Re: Whispers Herd

[Loves Horror Film]

Tinsle~
"ok"I said then watched Missy and gave her some water then layed down still bored
(lol I forgot where I was but I'll just post something for now )

[Guest]

**Missy**
I stood up, but to my surprise, I smiled. I felt so alive when I was being attacked... Was I one of those beings who loved that rush? An adrenaline junkie? I chuckled and looked at my wounds, knowing they would scab soon. My ankle started to look better as well, and I could put half my weight I used to on it now. I flicked the mane off my forelock, glancing at the forest, trying to avoid the temptation. If I were to go into the woods, I think no one would notice while I was gone, and I'd be more cautious this time too. I rolled my eyes at the mare who was 'supposed' to be taking care of me, my whites showing. I snorted and took a step into the water, my hooves sinking into the sand deeper with each step. As I crossed the stream, I stood on the brink between the woods and the clearing.
My ears flattened as I started to trot, my body circling a few trees before speeding to a lope. I loved how the wind blew through my mane, tossing my tail back,nearly getting tangled in the braches. I kicked my black hooves up with freedom, rearing while still moving with a steady pace. My head thrashed wildly as the adrenaline built up in my veins. My eyes were filled with happiness and relief as I started to gallop, jumping over logs swiftly and silently. I snorted softly and ran faster and faster, feeling like I was finally making up for those years when I was a filly.
I then stopped, my breath not weakened at all. I smiled and lowered my head, grazing for a moment before I gazed at all my surroundings, and I was secluded from all the rest.
(foxy, xD... kinda like my post with the wolf attack...well more like almost exactly beside the numbers...just more descriptive...)

[Guest]

(OOC: huh I didn't even realize. Its hard to understand first person sometimes...I'm not used to seeing this much first person stuff. I wrote it as an attack on the main herd, there are other horses around the area when this attacked happened. I meant to write were the wolves followed your character then attacked when Sura..who was going to get medical herbs for your horses wound was slightly to the side only yards away from everyone else. How come most people on this site use first person? It makes the tags short and leaves little room for muse and imagination?)

[Guest]

(I dunno, I learned to do it in first person, when I really think doing it in another view would be better according to your brilliant posts... Sorry for probably pissing you off earlier, just felt a little ripped off.)

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~Chica~
She stood there and grazed...
(( Kinda lost here, what happened... CONFUSING! ))

[Guest]

(OOC: its fine, and I wasn't be any means trying to steal your post. I was just trying to continue the thread along, and a following attack seemed perfect for the entire herd to get involved in. I do apologize though for the mistake, I figured everyone could join in on this attack. I could perhaps teach you a little about third person? Which is what I use?)


LOL and I do think its kinda funny that everyone is grazing while one of there own gets fights only yards away!

[Guest]

(Yeah that would be awesome if you would teach me... And yes, it's pretty ironic they're grazing while one is being attacked xD..)

[Guest]

(Kk, Do you have a yahoo ID or do you want to hope on the chat room here?)

[Guest]

(o.e i was too lazy to read all that lol so I'm just gonna random post...)

I watched as Sura faught off the wolves, coming through the thicket at just that moment. I looked around, wondering what all had happened...."Somebody explain..?"

[Guest]

(OOC: LOL she can't fight off seven wolves on her own!)

[Loves Horror Film]

(lol this is funny almost everyone forgot where we were and the horses need to move again they are gana get EATEN ALIVE LOL)

[Guest]

(OOC: -Face plants desk- ) -___-

[Guest]

( I'm a doof )

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~Chica~
She growled and whiped her head up, Chica raced over to Sura and bucked one wolf in the throat, making it yelping into the forest... Chica wherled around on her heals and striked a foreleg down upon a wolfs spine, making it crack and the wolf lied there motionless and bloody...

[Guest]

Only one thought crossed her mind...where was the others? Swinging her delicate head she tried to catch them in her sight but was quickly occupied by something more demanding. Hot pain charged through her body and a cry of pain escaped without much restrain. Panic washed over her soul like a sliver tide and she turned her attention back to the pack. This was what she had wanted to avoid..the protection of others was supposed to keep predators away. Hatred glazed over her amber eyes and she fell upon the snarling pack as they rose in one smooth motion. Her blood mingled on the ground with the blood she spilled from the wolves. Her side had a large gash that ran deep from hipbone all the way past her stomach. But such things were of little concern....Sura circled again trying to gain ground alone...the wolves were using the oldest trick in the book..wear out your prey.....

And it was working....

Already she felt her energy wane and her breaths come in short and quick gasps. Sweat flecked the sides of her heaving body...again they struck and again she pushed them back; only making contact with a few and doing no great damage to none. Tail slashed back and forth in anger, the moister of her pelt had caused most of her mane to cling to the winter coat that had yet to be shed. Her ears down and almost flat against her skull...fear for herself began to light inside her eyes...she felt its curling fingers trapping her heart in a death grip...

Finally she heard the thunder of hooves and felt another join in the fight..relief filled her soul..finally some help...

[Guest]

**Missy**
Missy turned, hearing yelping and hooves being thrashed into the air. She galloped to where the stressful sounds were coming from, and there she found Chica and Sura, battling the wolves she had encountered earlier. This made her spine tingle, but something overcame her and she stepped between the bitter enemies. She had no idea what she was doing, but she knew it was right in her heart.

"Please! Leave them alone!" She said softly to the two mares, defending the wolves. "You don't need to kill in order to accomplish being safe." She said promptly as she pounded the ground, facing the canines. Her hooves raised from the ground as she made an attempt to scare them off. Both ear flat against her skull, she snorted and jolted towards the wolves for a moment, faking a chase. Thankfully, the cowardly dogs ran off, knowing they had nothing to get from her and the others.
With this, she whirled around to the mares. "Sorry... It's just I can't stand hurting something..." she spoke with a quiet voice as she walked away, her head hanging low.

She dragged her hooves and kicked the ground, rather disappointed in herself. 'Those horses were just trying to defend themselves, but I just had to yell at them...' she thought with a sigh as she started to graze, still alert and her heart pounding.
(My first time using third person xD ^)

[Harley]

When I heard the crys and yelps I galloped s fast as my legs would carry me. When I got there, it was to late. The wolves were gone.

[Guest]

I snorted, watching all the action from a distance. I was surprised I didn't go over to help, but instead I left chica in charge for the moment and bounded into the forest after the wolves, making sure they didn't come back. When I returned to the herd, there was a large gash on my shoulder, but I ignored it. I stomped my hoof on the ground and shook myself, sending a bit of blood scattering. "They won't come back here," I said, lowering myself to the ground. My shoulder hurt severly, but I compltely ignored it. I laid on the ground, passive.

[Guest]

(feather12345 the wolves are gone already)
**Missy**
She glanced at Comet, the blood clearly seeping through his coat. Within an instant, she trotted over to him with her head lowered to his shoulder. "You alright?" I asked, and tried to lick his wound. She hoped it would help, as he helped her. She wished that he would be alright... She really cared for him and the others. Her body shivered as she glanced at the gash again, painful memories regaining in her mind. Luckily, she blocked them out, focusing completely on Comet.

[Harley]

When I had rushed to help, I had tripped, creating a large gash in my side, creating a large gash. Seeing Comet lay down, I trotted over and nuzzled his shoulder.

[Guest]

(comet)

I pulled away from the touch, not noticing it was one of my mares. My eyes were closed. I opened one and saw it was one of my mares. "I'm okay. No need to gather around." I said, getting up and walking to the river to wash off the gash that was still bleeding...

[Harley]

(RIght! I knew that..)

With nod of my head, I reached my neck back and licked my own wound, which was staining my roan coat.

[Guest]

(lol)

I snorted as the water stung the wound. I shook off, coming out of the water again, and realized the bleeding hadn't stopped. I still didn't worry. Instead, I laid down and pressed it against the ground, trying to cut off the circulation.




(Sorry, experimenting with colors...)

[Harley]

With a sigh, I pushed against as a tree like Comet was on the ground. I groaned a bit in pain but kept leaning.

[Guest]

**Missy**
Her head lowered as she thought she chased Comet off. "Sorry.... I-I just care about you..." She said with a sad tone, memories yet again seeping into her mind. When she was still in the previous herd, she tried to help people but they pushed her away. She closed her eyes for a moment and turned in the other direction, walking to a small, secluded part of the clearing where it was hard to see where she was. She snorted lightly and lowered her head, her mane falling onto her forelock. She didn't care much for the flies that were nawing on her alive, she thought every being had meaning... And feelings.... Her sensitivity made her very vulnerable to getting hurt... A very bad weakness to have now adays.

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