A Dream's Nightmare. (Mature & expierenced post)

[BayMickey]

Then,
The flames danced in her eyes. Her family, her friends, her mother, had been absorbed in the flames. A dream's Nightmare, also called Nightmare, had escaped the fire. Her family, not so lucky. The mare winnied, hoping someone would answer he cry. Nightmare reared, trying to get someone's attention. No one answered. The stallion who had caused it all had run away. The stallion which was her father. He had set fire to the fields. Nightmare didn't know how, but he did. She didn't know why. He had a family, a herd, a mate, and a filly to call his own. And he destroyed it all. Except er. Nightmare was only a filly then, just a year old. Her spotted coat had been littered by ash and dirt. She ran towards the lake. It had gotten too hot for her delicate hide. Nightmare climbed in the water. Her mother and herd would be avenged one day. They would.


Now,
Nightmare trotted into the field. The grass hadn't grown back even yet. Ash laid in the place of luch greenery. The trees were gone, the den too. It was the first time in three years she had been here again. Since the incident, she hadn't been here or seen her father. Nightmare snorted and walked towards where she last saw her mother. The beautiful mare was smothered in the flames efore anyone, and she was the first to pass. Nightmare pawed at the ground with her hoof. It revealed a single blade of grass. The mare smiled. It showed hope, she thought. it showed she could fix this. Get her own mate, her own herd. her own foal. The thought excited her. Nightmare's mother would be proud if she did. But first, she had to find her father. And kill him.

Her bio~
https://horseisland.rpg-board.net/t8051-a-dream-s-nightmare

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Magnador raced through the forest. Whipping his head back adn forth. His heart pounded against his chest, his breathing went fast. Madnador smelled the ashes and the burning skin off his family. Magnador went on. He was only a year old, his mother and herd were being burned to death, absored by the blazing flames of fire. His brother, Satin was jealous of Magnador. Magnador was going to be the furture leader. Satin didnt like the thought of his brother being leader, so he planed to kill off his brother and his herd. Satin ran off as soon as he set the fire. Magnador watched Satin run off and tired to burn out the fire before his ehrd was dangered. but it was to late, Satin had gotten away and his plan worked. Magnador watched his family burn into ash. He ran off without even trying to safe one. But how could he safe his herd when they were being asbored by the fire. Trees began to catch on fire and the grass ran red as well as the river. The sky went to an eclipce and all was red. Soon enough there was a Wildfire blazing through the forest right behind Magnador. His heart stoped and for a moment he felt he was dead, but when he soon plnged out of the forest walls, and out into the desert. Turning behind him he watched as to see his homeland being burned down. He could still hear his herds crys for help. But there was no way Magnador would be able to get to them. So, with that he left his homeland. Since that day, he promised god that he will seak out Satin and kill him to avenge his mothers death as well as his beloved herd.

3 YEARS LATER...
Magnador trolted into the feild. He stoped and looekd down at the deserted trees and ash that lay upon the ground. There was no greenery. Only ash covered the floor. He sighed in grief. And a pain of guilt shot through him. For a moment he felt as if he was back in the flames of fire, watching this all go down in a threat of Satin. Magnador shook his head and blinked. He stomped his hoof and snroted in defense. " I will seak out my brother, and kill him." Magnador snarl through gritted teeth. His ears pinned back to his cranium and his crown low tot eh ground to seak out any scent of his returning brother, but nothing. His brothers scent died away. He threw his head up adn snorted, you could see his breath flwo out into the air. His eyes in a slit and his tail flew out behind him like a battle banner. He let out a loud neigh, and reaed up striking otu his front hoof as if he was taing his first blow at his brother. He landed with a loud thud and neighed in thriumph.

[ Hope its good enough! ]

[BayMickey]

Nightmare herd a ear-peircing neigh coming from nearby. The fire must had reached over there and detroyed that horse's land. The mare replied with a soft whiny, telling him she was there.She awited to see who it was. Nightmare hoped it would be someone from her late herd. "Who is there?" Her voice was shy, but it still sounded brave. Nightmare was obviously going to bust into tears in a moment, but she kept herself together. She walked over to where she heard the sound, but saw nothing. Well, I'll be...

(It's good! Longer than mine!)

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[ Thnx! ]

Magnador pricked his ears to hear a soft whinny reply to his neigh. He turned to teh sound and hoped it was one of his herd. But he seen nothing and sighed in grief. A low snort came from his snout and he looked up to see a mare stnading out a mile away from him. He lifted his bdoy and reared up to let otu a niegh. He smiled and raced toard her. Hoping it was either his mother or one of his herd. He neighed as he ran towards her. But when he towards her, he seen an unknown mare standing infront of him. The ash began to pick up and form smoke so it seemed the amre looked like his mother. He sighed and said. " My bad miss. I heard you, adn wondered if it was.... Never mind that. I'm Magnador." Magnador said with s steady tone. he held back his tears that wanted to unleash and just go into a world of pain.

[BayMickey]

Nightmare was startled by a stallion. She snorted. "Don't call me miss, that makes me feel old. I'm A Dream's Nightmare. Daughter of Dreamer and Midnight. Survivor of fatal fire. It's nice to meet you." Nightmare flicked her black and white tail once. "So? What brings you here?" Nightmare shook some of the ash off her body fro his entrance.

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Magnador snorted. He nodded and dipped his head. " Every well. Lovely name. Nice to meet you. I can here to seak out my brother. WHo destoryed my herd, and killed our mother." He said in a seductive tone. He will find him, and kill him. No matter how long it took. Magnador will seak out his brother, no longer will he live on and torture others with his horrible ways. Magnador will see Satin die beneath his hooves.

[BayMickey]

Nightmare snorted. "My father killed my mother." A single tear flowed down her cheek and to the ground. She had stopped herself from anymore. "He set a fire to our lands. I was only a filly. I watched my mother die. Sad isn't it?" Nightmare ignored his seductive tone. Her voice was in it's regular 'cute' tone. Nightmare lowered her head to graze, but remembered there was no grass. "I always do that..."

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Magnador snorted and smiled alittle. " My brother set my land on fire. He was jealous. Knowing that i was gonna be furture leader, he decided to destory my herd and me. Sorry for your looss." Magnador said. A single tear rolled down his cheek and onto the ground of thinking of his mother. He looekd up to the sky. Snorting with anger he pawed the ground making the grey and black ash fly up into the air and float back down again.

[BayMickey]

Nightmare sighed. "I'm sorry for yours."She watched his aggressivness and felt the same way. She kept it in though. Some of the ash came down and landed on her nose. Nightmare snorted and shook it off. It reminded her of the ash that day, it going up in little sparks and floating down as black peices. The thought sickened her to the bone. It had been a tough road, and she still had miles to go.

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