Re: BiteMarked Fighter

[Soul Hunter]

i listened and watched... "i feel as if i'm being treated as a pup"

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i said "i'm not trying to make you feel like your a pup."but you do need more training."cause my father believes that shadowpack will try and attack us."so he wants everyone to be ready even if they dont attcak."there is a metting by the big rock tommarow."my dad is taking me he said i need to bring you."ithen told her how to bite another wolfs neck.i said "bitemarked do you remember when you bit my neck?" "you bit it wrong."you are supposed to bit near the the heart you bit near the neck."

[Soul Hunter]

"hmm ok, that explains that.. also my father did say i was doing something wrong" i said listening attentively.. i liked to learn new things since it came in helpful
"wait, ShadowPack.. i think my sister Rosea is in that pack..." i said slightly worried.. i had stayed with that pack a few days just to check on Rosea... i may have been the runt of the litter but i was still the strongest of my sisters and the only one who wouldn't give in very easily...

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i smiled and said "well there might be an attack from them."i showed her and told bitemarked how to do it so i told her to do it on me.but just show dont bite.ok.and after this we have go hunting for our pack.i still have a mentor he is comming soon his name is shadoweye.

[Soul Hunter]

"hmm ok" i said and gentle put my mouth around the area she had told me too and then back off... "that ok?" i said "also incase you haven't noticed i learn the skills and then speed it up also my pack never learn that ivisable move... we learned a speed skill it make us sort of invisable but we just speed up to an extrondinary speed but we aren't allowed to use it often" i said

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i hear a crack.and look at the back of me.i growl "hey its only me fireflame dont do that." "bitmarked this is fireflame."i walked over to bitemarked and told her that he likes me and i like him so back off.i smile "fireflame what are you doing here?" "dragonstar said he is taking a poatrol around to check the bouders."and see if there is any shadowpack warriors." oh bitemarked yes that was good."you are doing very well"

[Soul Hunter]

i didn;t really care i wasn't interested in others at the moment "thanks and nice to meet you fireflame" at the word shadowpack my mind started racing.. *i have to get Rosea aay from there and fast* i thought holding back a growl of annoyance...
i then shook my head and listened..

ooc- sory if i take so long i'm watching a programme at the saem tiem and it has alot of episodes but is really good...

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you have to get your sister rosea out of shadowpack and fast i said.i can read minds.we will go get her tonight i will tell my father.we are gonna have to plan an attack.i told fireflame and bite to follow.i yell to bitemarked we are getting your siste out of there that is the wrest pack you can ever be in.they train there pups when there just little and the shadowpacks leader onestar he kicked the elders out of the pack.the elders now hate him.i think we and get them on our side and fight back.come on lets go i ran as fast as i could back to camp.i found my father walking into his den with my mother bluefang.i howled to get my fathers and mothers attention.my father walked out with my mother following behide.dragonstar fireflame spoke we need to get bitemarkeds sister out od shadowpack.WHAT! your sister is in that pack we need toget her out of there fast.leoperdstripe get the shadowpack elders.bitemarked follow leoperdstripe and fireflame you go to.we will need all the help we can get.i nodded my head and turned and ran off.

[Soul Hunter]

"they know me and won't suspet me at all, i have been to their pack so i know alot about them.. trust me spending a few days with a sister and her pack is really helpfull" i said "also Rosea is a healer as well as my other sister Fleura...i have spent time in both their packs and frankly they aren't very strong... trust me on this one..." i said this while followign Leoperdstripe...
"also i've met the elders before"

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onestar is and he shouldnt be a leader.he killed one of frostflacks pups because he was training them to hard.and he will kill anyone who crosses his way.now come on we need to get the elders.

[Soul Hunter]

"coming coming" i said running just behind her...she was both taller and had longer legs than me so...

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we finally got there i howled and ran over to the elders.leoperdstripe what are you doing here we have to get bitemarkeds sister out of shadowpack.could you help us cloverash,vielotshadow,zibrastripe,and icefrost.plz?they all stand up and said "yes we will help you kill onestar.that you.i turned and ran back to camp with bitemarked,fireflame,cloverash,vielotshadow,zibrastripe,and icerost right behide me.we finally got to camp and i told dragonstar we got the elders. "hello cloverash,vielotshadow,zibrastripe,and icefrost thank you for comming.my father leads the way towards shadowpack quietly.he tells us all to be quiet and get ready to spring into action.i was ready and will allways be perpared.i lokked at bitemarked and said "do you rememeber what i said and showed you.and theni looked at fireflame and then at my mother and father.

[Soul Hunter]

"yeah, i remember" i said and looked to everyone "man, i feel small" everyone was taller than me and worst of all i was the runt of the litter so both my sisters were taller "before we go.. what ever you do do not attack a female wolf that has green eyes and pure white fur.. my sister stands out alot..." my ears pricked forward and i crouched down waiting...

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we will not attack your sister.i waited my father gave the singe.i howled following allong with fireflame and bitemarked.i told icefrost,cloverash,zebrastripe,and vielotshadow.to hold us by the fur and throw us in the middle of the clearing.they did i winked at my father and he howled and all the wofs came out of trees and behide rocks.i got up and ran towards onestar.i jumped up on his back and fliped him i bit where the heart ws but he pushed me off of him.i jumped back up and yelled for bitemarked to help me.i clawed onestar in the face and i used my speed to attack i went under him and bit his stomach and got back up and grabbed his throut and pulled him down to the ground.

[Soul Hunter]

i helped Leoperdstripe by attacking when he got back up i bit his neck swiftly and biting his windpipe.. before backing off and growling.. i heard a familiar howl.. it was Rosea.. my sister...
*good she's ok* i said and then attacked again and slashed his belly open with my claws before backing off overed in his blood... my eyes went wild again...

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my father yelled ans said "leoperdstripe watch out!"i turn my head and a wolf jumps on my back.she claws me and then i stop my eyes start to turn red.they did and i then couldnt control my anger i fliped and jumped on its back and bit where the heart was blood was gusying out.ibit harded i wouldnt let go untill i herd a howl.i did and i let go.i killed him.my eyes still red as fire.i seemy father getting attack and i ran after the wolf i bite the wolfs neck and threw it.my father gets up and pushes me down and tells me its over.the others ran away.my eyes were still red.i growled and clawed at the ground.i was in another world and i couldnt get out.

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[Soul Hunter]

"this is bad" i said and then i heard a yelp i headed straight towards it.. "Rosea!" i shouted and seeing my sister injured i stood infront of her and looked to the other wolf with her blood on it's maw.. i growled "huh? Bitemarked.. long time no see" "well, well if it isn't you again... i told you not to hurt Rosea" i then linged at him and ripped his stomache open before he began cirleling me.. "you lost last time didn't you?" "oh no i didn't you're brains are just scrumbled" he growled and lunged at me.. i dodged and then lunged and burst his windpipe.. he was dead... i tuned to my sister and helped her get up and quickly took her into the shadows and made her hide her scent and herself.. i then went back and looked to Leperdstripe "Snap out of it!" i shouted in her ear... and then went to Dragonstar and said "my sister is safe... i got her into the shadows now how do we get Leaperdstripe back to normal?" i said

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my father said "it might take 1 day.she really got angry just when she comes back she will be your metor.but for now i will be.now what shall we do with your sister.my mother walked over to me and licked my check."BLUEFANG NOOOOOOOOO!"I GROWLED.i allmost bite my mother.my father pushed her out of my face and told her "dont mess with her when shes like this ok."bluefang "ok."

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"shall we go?" i asked... i wiped my muzzle on the ground to get rid of the blood apart from that i had a few injuries on my legs... "if we are leaving i'll go get my sister"

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yes we are leaving go get your sister.my father walked over to me and said "come on were leaving lead the way.i looked at my dad with my eyes still red.fireflame ran beside me.my father told fire flame to get back away from me.we reached camp.when i got there i got something from the pile of rabbits and fish i grabed a rabbit and went to me den.

[Soul Hunter]

i got my sister and walked back with her my ears flickering round for anything.. whe we got back i put herbs on her wounds...i took her to a cave adn let her lie down before getting a rabbit and giveing one to her and then eating one myself... "you ok now?" i asked her "yeah.. i'm fine although you've gotten better since the last time i saw you..." "yeah, yeah.. i recently joined this pack and this she-wolf called Leoperdstripe is my mentor.. she's really kind and also this pack is a whole lot better than your old pack..." i said taking another bite.. "honestly Bite, you still have no manners and you're still the runt even and two " "oi, you're one to talk i may be the unt but- anyway how's Fleura" "she's fine .. nothing has changed in her pack though" "thank goodness" i said.. "honestly you should stop worrying.. " "how can i? you two are constantly getting in trouble and even though i am the runt and the youngest i can still beat you two in a fight" "well you got that right" she said.. i stood up and got a drink and then went back...

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i got out of my den and walked in where bitemarked and rosea layed.i said "you cant beat me on a fight and if my father didnt pull me off of you bite you would be dead." "even though you might be strong you still cant beat me."my eyes were still red."

[Soul Hunter]

i stood up protecting my sister "get away now.. come back when you're normal again" i didn't bedge at all

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i growled "dont test me bite." i walked away and then..... i fell to the ground.

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i went over "Rosea stay there and keep and eye on her, i'll go get help" i said and sprinted off... i found her mother "Leoperdstripe's collasped, is there anyone i should tell?" i said concerned
Rosea had a power to put up barriers , i had an abnormal healing rate and Fleura could heal others in the middle of a fight...

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