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Post by • Echo Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:33 pm

{If you don't feel like reading the overview, then just skip it and go down to the post, though it'd be nice if you read it, thanks!}


Ears were pinned tightly against the mare's skull, tail clamped tightly down on her hind legs, teeth bared and head held high. The dark colored stallion circled her, almost as if he was slinking around her, and smirked wickedly while she just snorted, extending a long leg before her to paw roughly at the ground. As he circled around her she spun, never letting him get behind her. Every so often he would switch paths, and she would mimic his moves even faster so as not to lag behind.

"Come on, Baby..." he said quietly, not quite a whisper, his voice luring and coated with a thickness as sweet as dark chocolate as he stopped, stepping forward to rub his chest against her's. She opened her mouth wide and clamped her jaws down on his neck, not letting go as she reared roughly up, twisting her head back and forth. The stallion leaped back, swear words flowing from his mouth as he pinned his ears.
"B*tch!" he shouted, lunging at her. Raking his teeth down her side, he mounted her roughly, his tool sliding out as he tried to force his way into her, but her tail was in the way. She let out a loud squeal, trying to kick up at his stomach, though he was far too heavy. She tried rearing but his weight prevented that, so instead she threw herself onto the ground, rolling over. He fell off as she went, and she stood up quickly. Rearing, she slammed her hooves into his neck, rearing up again. This time her forelegs struck his head, and she continued to rear repeatedly. Finally she stopped, her breath coming in short, quick bursts, anger slowly dying away in my chest. With a flick of her long, silky gray tail, she turned away from the bloodied, malled skull of the stallion who had tried to rape and force her, moving off into the dark night.




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I threw my head roughly up into the air, eyes opening wide, bringing myself awake. My ears instinctively flattened against my head, lost in my mane, and my lips pulled back to reveal my strong, white teeth, glaring off into the darkness. At first I noticed nothing wrong, then a scent filled my nose and I flared my nostrils, fury flashing through my eyes as I pulled myself to my feet, my tail clamping down on my legs. My heat scent continued to drift around me as I lowered my head to chest level. Last time I was in heat a stallion had tried to force me. More stallions would find me, undoubtedly, and if they came only one at a time, then I'd be able to kill them, as well. But if a band of bachelors came around... I shook my head. To Hell with them all. I hated stallions, and none were gonna so much as touch me this time I was in season. No, no way. Lord help them if they tried, 'cause I would never be merciful to such filth.
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Post by Saviour Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:59 pm

Quite Frankly~~

I watch her and lower my head, my long mane falling in a swift movement accross my face. I look up at her, gald I was downwind I sigh quietly as not to let her hear. I stand there, head down, eyes covered, and my strong, short body still and completely relaxed. I had been following this beautiful mare for quite the amount of time now, but knew she would never accept me as a friend, let alone a mate. I look up at her again and my stunning eyes watched her elegant body and how beautiful she was. I shake my head and turn around to give up and leave, just then stepping on a stick, it cracked loudly; making her aware of my pressence. "Just my luck" I mummbled under my breath...
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Post by • Echo Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:08 pm

~Thief Of Souls~

A strange feeling seemed to tingle through my body and I flare my nostrils wildly, throwing my head up. "Who's there," I snarled, my tail clamped down tightly, body tensed so much that I was almost shaking. I heard a loud CRAAAACK! and spin around towards the sound. Rage masked my eyes as I saaw the stallion, and my body froze in just pure anger. My lips curled back over my teeth as I pawed roughly at the ground, eyes blazing and my coat gleaming as if on fire with health and fury.
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Post by Saviour Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:12 pm

Quite Frankly~~

I bow my head and walk out, but keep my distance "I apologize.." I started but stopped. My voice was smooth and slow like molasses[sp?] and my movements were graceful and my eyes were avoiding you. I stop walking and lower my head, looking at the ground, I sigh and then look up at you "For being a pain" I said.

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Post by • Echo Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:18 pm

~Thief

His voicce sounded so much like that of the previous stallion's, and I threw my head up high. "Stop!" I snarled as he began to walk towards me, and surprisingly, he did. As he finished his sentence I eyed him warily, still tense as I skittered slightly back from him. "What are you doing here," I say, not really a question, but a demand as I glower at him, a wary look in his eyes.

{just as a prewarning, she's not exactly gonna let any stallions sweet talk her, she's a virgin and she's planning on keeping it that way since she hates all males}
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Post by Saviour Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:25 pm

[i know he is just that way with all horses, even other stallions]

I shrug and shake my head "I was following you-" I said and stopped "But...I wasn't planning on harming you at all, I apologize for scaring you..." I said again and keep my head low showing her I was submissive. My honey coloured mane and tail blowed gently in the breeze, they seemed to have no knots at all. I shake when a deer fly lands on my back and look over at you again and flick my ears as flies try to bug me, and they succeeded unfortunatly.
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Post by • Echo Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:19 am

~Thief
I snorted loudly, my eyes hard and iced over. I wasn't afraid of a lone stallion, even though somewhere inside I knew he had reason to think so. But he had been following me! "And why," I demanded, my voice almost a hiss as I stared at him, blinking every so often. A few flies landed on my legs and sides but I resisted the growing urge to swish my tail at them.
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Post by Saviour Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:52 am

"Because you are one of the most beautiful mares I have ever seen" I said honestly. I sounded like some kind of freak. Was I? No, I wasn't a freak...I couldn't be. I lower my head and my forelock once again covers my crystal blue eyes. I wait for the usual scoff and retort. I hated waiting, even though she would respond in a matter of seconds, those few seconds gave me time to think of the worst possible outcome.
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Post by • Echo Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:46 pm

~Thief
I toss my head up into the air, narrowing my eyes. I shake my mane roughly, teeth still bared. Why would he hide, then? Eh, nevermind, I already know that if I had known he was following me he would have been dead by now. "No, I'm not," I growled(not literally XD). I didn't want any horse, especially a stallion, hanging around me. Ever. Even if they insisted they wouldn't hurt me. They were all liars, anyway.
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Post by Saviour Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:50 pm

Quite Frankly~~
I nod "I'm Sorry" I said again "Really I am" I say and shake my mane. I rest my eyes and sigh, the worst posible outcome had come true, of course. i stomp my hoof at a fly and look up at you again "I will leave if you wish"

[sorry had a brain fart...lol]
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Post by • Echo Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:34 pm

~Thief
I flicked the very tip of my tail back and forth, my head dropping irritably to chest level. "I don't exactly want you here," I snarled. After I said it did l actually realize how rude l sounded, but didn't actually really care. He was a stallion. He didn't deserve any respect in my mind.

{haha, it's okay XD}
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Post by Saviour Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:49 pm

I nod but lower my head to the ground. I slowly walk toward the treeline again, my hooves slowly grazing the red dirt. I flick my tail calmly and reach the treeline and pause, turning around "I'm sorry for the inconveinience[sp?] " I say
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Post by • Echo Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:08 pm

~Thief
The whites of my eyes were still showing as I watched himw alk away, relaxing my lips back over my teeth, body still tense and rigid. I snort as he looks back at me and throw my head up as if to warn him off, showing my teeth again and ignoring his words.

{haha, I honestly don't know, that's one of the words I use the most yet it's spelled weird haha XD and is he leaving? Sad }
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Post by Saviour Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:12 pm

[i know right! Idk...I don't know what to do really lolz Im lost]

I jump at her sudden motion and cower down. My head low and my tail low, I perk my ears foreward and lean back ready to run quickly if I have to. My mane was still blowing viciously, I couldn't help it though. I look back up at her and think to myself
why are you just giving up? I shake my head clear mentallly and walk around the treeline, listening for her to make sure she doesn't attack me. I stop a long, yet close distance away and lower my head to graze. I keep my ears alert, they swivelled with every one of her motions, and with any other sound nature made. I sneeze when the grass gets up into my nose and lift my head to look at you.
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Post by • Echo Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:20 pm

~Thief
I see him stay at the edge of the line where the trees began, and my eyes hardened slightly. Watching him out of the corner of my eye at all times, I lower my head to graze, not really tasting the grass I was eating. Seeing him lift his head to look at me, I throw my head up, eyes rolling back to show the whites. I let out a soft squeal and lifted my forelegs off the ground in a half-rear, my left foreleg extended outward. I pawed with it at the ground as I landed again, skittering backwards.

{haha, same here XD}
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Post by Saviour Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:26 pm

Quite Frankly~~

I see her reaction and snort quietly, I lower my head again but watch her, nibbling on the grass but not tearing it up. I flick my tail at flies and shake my mane when a painful deer fly bites me. I raise my head again, but this time I look out at the mountains infront of me. I rest my eyes and enjoy the breeze, I felt so peaceful when I was with my herd, but my father saw me as a threat and didn't want me to be heir, so I was kicked off the land harshly and was to never return. I sigh and lower my head once again and graze truly now. Grabbing the grass and ripping it up, enjoying the sweet rubbery roots.
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Post by • Echo Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:00 pm

~Thief
I wanted to run and buck, to let out all my fustration and anger and to just have a good time, but how could I when it was over there listening and sometimes watching me? I exhaled loudly through my nostrils, making a weird sound like a buck, and do another half-rear, pawing at the ground. Flicking my tail and ignoring the scent coming off of me, I pace back and forth becoming more and more distressed with each and every passing minute.
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Post by Saviour Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:32 pm

I walk father away and now was barely in sight. I lower my head and graze once more, giving her her space. I sigh and flick my forelock out of my face. I roll onto my back, It felt good so I laid there for a second, then get up and my ankle popped. I sneeze from the cloud of dust that had arose and I shake my head free of flies.
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Post by • Echo Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:35 pm

~Thief
Out of the corner of my eye I see him start walking away and snort, sliding to a stop, head up high to keep my balance. Straightening up, I shake my whole body free of the dust I had created when I slid. Pawing at the ground for a moment, I dance away from the rising dirt, lifting my legs up high in a dancing prance, speeding into a trot, then a canter, moving in large circles that gradually got smaller until I was pivotting. Then I twisted and went the other way, starting in a large circle again.
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Post by Saviour Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:39 pm

I see her but then she slowly dissappears in a cloud of red brown dust. I snort and lower my head and graze on the green grass, my ears pinned to keep the dirt from entering them. I rest my eyes and raise my head, listening to my surroundings.
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Post by • Echo Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:47 pm

~Thief
I slide to a stop in the middle of the dust, ears flat againt my head to prevent the dust and wind from going in. Rolling my eyes I toss my head up then lower it to chest level, extending it outward as I kicked up into a gallop, my strides fast and long. My speed gained and gained as I ran, the only sound filling my eears those of mt hoofbeats and my own steady breathing. The ground shifted beneath me, and soon I slid to a stop on the top of a hill, my breathing ragged as I straightened, looking out across the valley. The only other horse in sight was the stallion and I relaxed my ears forward slightly to listen intently to anything and everythin.
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Post by Saviour Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:52 pm

quite Frankly:I sigh and walk towards the creek, looking up breifly at the mare and then down to drink from the stream, I walked into the willows and layed down, comforted by the coolness and the humidity
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Post by • Echo Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:58 pm

~Thief
I snort again, rearing up and twisting around to face the distant mountains, flicking my ears, feeling slightly disappointed. I got along much better with mares, and I wished there were someone here, someone to talk to, but there was only the thing in sight. I wanted to whinny, but already my heat scent gave away where I was to stallion's, and my voice would do that far more better. Sweatt covered my body in a sheen, and I laid down to roll.
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Post by Saviour Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:02 pm

I sighed and felll asleep slowly, not realizing I was so tired.
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Post by • Echo Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:12 pm

~Thief
I rolled onto my back, kicking my heels up into the air and twisting to itch my back. Finally I roll onto my other side with a soft squeal. Extending my forelegs before me, I grunted softly as I pulled myself to my feet, flicking my tail uneasily. It was only midday, but I felt tired.
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