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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Sun May 01, 2011 12:14 pm

Day 1
It was Sunday here in New York City and Mackenzie her dog Dynasty were off to find some clues. She looked everywhere for her parents and she searched and searched for places they would usually go to. Not the Pub or Club not the grocery store or the mall.But nowhere.She checked up and down her house but she still wouldn't give up. "Oh where are my parents", she would cry. Her dog whimpered with fear. Hoping that her best bud Thriller will never be found. She sighed with disgrace as she lost hope day after day after day. "oh will somebody help me....". She would say to Dynasty who would nod in agreement........
THE NEXT DAY.......
Mackenzie sighed...."Oh...Dynasty...we should just give up", she said and she sat down at a near by bench. "i can't see whyt they are avoiding me........they know they love me...they just don't like showing it". She said and she smiled a fake smile of doubt. "Uh....I hope we find them soon. I love them..I need them.....We need to be a family again. I know that you miss Thriller and I miss him to....I also miss mum and dad". She said and she smiled. "I remember when we used to go swimming a lot and I also remember when we moved to our beautiful house in NJ don't you remember Dynasty?' she asked and she smiled. She stroked her pet's neck carefully tears rolled down her cheek and she sighed and she hugged her dog on the head and she sobbed. "Oh...Dy I need help". she said under the fur and she sat there.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Sun May 01, 2011 1:18 pm

Angel's blonde hair, was tied back in a loose ponytail, and her eyes shone under the stars. Shasta brushed against her side whining not too much. "It'll be fine." she said and petted him, he seemed to worry even though he never met her flock. "We'll fine them soon."
Passing a ally, Shasta noticed something. She could tell by his loud bark. "What is it?" she asked.
"Them." he replied, pointing with his ears. Angel couldn't make them out in the darkness at first, but then she made it out, seeing a girl sobbing into the pelt of her pet. She looked at Shasta and patted his going over to the girl slowly. "Hello... is everything okay?" she asked.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Sun May 01, 2011 1:49 pm

Mackenzie wiped hr tears away and seen a girl and another dog. "H-Hello", she said wiping her face. She then looked at her and sighed. "Hello". she said and she petted Dynasty. She looked at the dog. "Cute dog......and um.....who are you and everything's fine I'm just.....we're just.....lost". She said and she sighed. "Its complicated...you wouldn't understand", she said and she put down her picture of her parents.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Sun May 01, 2011 2:33 pm

Angel heard the uneasiness in the girl's words. She shrugged and walked over to the girl, leaning against the wall, Shasta going over by her side. She sighed, her knees up against her chest. "I'm sorry I wouldn't understand but I could tell you I handled worse problems than yours... I am in the middle of one right now...Oh yeah, I'm Angel." she murmured.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Sun May 01, 2011 3:07 pm

Mackenzie sighed. "Oh Well mine is different ya see? My parents are trying to avoid me....while I'm trying to put us back together". she said and she smiled. "Sorry...My name is Mackenzie J. and this is my dog...Dynasty". she said with a choke in her voice. Dynasty nodded and bowed a small 'Hello'. she rose back to her feet. "Oh...um....sorry I disturbed you....you must be bored to death and doing something else...". she said and she grabbed Dynasty's leash and she tugged and she waved to the two and walked away.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Sun May 01, 2011 3:37 pm

Angel sighed and rolled her eyes as the girl walked away. "Um, I thought I would be able to help, considering I help with problems." she said lightly and got up. "Well, c'mon Shasta, she can handle things alone."
Shasta spread his wings and so did Angel and they both flew on a buliding unseen.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Sun May 01, 2011 4:12 pm

Mackenzie turned around.... "Wait maybe you can help me". she said and she looked around and she sighed because they was gone... "Oh well......maybe later". she said and she walked away and she looked at the sky and she couldn't see them and she smiled. "She' nice huh Dy?' she asked and Dynasty nodded in agreement.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Mon May 02, 2011 2:52 pm

Angel heard her words. She peered down over the edge of the building and pierced her eyes through the girl. Shasta came to her side looked down too, whining confusingly. She nodded agreeably and dropped down quickly, one hand on the ground and her back lightly arched with her wings out. She put her white jacket on to hide her wings and met the girl once more. "Then," she said from behind her. "Let's start. Oh yeah... if you wanted to know, this is Shasta." she finished looking at the dog peering from behind her leg.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Mon May 02, 2011 3:42 pm

Mackenzie sighed of relief. "Okay.....Angelica? Er....Angel sorry. and Shasta". she said and she smiled. "Well the last time I seen my parents they were at a club......and doing stuff like drinking and .......can't say it". she said and she covered her mouth. "I also like your wings...they're pretty". she said and she rocked on her feet back- and -forth.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Mon May 02, 2011 3:46 pm

[How could she see them? She went behind her quickly... from behind her, not in front of her.]

Angel looked kinda confused on the words about the girl's parents. "If they didn't treat you right," she murmured. "Then why do you wanna go back to them?" Angel tried not thinking anything negative about the girl. Shasta flicked his tail patiently.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Mon May 02, 2011 4:23 pm

Mackenzie paused for a moment. "Well.....I want to get us together so....we can be a family. I know they love me. They just don't show it". she said and she sighed. "How I wish to find them.....then my father will apologize".
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Mon May 02, 2011 4:27 pm

Angel heard her words. "Well, there's only one way to find out." she murmured
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Tue May 03, 2011 12:57 pm

Mackenzie's Detective Notebook
Day 2
Dear Notebook,
Here I am Mackenzie the Great and Dynasty. I just met a new friend and he name is Angel and Shasta of course. We are here at my mom's job and we're looking for a sight of my mom. Today is Monday and she usually works on Modays. My dad works here too and we see my aunt Lindsay but no mom. I think I should give up. I don't know.

DAY 2
Mackenzie sat in the chair and sighed. "Any smell Dy?" and Dynasty shook a sad head 'No'. She sighed and looked at Angel. "I don't think we'll find them Angel......we hopeless...". she said and she sighed. "Shasta I'm sure you know what it's like to have a loving family". she said and and she smiled fakely.

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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Tue May 03, 2011 1:03 pm

Angel looked over and over again. "Yeah." she said and sighed. "We are... you can live with me for a while, maybe Max could help--" she stopped and felt her come to reality. She had lost Max during something and it was bad... she put that aside and gave a "one moment sign." She left Shasta tied up by Dynasty. She took out a Journal that kept her memories.

Dear Diary,

I don't feel right helping this girl, it seems as if I'm just thinking about Max more. She really doesn't deserve her parents after the way they treated her... and the girl is hopeful on finding her parents...they treated her wrong.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Tue May 03, 2011 1:05 pm

Mackenzie sighed. "Well....okay". she said and she sighed. "We'll never......be friends". she said and sighed again. "Well give up".
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Tue May 03, 2011 4:52 pm

Angel came back quickly, putting it in her bag. She sat down beside Shasta, ruffling up his fur. He whined. She sighed heavily. "We'll be there soon." she whispered in his ear looking over at Mackenzie. Pang stabbed through her heart, feeling bad for this girl.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Wed May 04, 2011 12:47 pm

Mackenzie sighed. "Oh.....hey Angel. Let's just go....let's leave let's face it......we won't find them. Come on Dynasty". she said and she started to walk away and Dynasty whimpered a small good-bye.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Wed May 04, 2011 12:49 pm

Angel watched the girl walked away as it began to rain. She got up, and heard thunder crackle from the sky. She looked up her eyes shinning in the struck of lightning, making her flinch. She looked at the girl, seeing her disappear only to become a shadow to the darkness and to her memory. She looked at Shasta and nodded spreading her wings to fly away.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Wed May 04, 2011 12:53 pm

Mackenzie went home and she sighed. "Well......look here Dy where are we? Failure.....we lost hope so.....I can't even say.....I love you". she said and sobbed a little in her hands.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Wed May 04, 2011 12:56 pm

Angel was soon home on the couch, watching T.V. she sat there, watching Spongebob quietly, thinking of the lost hope of her new but so far away friend, how fast she gave up... why did she was be with her anyways, her mother. Her parents? Angel is without parents and she was completely fine. She was in a cage, getting expermieted on most of her life, that wasn't fine, but she lived through it.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Fri May 06, 2011 12:49 pm

Mackenzie sighed. "Okay...no! I won't quit! I'll just live my life without them. Ha! That's easy! I don't need them! They bullied me and treated me like TRASH! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" she laughed and she smiled.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Sat May 07, 2011 7:56 am

Angel tried searching the mind for the girl. She heard so much others before. She looked up to see Max come and sit next to her. "Why are you so quiet?" she asked. Angel didn't meet her gaze, she just kept looking at the T.V. quietly.
Max sighed. "It's fine you don't have to tell me." she sighed again.
Angel felt her eyes water and she spilled everything about what she did. Max nodded. "Oh.." she muttered.
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Sat May 07, 2011 8:21 am

Mackenzie smiled happily. "Angel...I gotta find Angel! ANGEL!" she called and she ran outside with Dynasty and she looked at the sky. "ANGEL! ANGEL COME OUT COME OUT WHEREVER YOU ARE!" she called more and she looked at people who had ropes and stuff. "Stay here Dy". she said and she looked at the tall building. "Okay here it goes". she said and she started to hitch the rope onto her and she climbed the wall and she seen a construction man. "Get down there girl!" he said and he looked at her climb. "No!" she said and she went to the top and she stayed up there for a while. "ANGEL! SHASTA!" she called and she looked everywhere.
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Post by ❥ Destiny Styles Sat May 07, 2011 8:45 am

Angel heard Shasta whine, ears pricked. "What is it boy?" she asked. He got up and jumped into the sky. "Shasta?" she asked and flew into the sky behind him
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Post by <S t a r c h a s e r> Sun May 08, 2011 3:39 pm

Mackenzie looked at the sky. "Angel!" she called again and she looked at the do flying. "shasta! Angel! Hey!" she called and waved her arms in a rainbow like motion and she stood there.
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