Re: Al Khamsa Story (four charecter's available) (please reply)

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~Hadban~
She snorted, and pawed the earth, snaking he head up and letting out an ear piercing neigh, men started to whip horses, and she sneered, her lips drawn back in a deadly snarl, she snapped the stick and she spit in the mans face... She then snorted holding her head high above the mares... She then felt something ram into her side, she stumbled and then looked up to see a gray mare rearing, ready to stike down at her.. Before the mare could, Hadban rammed her head into the mares stomach breaking a few bones... These mares were starting to go crazy...

~Kehilan~
She stood there, watching Hadban and the mare fihgt, then seeing Hadban ram the mare with her head to the stomach, and for sure breaking a few bones... She then snorted at the mare who dare challange Hadban...

[Emoticon]

I looked at the mares fighting, it was becoming violent. Someone hit me with a hoof on my back, cuasing meto bleed. A bay mare was looking at me and snorted. So I rammed her in the neck and turned around and buckd at her, breaking her front leg. When she landed she fell down, getting stepped on and dieing.

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~Hadban~
She smirked as Seglawi rammed into the bay mare... As Hadban wen to turn to Kehilan she was rammed again, up in the rump... Sending her forward, Hadban growled and whiped rearing, with the black mare... She then striked a forleg out and into the mares throat, as the mare landed on the ground, HAdban growled and landed with force on the mares spine, breaking it....

~Keilan~
She stayed away from the fighting mares, HAdban was the best fighter in our 5 band of mares... She was always the one to fight off attacks, usualy it was her and Seglawi.....

[Emoticon]

I stop fighting, rearing to let anyone know that I will kill them if I have to. I buck to make sure they get the message, and lean agaist the fence, then I walk around and fanily go to sleep in the day. I needed lots of rest.....

[Man O' War Lover]

I watched the fight in shock but know all was settled and we lay close togeth keepin ech other warm, the desert was hot during the day, but cold in the night. I looked up at the black clodid sky and say out loud "Look's like rain." I was beein a teaser and nuzzled my freind's before going to sleep.

This is the last day the mares are pined up and this is when they are ler go and are given a choice that changes there lives forever. The five mares do return to there master's but have a hard time desiding to, they are loyal to the call of the horn that send's theme in perfect battle formation.

"The Sheik sent his men to work as the mares stood crowded. The gates came crashing down and it sounded like a roll of thunder was coming threw as hundred's of mares ran toured the water. He noded to the small sheperd boy. As the boy sounded the battle call the other's joind in. The Sheik wated....

You can discribe your mares watching as the gates come down and write from there.....

(my horse Hamidani) I watch as the gates crash to the ground, I look up slowly at the water, then all of us move as one. My freind's are in the same trance as we run then my ear's prick back and I stop to listen. That sound that beautiful bugle call. The one that called us to battle. Our noble Sheik needed us. I called to my freind's we must return to our master like we alway's did. He had been with us since berth. He had freed us and now we must return. I did the most crazy thing any of the rest of the mare's would never do.... I turned away from the water and ran tourd my master.

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~Hadban~
She turned away form the water and raced up the slope, to her beloved master, she ran along side Hamidani....

~Kehilan~
She stopped hearing the call, and she turned her head to her master and then the water, she bit her lip, then shoke her head and whiped around to race up the slope toward her master...

[Man O' War Lover]

I smiled at my freind's thanking theme quietly. Our master came into veiw waiting. I ran up to him then jumped into a halt my head high tail high and ear's pricked. I stood in battle formation.

[Emoticon]

I gallop faster then dusty, only dipping my whisker in the water. I thought it about for a fraction of a second and went back. I meet my friends and try not to look at the water

[Man O' War Lover]

When we all come to a stop before our master and all of the suden we straten out in a finer battle formation than ever before. I felt proud what I had done. And our master look proud to have mare's like us.

~Sheik~

"These mare have stayed in the pin for five straight day's with thurst, pined up by a stream. They where given a choice to drink there fill but returned when no other mares did. They daserve a title, and shall for now on be called the Al

These mares where given a choice to drink there fill after five day's of beeing pined up with out a drop of water, but instead when they are relesed they return to me and at the sound of the battle horn, they daserve a title, for now on they shall be known as Al Khamsa, meaning, the five." He called to the shepard boy who broaght a single silk scarf. "This was made for one mare...he said holding it up for all to see, but five returned and five shall ware it." He had the scarf cut into five seprat peaces and tied one peace in each of the five mare's main's.

"Hadban is our mare of war and bravery."

"Kehilan is our mare of loyalty and freindship."

"Seglawi is the mare of great decision and speed."

"Abeyan is the mare of patiance and peace."

"Hamidani is the mare of loyalty."

(post you POV we can make it longer if you want? how does your horse feel about there award's?)

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~Hadban~
She slowed down and stood in battle formation and waited for her masters signal...

~Kehilan~
She stopped at Hamidani's side and stood tall, waiting for a signal....

[Man O' War Lover]

The Sheik gave the signal to the men, at first the mares stood stock still but then the men brought out clean fresh cool water to theme.

Hamidani- I looked at my silk scarf then at the other's smiling. "We did it." I nuzzled theme. "I know the first thing I'm gonna do." I said laughing. "Drink water tell I drop...but I could not finish my sintence for my muzzle was in a bucket of cool spring water. I galnced at the other's smiling to my self....we had don it together. I looked up at theme and asked "How do you guy's feel about this, I feel good?"

[Emoticon]

I bow my head, in thanks of the king. I let the scarf be put on me and as soon as the sheperd boy was done I stomped my feet, exited and reared. I drank and drank and drank, feeling happy. I forgot all about those mares anyway. I was playing around with it and sprayed some wateron my face and my body. I put my muzzle in the water to enjoy it's coldness.

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~Hadban~
After he was done putting the scarf on me, i stomped my hoove and put my muzzle in the cool, refreshing water, i drank and drank and drank, i let my muzzle drift off into the water...

~Kehilan~
After the boy was done putting the scarf around Kehilan's neck she squeazed through her friends and pushed Hamidani out of the way, adn drank her fill....

[Man O' War Lover]

I laughed at there enthusiasum, happy we had done the right thing...

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