Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
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Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Emoticon Thu Jun 30, 2011 6:33 pm
He picked up the laptop, feeling the smooth keys under his fingers. He took a deep breath and stretched is hands, looking at the popcorn ceiling above him. He looked at the screen, the page still loading. "Fuck!" He said as he pushed the computer of his lap. He got out of bed, his barefoot touching the cold hardwood floor. It was rich in color and cost an fortune, but he had more. His father sold his business, that would set his son for life. He then took his fortune and took the rest of his savings into inheritance payments, along with the business. After an week later, he committed suicide. Jake got all the items, including the mansion. He stretched, his hands reaching high into the air. He walked towards his master bathroom. He opened the door, and turned the light on. The sink was marvelous, made of granite and was lined with stainless steel. The cabinets were made out of rich, creamy white wood. He then yawned, and started the hot bath. His tub and jets, and it was more like an jacuzzi then an tub. The water filled in less then an minute, and he stepped in the hot bath. He stretched his legs and arms as he turned on the jets. After he had enough, he turned them off and relaxed.
He got out of the tub, smelling fresh and clean and got an light red towel, then went to shave his face. The shaver was new, and his chin and neck was smooth. He tied the towel to his lower waist and stepped out, the hot bathroom was filled with cool air. He got his clothes and put them on. He had dark red cargo pants with a light red plaid shirt. He stepped into his bathroom and put his cologne on as he stepped out, combing his hair as he went. He opened the door into the long hallway. The rails were made of light colored wood, and the hallway was covered in dark blue, almost black, carpet. He took the elevator, watching it go down to where his maids were cleaning and cooking. He opened the door as the maid carefully prepared his breakfast of bacon, pancakes, eggs, and orange juice. She and the other maid were cleaning the dishes and the other dusting the living room.
"Good mourning Mr. Jake, How was your sleep?" The brunette asked me, her hazel eyes staring. "It was fine, could you put more memory foam on it?" He asked, and she nodded and left. He grabbed his fork and hit the pancakes, putting strawberry syrup on it. He drank half of his orange juice when another maid came. "Would you like some more Mr. Jake?" She asked, he nodded. She filled his cup with the orange juice, then he took an sip of it. "What the hell Mary!? I thought I told you to buy Pulp-less orange juice! Go get me different orange juice!" He yelled as Mary ran to get him Pulp-less orange juice. He took an bite of the bacon, not too fat or too crisp. He gobbled up the bacon and ate the eggs. He sat up and walked towards the door, putting his grey tennis shoes on. He opened the door to the bright sunlight on his porch, and quickly shielded his eyes from it. He walked on the cobber stone path and stepped into his Viper.
It was red with 2 black lines going from hood to back, the white leather seats clean and waxed. He shut the door and turned on the engine, hearing an loud rumble. He stepped on the pedal, making the car jerk and the engine rumble. He sped towards the gate and entered the password as it swung open. He stepped on the pedal as he jerked his speed and sped down the road to the bar. When he hit an speed limit, he slowed down. He reached an stoplight and stopped at an red light, people looking at him in every direction. He just smirked and sped when the light went green. 5 minutes of street then he hit the bar. He stepped out of the viper and shut the door, the locking it. He opened the doors to the bar and sat up to the booth, looking around. "I'll have a shot of whiskey and a glass of the best wine you have." The bartender nodded and came back minutes later. He looked at the shot, then held it and drank it. It was very strong and he almost gagged, but he drank the whiskey. He took an sip of wine, tasting the sweet, rich taste of it. He then started looking around him, it was all quiet until he heard an female voice speak to him.
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He got out of the tub, smelling fresh and clean and got an light red towel, then went to shave his face. The shaver was new, and his chin and neck was smooth. He tied the towel to his lower waist and stepped out, the hot bathroom was filled with cool air. He got his clothes and put them on. He had dark red cargo pants with a light red plaid shirt. He stepped into his bathroom and put his cologne on as he stepped out, combing his hair as he went. He opened the door into the long hallway. The rails were made of light colored wood, and the hallway was covered in dark blue, almost black, carpet. He took the elevator, watching it go down to where his maids were cleaning and cooking. He opened the door as the maid carefully prepared his breakfast of bacon, pancakes, eggs, and orange juice. She and the other maid were cleaning the dishes and the other dusting the living room.
"Good mourning Mr. Jake, How was your sleep?" The brunette asked me, her hazel eyes staring. "It was fine, could you put more memory foam on it?" He asked, and she nodded and left. He grabbed his fork and hit the pancakes, putting strawberry syrup on it. He drank half of his orange juice when another maid came. "Would you like some more Mr. Jake?" She asked, he nodded. She filled his cup with the orange juice, then he took an sip of it. "What the hell Mary!? I thought I told you to buy Pulp-less orange juice! Go get me different orange juice!" He yelled as Mary ran to get him Pulp-less orange juice. He took an bite of the bacon, not too fat or too crisp. He gobbled up the bacon and ate the eggs. He sat up and walked towards the door, putting his grey tennis shoes on. He opened the door to the bright sunlight on his porch, and quickly shielded his eyes from it. He walked on the cobber stone path and stepped into his Viper.
It was red with 2 black lines going from hood to back, the white leather seats clean and waxed. He shut the door and turned on the engine, hearing an loud rumble. He stepped on the pedal, making the car jerk and the engine rumble. He sped towards the gate and entered the password as it swung open. He stepped on the pedal as he jerked his speed and sped down the road to the bar. When he hit an speed limit, he slowed down. He reached an stoplight and stopped at an red light, people looking at him in every direction. He just smirked and sped when the light went green. 5 minutes of street then he hit the bar. He stepped out of the viper and shut the door, the locking it. He opened the doors to the bar and sat up to the booth, looking around. "I'll have a shot of whiskey and a glass of the best wine you have." The bartender nodded and came back minutes later. He looked at the shot, then held it and drank it. It was very strong and he almost gagged, but he drank the whiskey. He took an sip of wine, tasting the sweet, rich taste of it. He then started looking around him, it was all quiet until he heard an female voice speak to him.
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Saviour Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:39 pm
Natasha~
I woke up, one boot on, shirt hanging off my shoulder. Sitting up in my bed, I tug on my other boot, smirking and running a hand through my thick, blonde curls. I stand up and make my way to the mirror, slightly taming my hair and fixing my shirt. I reach down and grab my toothbrush, running the small plastic wires over my teeth and spitting, putting the brush back. I stop by my closet and change into short shorts, which accented my toned, tan legs. I then slid into a loose fitting tank top that hung off my shoulder, showing my white bra strap. I grab my beer and prance down the stairs.
"Natty, could you help me with breakfast hun?" I roll my eyes, trudging into the kitchen with my dark, worn boots. I ate a piece of bacon, then sucked down a large glass of orange juice that sat infront of my father. I smirked, winked at my now furious parents, and open the door. I pull my keys out of my bra and climb into my old mustang. I throw the key into the ignition and it roared to life. The car rumbling loudly, waking everyone in my neighborhood. With a sly, mischievious wink at the nerdy boy next door, whom I caught staring, I drive out of the housing area. Driving left on Valencia road, I pull into the bar and put my keys in my bra again. Smacking the side of my car, I climb out and strut into the bar. My dark blue eyes scanned the area for trouble and I smile deviously at an older couple looking for a little fun. Grabbing a beer from the front, I step closer to the two. Sitting on the man's lap and watching his wife's expression, I run my fingers down his thigh. "Hello there" I grinned. The woman reached across the table and smacked her husband. I grabbed her hand before it collided with my face, slamming it against the table. "Don't even think about it" I said, standing up. I bend down, my short shorts sliding up further. I kiss the man on the cheek and grin, striding away and listening to their bickering.
I watch as a preppy guy walks in and orders a few drinks. Smirking, I walk over and stand behind him, hands on my hips, dirty blond curls resting across my shoulders and laying gently against my chest. "Look who's here" I grinned "Mr. Rich Boy is here for some fun" I said loudly, drawing attention to the man. I sit in the seat next to him and take a long, refreshing swig of my cheap brand beer. "Too good for anything but fine wine I see eh?" I stated, turning my attention to the bartender and ordering a shot of pure vodka. The bitter alcohol soon appeared next to my beer and I tip it up, drinking the beautiful liquid without a single change in emotion.
Word count~ 500
Mustang~ http://mustang1.net/data/media/63/Old_mustang%20(5).jpg
I woke up, one boot on, shirt hanging off my shoulder. Sitting up in my bed, I tug on my other boot, smirking and running a hand through my thick, blonde curls. I stand up and make my way to the mirror, slightly taming my hair and fixing my shirt. I reach down and grab my toothbrush, running the small plastic wires over my teeth and spitting, putting the brush back. I stop by my closet and change into short shorts, which accented my toned, tan legs. I then slid into a loose fitting tank top that hung off my shoulder, showing my white bra strap. I grab my beer and prance down the stairs.
"Natty, could you help me with breakfast hun?" I roll my eyes, trudging into the kitchen with my dark, worn boots. I ate a piece of bacon, then sucked down a large glass of orange juice that sat infront of my father. I smirked, winked at my now furious parents, and open the door. I pull my keys out of my bra and climb into my old mustang. I throw the key into the ignition and it roared to life. The car rumbling loudly, waking everyone in my neighborhood. With a sly, mischievious wink at the nerdy boy next door, whom I caught staring, I drive out of the housing area. Driving left on Valencia road, I pull into the bar and put my keys in my bra again. Smacking the side of my car, I climb out and strut into the bar. My dark blue eyes scanned the area for trouble and I smile deviously at an older couple looking for a little fun. Grabbing a beer from the front, I step closer to the two. Sitting on the man's lap and watching his wife's expression, I run my fingers down his thigh. "Hello there" I grinned. The woman reached across the table and smacked her husband. I grabbed her hand before it collided with my face, slamming it against the table. "Don't even think about it" I said, standing up. I bend down, my short shorts sliding up further. I kiss the man on the cheek and grin, striding away and listening to their bickering.
I watch as a preppy guy walks in and orders a few drinks. Smirking, I walk over and stand behind him, hands on my hips, dirty blond curls resting across my shoulders and laying gently against my chest. "Look who's here" I grinned "Mr. Rich Boy is here for some fun" I said loudly, drawing attention to the man. I sit in the seat next to him and take a long, refreshing swig of my cheap brand beer. "Too good for anything but fine wine I see eh?" I stated, turning my attention to the bartender and ordering a shot of pure vodka. The bitter alcohol soon appeared next to my beer and I tip it up, drinking the beautiful liquid without a single change in emotion.
Word count~ 500
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Emoticon Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:56 am
He gave her the cold shoulder, Bold things like this happened almost everytime her went out. He looked behind his shoulder, the people in the bar looking at him. He smirked as he ordered a refill. "It appears so. But most of the time I don't come here for this cheap wine." He pushed the wine glass away from him, shooting the bartender a 100 and he sat up right. He looked at the girl, noticing her dirty blond hair and short shorts. He pulled down his shirt, and got up from the round cheap seats. He put his arm on the girls shoulder, and whispered in her ear. "This rich boy wants to have some fun, and your not impressing me. What do you want? Money, Cars, Sex?" He said silently as he looked around the bar, noticing everyone and looking at the couple she had just bothered. He smirked and ran his hand up her thigh, and he reached for his pockets for his keys. "You coming or what?" He said, his white teeth flashing.
~Back at the house~
Mary opened the door, the shopping bags under her hands left marks. "Mary you shouldn't have forgotten, he gets mad over little things like orange juice." Elliot said, one of the other maids. She had light red hair with a green bang in her face, her dirty green eyes looking at her. "Maybe you should mind your own business! If i get fired i get fired." Mary said, even though this job had very good pay, and she had a crush on her boss, like all the girls. She walked past the living room into the grand kitchen.
She sighed and put the bags on the table, opening them and packing them to the kitchen. Her thin arms packed the ingredients for tonight's dinner, looking at all the organic food. She then heard foot steps and held her breath, then released it seeing Jean. She scowled as she walked around in her tight maid suit, showing off her body features. She smirked evilly as she walked towards the couch, holding the TV remote. "You better hurry, He will be hungry." She said, making Mary's temper flare. She was his little doll he'll play with, and use for sex. She grinded her teeth, and focused on putting the food up. She had only been here for a month, but he decided to use her, the newest one.
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~Back at the house~
Mary opened the door, the shopping bags under her hands left marks. "Mary you shouldn't have forgotten, he gets mad over little things like orange juice." Elliot said, one of the other maids. She had light red hair with a green bang in her face, her dirty green eyes looking at her. "Maybe you should mind your own business! If i get fired i get fired." Mary said, even though this job had very good pay, and she had a crush on her boss, like all the girls. She walked past the living room into the grand kitchen.
She sighed and put the bags on the table, opening them and packing them to the kitchen. Her thin arms packed the ingredients for tonight's dinner, looking at all the organic food. She then heard foot steps and held her breath, then released it seeing Jean. She scowled as she walked around in her tight maid suit, showing off her body features. She smirked evilly as she walked towards the couch, holding the TV remote. "You better hurry, He will be hungry." She said, making Mary's temper flare. She was his little doll he'll play with, and use for sex. She grinded her teeth, and focused on putting the food up. She had only been here for a month, but he decided to use her, the newest one.
(Word count 409)
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Saviour Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:38 pm
Natasha~
I chuckled lightly at him, rolling my eyes and ignoring his hand on my nicely tanned thigh. "I ain't here for your money" I retorted, throwing him off track. I reach into my bra and pull out my keys, jingling them in front of his nose "Nor your cars" I said and placed them back. "I'm interested in everyone, it depends on who's interested in me" I said and grabbed his shirt in my fist playfully. My dark blue nails hidden in the black cloth "What are you here for?" I smirked, ignoring his question on whether or not I was coming. My eyes stared into his, seductive as they were, they were also cocky and dangerous. My white, semi-perfect teeth halfway visible under my michievious grin. I felt the eyes of the bar on me, they were staring in disbelief as I hit on the rich kid, but screwed with his mind as well. Half the girls he meets probably just melt into his grasp. Mentally scoffing at the thought, I keep a steady gaze into his eyes, waiting for my reward of emotion.
[ Is this enough? I would simply be adding fluff if I did more, and you are playing two characters... ]
[word count~ 186 ]
I chuckled lightly at him, rolling my eyes and ignoring his hand on my nicely tanned thigh. "I ain't here for your money" I retorted, throwing him off track. I reach into my bra and pull out my keys, jingling them in front of his nose "Nor your cars" I said and placed them back. "I'm interested in everyone, it depends on who's interested in me" I said and grabbed his shirt in my fist playfully. My dark blue nails hidden in the black cloth "What are you here for?" I smirked, ignoring his question on whether or not I was coming. My eyes stared into his, seductive as they were, they were also cocky and dangerous. My white, semi-perfect teeth halfway visible under my michievious grin. I felt the eyes of the bar on me, they were staring in disbelief as I hit on the rich kid, but screwed with his mind as well. Half the girls he meets probably just melt into his grasp. Mentally scoffing at the thought, I keep a steady gaze into his eyes, waiting for my reward of emotion.
[ Is this enough? I would simply be adding fluff if I did more, and you are playing two characters... ]
[word count~ 186 ]
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Emoticon Mon Jul 04, 2011 1:29 pm
(I guess i can make a exception since you only have 1 character)
He sighed and pulled her hands off his shirt. "I really came here looking for sexy women." He said and turned his head. "I've meet plenty of girls before, don't think I haven't gotten the reaction." He said, tucking his shirt down as it kept rolling up. He got close up to here, his face only a inch away. "You do seem to be different, maybe I'll see you again." He said and put a card on the table, giving her the address to the mansion. He stepped out and started the car, hearing the loud rumble of the red viper. Her backed up quickly and turned around, leaving the parking lot. He speed down the street, satisfying his taste for speed. He pushed in the code as the gates opened slowly. "Those gates need to be replaced." He said to himself as he drove down the mansion quickly. He stomped on the breaks and turned off the engine and quickly got out. He slammed the door shut and opened the door, not even looking at the maids as he ran to the elevator.
(word count=184, its pretty close to yours lol)
He sighed and pulled her hands off his shirt. "I really came here looking for sexy women." He said and turned his head. "I've meet plenty of girls before, don't think I haven't gotten the reaction." He said, tucking his shirt down as it kept rolling up. He got close up to here, his face only a inch away. "You do seem to be different, maybe I'll see you again." He said and put a card on the table, giving her the address to the mansion. He stepped out and started the car, hearing the loud rumble of the red viper. Her backed up quickly and turned around, leaving the parking lot. He speed down the street, satisfying his taste for speed. He pushed in the code as the gates opened slowly. "Those gates need to be replaced." He said to himself as he drove down the mansion quickly. He stomped on the breaks and turned off the engine and quickly got out. He slammed the door shut and opened the door, not even looking at the maids as he ran to the elevator.
(word count=184, its pretty close to yours lol)
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Saviour Mon Jul 04, 2011 1:37 pm
Natasha~
I chuckled at his reaction, he then left in a rush. Smirking deviously, I take the card in my hand, noticing everyone became more tense as I did so. I pull my other hand up and rip the card, leaving it on the counter for the bartender. I stand up and pull out my keys, blowing a kiss the the man who was getting yelled at by his wife for my earlier behaviour. Jumping into my mustang, I throw the key into the ignition. It started quickly, with a slight growl. Shifting gears, I back out of my parking spot and change them again. Heading down the interstate to a new, more entertaining bar, I park and get out. The blue, florescent glow of words above the door read The Rendezvous. Pushing open the door, I walk in, beer already in hand. The place was dark and blaring loud music. Smirking, I head out to the dancefloor. Taking a large swig of my beer, I began dancing. My body moving and grinding with the beat, showing off my curves and toned legs.
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I chuckled at his reaction, he then left in a rush. Smirking deviously, I take the card in my hand, noticing everyone became more tense as I did so. I pull my other hand up and rip the card, leaving it on the counter for the bartender. I stand up and pull out my keys, blowing a kiss the the man who was getting yelled at by his wife for my earlier behaviour. Jumping into my mustang, I throw the key into the ignition. It started quickly, with a slight growl. Shifting gears, I back out of my parking spot and change them again. Heading down the interstate to a new, more entertaining bar, I park and get out. The blue, florescent glow of words above the door read The Rendezvous. Pushing open the door, I walk in, beer already in hand. The place was dark and blaring loud music. Smirking, I head out to the dancefloor. Taking a large swig of my beer, I began dancing. My body moving and grinding with the beat, showing off my curves and toned legs.
[ word count- 183 ]
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Emoticon Mon Jul 04, 2011 5:13 pm
He looked at his room, noticing it wasn't clean. He sighed and took the elevator. "What did i say? I told you to clean up my bedroom?" No reply. He walked out of the car to go somewhere. Once he got in the car he paused, falling back on the seat. He slammed the keys in, unfortunately the wrong side, and his finger slammed into the hole. "Shit!." He said as he put them the right way. He pushed on the pedal, causing the engine to roar and the car to jerk at 60. He stops to open the gate, hearing the screeching noises. He sped out of the road on the highway, going to a club he always liked. He parked outside and opened the door to find that girl from the bar he meet earlier. He shook his head as he walked to the VIP section.
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Saviour Mon Jul 04, 2011 5:25 pm
Natasha~
I ignored the people climbing in through the door, they obviously headed to the VIP section anyway. I stopped dancing and walked to the bar. The bartender soon came over to me, his gruff appearance matched with the familiar scent of alcohol tickling his breath. "A few shots of Vodka" I yelled over the music, and he nodded, turning his back and grabbing the Absolut bottle. Smirking at the pure Vodka, I turn around and watch the men and women dancing, rubbing and bouncing with each other. "There you go mam" He said and I turned around, putting around fifteen dollars for extra tip on the bar. I grab one shot and tip it into my mouth. The bitter, yet welcome, taste coating my mouth and burning down my throat. I run my tongue over my teeth, getting every last bit before grabbing the next one.
I ignored the people climbing in through the door, they obviously headed to the VIP section anyway. I stopped dancing and walked to the bar. The bartender soon came over to me, his gruff appearance matched with the familiar scent of alcohol tickling his breath. "A few shots of Vodka" I yelled over the music, and he nodded, turning his back and grabbing the Absolut bottle. Smirking at the pure Vodka, I turn around and watch the men and women dancing, rubbing and bouncing with each other. "There you go mam" He said and I turned around, putting around fifteen dollars for extra tip on the bar. I grab one shot and tip it into my mouth. The bitter, yet welcome, taste coating my mouth and burning down my throat. I run my tongue over my teeth, getting every last bit before grabbing the next one.
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Re: Big Triple Threat**Experienced and Mature**
by Emoticon Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:07 pm
~Back at the house~
Mary sighed, he had been so quick to leave. She sat at the couch next to Amber. She had dark brown eyes and jet black hair with small lips. She pouted, then tossed the remote to Mary. She didn't bother, knowing that all the maids had crushes, but all had failed to do anything more then have sex with him. She turned the TV onto news, looking at the reporters outside a court house.
(Sorry its late!)
Mary sighed, he had been so quick to leave. She sat at the couch next to Amber. She had dark brown eyes and jet black hair with small lips. She pouted, then tossed the remote to Mary. She didn't bother, knowing that all the maids had crushes, but all had failed to do anything more then have sex with him. She turned the TV onto news, looking at the reporters outside a court house.
(Sorry its late!)
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