd first expected. She felt his tool against her, which didn't help her impatience in the least. Saffron turned her head halfway around, giving him a sort of sly, seductive look before pushing against him gently to let him know she approved of him going further. Despite the fact this would be her first time, she'd decided to throw caution to the wind and do it. Anyways... the pain would be much greater if she returned to her father without a mate.
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Post by horsegodess Fri Jan 18, 2013 6:28 pm

When Saffron backed a step or two back into Prince, this caused the tip of his tool to gently press against the swollen lips of her vulva. Prince thrusted his hips forward, pushing his tool inside of her. He gently began thrusting, carful not to hurt Saffron.
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Post by Greed Fri Jan 18, 2013 7:06 pm

Saffron whinnied, taking an unintentional step forward, trying to adjust to the strange feeling. Saffron snorted as he began thrusting, tossing her head uncomfortably. She definitely wasn't used to this, and she wondered if she'd ever adjust to it.
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Post by horsegodess Fri Jan 18, 2013 7:26 pm

Prince took a step forward as Saffron did. He continued to gently thrust inside of her. "you doing okay?" Prince said as he leaned his head down to her ear.

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Post by Greed Fri Jan 18, 2013 7:54 pm

Saffron was somewhat startled at his question, as if she'd forgotten he was there. With a heaving sigh, Saffron nodded, "Y-yeah, I'm fine, I promise."

[ haha me too.. ]
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Post by horsegodess Fri Jan 18, 2013 8:52 pm

(bed time. night!)

Prince pumped in and out, soon releasing his seed into her. he arched his neck and flagged his tail up and down, indicating that he was releasing.
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Post by Greed Fri Jan 18, 2013 8:56 pm

[ All righty! Goodnight! I don't know if I'll be able to post tomorrow and the majority on Sunday, my BFFL is coming over! <3 ]

Saffron had finally adjusted to him, finding the interaction more of a painful-pleasure type thing instead of all pain. As soon as he'd released, Saffron snorted and eased away from him, swishing her tail and turning around to face him, grooming his neck gently. I have to introduce him to my father now, I suppose... My father can't come breaking us apart now. Whether he likes it or not, Prince is going to be the father of my children, and of his grandchildren. I hope he doesn't get angry at me this time... Saffron stepped back a bit and looked over at Prince rather nervously, "Umm... i-is it all right if you come with me, so I can introduce you to my father? His name is Apollo. I don't know exactly where he is right now, though..."

Turning her head away from Prince for a second, without a second thought, Saffron let out a low nicker, trying to pinpoint the location of her father, wherever he was.
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Post by horsegodess Sat Jan 19, 2013 8:53 am

(that's so fun!

Prince dismounted. He was starting a family. When Saffron said he would be meeting her father, he became more collected. He pulled in his tool, shook out his mane, and puffed out his chest. "i would be honored to meet your father" Prince said. he gave her a playful nip on her mane, reassuring her that no father would get between them. Prince scanned the horizon as Saffron nickered, looking for a horse coming in their direction. Then he spotted the majestic stallion. His pride soon turned into fear, but he managed to stand tall and be strong.

Apollo heard the faint nickering of his daughter. He trotted over to the pair. "well hello there" Apollo said mockingly, almost spitting at Prince. He looked him up and down, bobbing his head.
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Post by Greed Sat Jan 19, 2013 5:57 pm

[ Turns out her mom wouldn't let her stay the night because she'd had a laser-tag party & sleepover yesterday night... Oh well! it was still oodles of fun. ]

Saffron smiled gently at his confidence, but inwardly she was afraid her father would scare him off. She knew she wanted to give this stallion a try - she wanted to be able to fall in love with him, so that when their colt or filly was born, she could freely say she was in love with the stallion who was the father of her children, not just that their child was a product of her father's will for his lineage to flow further down. Snorting, Saffron looked up when she saw her father come into view. She'd opened her mouth to say something, however her father spoke first. When he said what he did, Saffron pinned her ears against her head and stomped her hoof, "Father! Be polite!" Saffron composed herself and stood up straighter, taking a few steps closer to Prince. "This is Prince, and he's my mate now."
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Post by horsegodess Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:16 am

Apollo heard what she said about having a mate now, and he became angry. "Not without my consent you arent!" Apollo said, his ears laying closer to his head. He moved between Saffron and Prince.

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Post by Greed Sun Jan 20, 2013 12:25 pm

Saffron snorted as her father separated the two of them. "It's too late to say that now anyways!" Saffron retorted, cantering around her father in attempt to get back beside Prince. Why was her father acting like this? What had she done to deserve his anger this time? Prince was a strong stallion. He had proved himself when he'd saved her from having to deal with Cloud again. Why couldn't her father just accept her choice and let her be happy? What was it about her mother's death that had turned him into such a beast? "Just stop it!" Saffron snapped without thinking. She fell quiet for a second afterwards. She'd never raised her voice at her father before, and she had shocked herself into silence. "Just...stop it," Saffron said in a lower tone. "He didn't do anything wrong. I don't know why you can't just let me choose who my mate is going to be. I'm not a little girl anymore." Saffron turned her head and averted her eyes, staring at the grass as if it was about to sprout wings and fly away. Anything to distract her. Anything.
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Post by horsegodess Sun Jan 20, 2013 2:40 pm

(oh my goodness your post just about put me to tears.) (im going to have to be really strong to post apollo continuing to be mean to her)

Apollo started questioning her and yelling at her about why he was too late. Then a tone of voice that had never been heard from Saffron ripped his ears apart. Apollo was stunned and just stood there for a few seconds. Then just as he was about to show her her place she repeated, this time, his ears werent ripped to shreds, his heart was. Apollo could hear the sadness in her voice. for a moment, his heart wavered. She was right. Saffron was not a little filly anymore. And she certainly was not the same filly that was born in the meadow by the strong and proud Jeanette. Apollo's world had changed completely. Saffron was not the same proud horse that he had imagined her to be. Suddenly, his emotion shifted. She was not the same filly he wanted her to be! She was not his daughter! She was a disgrace! disgracing the family, him, and Jeannette! Apollo was ashamed of what his only daughter had become! Apollo needed to set her straight, and then he would find a mare, and have another foal. One who would honor the family's name! Apollo lashed out at his daughter. His anger of Jeanette's death and Saffron's rebeling had pushed him past what he could bear. Apollo's heart beat fast, and he struck out at his own daughter. His confining of his emotions for the past few weeks had drove him mad.

Prince reared up in front of Saffron. He would defend his new mate untill death.
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Post by Greed Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:02 pm

[ Aww, I'm sorry! But I suppose good writing is writing that evokes emotion, right? So I'm doing something right. And omg ;__; your post. it was amazing. ]

Saffron fell silent, fearfully gazing at her father in his silence. She'd snapped at him, and she was fairly sure no horse had ever snapped at him before. He was a stallion that demanded respect, and not snapping at him was part of that respect. Before she knew what was happening, Apollo struck out at her, but Saffron didn't move. She was stunned that her father would ever try and hurt her purposely. However, when she felt the lessened force of the blow (thanks to Prince stepping in the way) on her shoulder, she stumbled back, nearly falling over herself and her unsteady footing. When Prince made it clear he was going to fight for her, no matter what, Saffron's heart nearly stopped beating. Her father was strong, and it was likely he had more experience in fighting than Prince did. Saffron couldn't stand to see her mate - her first mate, and hopefully only - get hurt by her father. Stiffening, Saffron shoved Prince in the chest with her shoulder to get him to back up, before standing in front of her father, ears pinned. When she spoke, her voice was noticeably shaky; this was the first time she'd ever had the gut to stand up for herself, and it felt wrong to her in so many ways. "Stop it!" Saffron yelled, her voice shaking uncontrollably. "Stop! Prince is my mate now and is going to be the father of your grandchildren whether you like it or not! So don't take your anger out on him - it's not his fault! And just... just because mom isn't here to defend me anymore doesn't give you the right to go all out on me or any other horse in your arm's reach! You can't just go around being a jerk to people!"

Saffron took in a deep breath. She'd already waded into waters too deep, it was too late to back out now, so she supposed she might as well continue to pour out her feelings to her father. It'd either get him to shut up or it would send him further into a rage. Either way, she couldn't back out now anyways. She'd gone way too far, way too fast. "All my life I've been trying to live up to your expectations! And mom was the only one who ever helped me get past your inspections! You're putting me to standards no horse can live up to - not even yourself! I tried, okay?! I tried to be the perfect little filly you'd always wanted. And now that mom's gone, I don't even have a reason to live up to your expectations. I just can't do it, you understand me!? You're driving me mad! I've always tried so hard to be acceptable in your eyes. I only ever wanted to make you proud of me, but no horse can take so much pressure for as long as I have! So..." Saffron's voice broke slightly, "So why don't you just let it go already? There's no way I can live up to what you want... no matter how hard I try."

[ MY MUSE IS HERE. Say hi to it. I named it Lola. ]
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Post by horsegodess Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:33 pm

(man this thread is getting to be the most emotional one ive ever done. wow.)

Apollo did not back down when Saffron stepped into the fight, but her words knocked him down like a wrecking ball. He stumbled back. She had dug out and read every emotion inside of him. But what about all the times Apollo was strong for Saffron? How could she have figured him out so easily? Apollo made every decision for her own good. Were his opinions wrong? This was the first time Apollo had ever considered anything of this sort. Apollo thought he had been doing everything right before now. Had his whole life been a lie? Was Jeannette his safety net, picking and covering up every one of his flaws and mistakes? She was. Jeannette was Apollo's savior, and now that she was gone, Apollo fell to pieces. He finally realized this. He did not realize how much pain he had put his family through. Guilt swept over him. He suddenly felt very weak and powerless. All of his power had been subconscious. And Saffron's words had just sucked it all out of him. He just stood there, his head low and accepted his loss...He stepped back, realizing that Prince was the man in Saffron's life now. His sides heaved in defeat.

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Post by Greed Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:53 pm

[ Oh my gosh, you have no idea... ;__; this is an awesome RP though. I'm really, really glad we didn't drop it! And sorry it took me so long, I've been trying to download a horror game to play and i'm almost too scared to play it XD ]

Saffron watched as her father seemed to wither away in front of her. She stepped back a few paces, looking startled, as if she'd just shot down her father with blows instead of words. Saffron couldn't bring herself to apologize, and rebuke herself for what she'd said. It only took a few seconds, though, for Saffron to come to her sense. She cantered behind Prince and stood right behind him, somewhat afraid her father would get up and lash out at her again. She didn't know what to do anymore. What she'd said she'd meant, but she could tell it'd crushed him. Had she gone too far?

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Post by horsegodess Sun Jan 20, 2013 6:13 pm

(yeah sorry i went out to dinner.)

Apollo was no longer afraid of looking weak in front of Saffron. He could not hide anything now. "Saffron. go. your free from the dictatorship of your father." He said, indicating that she hurt him, but she was right. he continued to stand there, head low, and refused to make eye contact with Saffron.

(man oh man. im gonna crack. i can feel it)
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Post by Greed Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:36 pm

Saffron looked at her father quietly before sighing and walking over to him tenderly. "It was a blessing and a curse...daddy." Saffron murmured, just low enough that only Apollo could hear. "While it may have been too hard, you gave me something to work for, and taught me perseverance. I don't want to completely walk out on you. Maybe... maybe next year, we'll meet up again. I'll show you your grandchild. I promise...I'll still make you proud, one day, daddy. You've given me yet another thing to work for." Lifting her head, Saffron walked slowly back over to Prince, giving her father one last look before tugging gently on Prince's mane and murmuring to him, "Let's go. I can't stand to see him like this anymore."
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Post by horsegodess Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:25 am

Apollo kept his head low while his daughter whispered in his ear. He absorbed ever word into his heart. When Saffron said that she would show him his grandchild, his heart skipped a beat. A tiny seed of hope was planted in the ashes of his pride once again. When Saffron had turned and started walking away with Prince, only then he lifted his head to look at his daughter. Then he turned, and walked in the opposite direction.

Prince walked side by side with Saffron, staying close to her at all times. He knew that she would need someone more than ever, and Prince was determined to be there for her. to comfort her and to provide her with happiness. As they walked away from the breeding grounds, Prince brushed against her often, reminding her that he was there for her.
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Post by Greed Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:17 am

It took all of Saffron's willpower not to look behind her at her father's retreating figure. After living her entire life with her parents, and having both of them leave her for the most part now, she felt incredibly alone. Saffron knew Prince was there for her now, though, and she knew it. She was happy to know she wasn't completely alone. And as they walked, she felt him brush against her side frequently, and she took comfort in knowing he was trying to show he was there for her. As soon as they were far enough away from the breeding grounds, Saffron walked over to a tree and plopped down, nibbling absentmindedly at the grass, lost in her thoughts.
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Post by horsegodess Mon Jan 21, 2013 5:44 pm

Prince stood over her, providing protection. He too lowered his head to graze once in a while.

(want to time skip?)
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Post by Greed Tue Jan 22, 2013 4:10 pm

[ to the birth of the foal or what? ]
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Post by horsegodess Wed Jan 23, 2013 3:59 pm

(yeah sure.)
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