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Post by Guest Thu Jun 16, 2011 4:16 pm

Foal~
As i awake, i start to breathe real air outside my mom. i feel her push, struggling. not able to open my eyes yet, i try to open them. i feel cold so i try to push myself back in where its warm. my mom starts to push harder. i cant get back in, so i try to get out, my front legs squirming. halfway out now, i open my eyes. i look back at my mom, she is sweating alot and is very tired. i try to help her by going forward, but i cant do it by my self. she pushes hard and i start to move. i hear her grunt painfully and and push really hard this time. finally, i slide out, after an hour of pushing.
I struggle to my feet and hobble towrds my moms head. she breathes heavily and i lay my head on her neck. "mommy?"
No answer.
"mommy, im out, get up!"
then she breathes one last breath, and closes her eyes.
"MOM?" i whinnie. "whats happening?" "Somebody HELP!" i scream.

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Post by Guest Thu Jun 16, 2011 8:40 pm

I trot in herring a foal. I was a yearling. I gallop to her. then stop. I look down at the mare,"She's forever asleep....come with me...I'll help you find a new momy. I know it doesn't sound all that cool,but if you don't you'll grow up like I did."I said my coat shining.

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Post by Guest Thu Jun 16, 2011 9:46 pm

foal~
"bu-but i wanna stay here. with my real mommy" i look at my mom and lay next to her now cold body.

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Post by Guest Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:11 pm

I sighed,"It's hard to understand but you must come."I looked at her,"There's a creature that can gobal you up if you don't come....please come."

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Post by Guest Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:07 pm

foal~
i stand up and take one last look at my mother, then follow the stranger.

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Post by Guest Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:45 pm

I smile and nuzzle the foal and walk into a meadow.I stop,"Stay here a moment I'll check to see if it's safe."I walk out into the opening with my ears perked. I see nor here any thing,"It's safe come on out. " I say and wait for her to come,

(Sorry about not answering I fregot about the topic. Embarassed )

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 21, 2011 5:17 pm

foal~
"whats your name?'' i ask

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 21, 2011 5:35 pm

"My name is leinaro divenchy (not sure how to spell his name) just joking I don't have a name but call me forest horse since so many do for some reason." I said calmly.

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 21, 2011 6:00 pm

foal~
"ummmm... i dont have a name either i guess my mom never had...the chance...." i look away and start to cry

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 21, 2011 6:08 pm

"Don't cry....I can give you one if you want?" I said looking at her.

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 21, 2011 6:33 pm

foal~
my ears perk up "ok!'

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Post by Guest Tue Jun 21, 2011 7:09 pm

I smile and nuzzle her, "Here's some I know you pick one....Anna, An, Beth, Anna Beth, Bell, Anna Bell, Isabell, Isabella, star, joy, sky..... I think that's all I have offer like any of them?"

(Brain dead:)

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Post by Guest Wed Jun 22, 2011 9:03 am

foal~
"ummm... how 'bput Annabell Lee?" i smile

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Post by Guest Wed Jun 22, 2011 9:12 am

"I like it." I say and nuzzle her muzzle," Well Annabell Lee, we should get to the guardian of plenty, some mare might be there and wiling to take you in." I say as my ears start to twitch. A noise gets louder and loud er then I realise it, "Wild dogs." I say low, "Run!" My voice was louder, I gently nudged her to run and off we went, I looked back every once in while at the dogs behind us.

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Post by Guest Wed Jun 22, 2011 9:17 am

Annabell Lee~
i follow her
(i will make a topic)

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Post by Guest Wed Jun 22, 2011 9:18 am

(Ok)

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