A dream come true based on a dream I had last night!

[Nicoco177]

Can you please tell me if the story was good or bad!

Rhona woke up and saw birthday banners around the room,
she noticed something wasnt right,
normally her parents would be stood around the room.
But only her pet dog Laika was there.
She patted Laika on the head and walked around the house, calling for her parents,
She went down stairs and through the back door Her Dad was there, but where was her Mum?
She noticed mum come aroung the corner, but there was a Clip Clop Clip Clop
"Happy birthday!" said mum as she came around the corner with...
A gorgeous Palomino Anglo Arabian Gelding!
She wrapped her arms around her mum and dad and shouted "thankyou! You actually got him!"
She ran and grabbed the fancy rope atached to the halter,
"Hello Smore!" she whispered in the horses ear.
To be continued...

[Guest]

;)I like it.