Potwór's Goodbye

[Guest]

Potwór and his herd gathered around. Kwiat laid down beside her fallen mate as a tear slowly rolled down her cheek. Jaguar stood over his mother, trying to be strong, if only for her. To see his father down and beaten up like a ragdoll shattered his heart. His father had nearly killed the other stallion. Jaguar promised himself that once he was old enough, he'd gallop right in and take the meadow from that bastard stallion who thought he was so good. Jaguar would be young and Flame old, slow, and incapable of some of the manuevers a young stallion could make. Jaguar gritted his teeth as Ezechiel stood over the other mares, looking at them with curiosity. Potwór's raspy breaths came every now and then, at an extermely abnormally slow pace. His broken spine and leg hurt him with excrutiating pain. Ezechiel stood close to Jagoda, who was bursting into tears. Even Sky became sad at the loss of such a magnificent stallion. Szafir stood quietly away from them. She felt bad, now, for all those years when she had criticized the wonderful beast who lay helpless and broken before her. Litość stood beside Szafir, trying to comfort her and help her feel less guilty. Litość herself was in poor shape as tears rolled down her fragile, wonderfully-shaped cheekbones. She lowered her head to the ground, looking at Potwór sadly. He was barely moving anymore, and she wondered if he had finally gone. She couldn't bear the pain of Kwiat, Jaguar, and Ezechiel, and looked away.
"Why?" She said angrily, cursing Flame thoroughly.

[Man O' War Lover]

In the deep shadow's I stood watching my chest rose and fell as I brethed through my nose I Flame would be ready to take any threat I saw revenge and hatred toured me in there heart's but ingnord it. They had chosen to try and best me. But no one would my son's where strong and smart all much like me and there mother's very wise and good teaches I would not tremble beafor the son's of there fallen leader! I turned with a snort and ran, ran threw the tree's and out into the wilderniss my tail high. I let out a whinny and promised to the fallen stallion I would not kill his son's. I went home to my Meadow and fell watched over my family. Quiet and content-

[Guest]

In deep sorrow, Kwiat saw Potwór breathe his last breath. She let out a loud sob and then began to sing a song, her head close to his ears, singing only to him, but gradually got louder. Ezechiel led the other horses away, including Jaguar, to let Kwiat sing to her fallen mate, whom she had loved so very much.

[Man O' War Lover]

Hay I left the door wide open for one of the son's if you want to continue the post is called flame's still got the power babay yeah. Do you want to continue P.S great song

[Guest]

( Thanks. But ummm, Jaguar isn't entirely ready yet. He's only 1. )

[Man O' War Lover]

Oky Docky Flame will still be there can't wait to see how this turn's out! Hay how about Jaguar fall's in love with Flames daughter and he does not know she is Flames daughter? Do you think that would be a good idea?

[Guest]

( That works. We can fast-forward in time a lil' bit. Where would the topic be posted? We can skip 3 years so Jaguar's 4. I'll have to edit the picture on my post.... And some of the positions. And ages. Darn. XD )

[Man O' War Lover]

Un well how about it takes place in the garden she is four and that would make Flame around 8 or 9 or 10 and her name will be Flames Flare but she will just tell him it's Flare,

[Guest]

Okey-dokes! Who starts the topic?

[Man O' War Lover]

You can if you want just put my screen name in the topic please so I know it's the post you want me to post thank's I change the ages to one my horses even found a pic for flame

[Guest]

Cooleo.

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