Don't Forget To Remember Me... (Please reply!)

[• Echo]

~*_*~Kiera~*_*~

The wind tugged at my long black dress, it's golden and silver designs shining in the shadowlight that filtered down through the clouds, the only reminder that a sun really did exist up in the swirling, gray and black clouds overhead. My long, dirty blonde hair was tied back in a tight ponytail, the wind whipping it back and forth behind me like a big cat's flicking tail just before it attacked, pulling the bands looser and looser. Finally, it snatched the string and ripped it loose from my hair. My long hair blew out behind me like a curtain as I continued to step forward, my eyes intent on the massive waves that rolled in from the sea, crashing and breaking in salty sprays with loud roars of agony on teh bank that mirrored the feeling in my heart. Sand seemed to fly everywhere as the same song ran endlessly on loop through my mind, never pausing once it ended to start back up again.

If I Die Young,
Bury Me in Satin.
Lay Me Down,
on a, Bed of Roses
Sink Me In The River,
At Dawn,
Send, Me, Away
With the Words
Of A Love Song...

Words, imprinted in my brain, rang clear in my mind, repeating themselves at every pause in the song, never letting me forget the life that I was so desperate to leave behind, almost forming a song of their own hatched inside the original song.

It's your fault.

Stopping, I close my eyes. A sigh escaped my delecately carved, elegant lips as I tilted my chin upwards, scowling up at the sky as rain began to lash out at me. My soon soaking wet hair clung to the back of my neck, pastered to my head and clothes like thick swarms.

It's your fault...

My eyes flew open as I heard it again, though this time, I wasn't just imagining the familiar voice that rang true in my mind. Turning around slowly, my back now facing the open ocean, I look at the dark robed figure that stood up tall before me, face hidden in his hood. Lifting one clothed arm to point a long, deathly white, skeletal finger straight at me, words of an unknown language whispered quietly to me, he disappeared in the mist that blew towards me. Twisting around, searching for the dark figure, my heartbeat sped up, pounding frantically against my chest, almost threatening to leap out. My breath came in shorter, faster gasps as hands seemed to constrict around my throat, cutting off my windpipe. Finally, it was my turn to leave this earth...

Then, as suddenly as the attack had come on, it was gone. Sagging to the sandy beach, the mist fading away, clouds moving away from the sun and the wind stopping altogether. I lay in the heated sand, the sunlight blistering down mercilessly upon me now. Gasping for air and looking like a fish out of water, I allow my mind to retreat into the darkness beyond, my breathing shallow and heartbeat slowing till it was almost at a stop, but still beating, though weakly, as I waited for someone, anyone...

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[• Echo]

{Anyone??????}

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[Saviour]

[srry I cant write tht good.... ]

[Emoticon]

(ok i'll try)
A lonely man came up on the beach. Yes, I was the lonely man with the jacket and long pants on. I was collecting seashells with sparkels and the sound of the waves. My heart was broken, but I dare not show it on the outside, Of fear of people might laugh at me in college. Back then I couldn't hold back of my emotions and everyone laughed at me and almost made me feel like a tiny fly, being swatted out and dyeing on the inside. Then, I found a seashell on the ground, the one I was looking for. I felt like a wimp because of those college kids, Then I sat down, I was exhosted from my work. I didn't care if I would die right there were I lay. I let the tide come on my feet, then drain as the tide came out. I heard someone on the ground, and someone was there laying, down. I rushed over to see who it might be. I helped her up. I said with a emotional voice, letting a tear flow down my eye I pretended that it was a piece of sand. My emotional voice began to fade. "Hello, My name is Jistafied. What's your name?"

[• Echo]

Kiera
Almost as if from a whole other dimension, I hear someone approaching me quickly on the sand, then hands touching me, bringing me back... My chest rose and fell painfully, each breath dragged through my dry lips feeling like a dull knife being dragged slowly down my throat. My eyes fluttered dimly, and I sucked in a deep breath at the sudden, blinding sunlight that encased me, hiding from view whoever was bending over me. Still in a sort of a daze, a trance, I forced myself to come to a sitting position, my head swimming. When I could see again, I focused my gaze on the man who stood before me. Clasping my arm over his, I allowed him to help me stand, my expression wary as I took a step back. Too quickly. I doubled over in pain for a moment, gasping for air and looking like a fish for a moment. When the red and black dots cleared from my vision, I straightened up slowly to look at him.
"Kiera..." I say, my voice weak, yet soft and clear at the same time, with an underlying accent that was somewhere between Engliush and French.
"Who-..." I began, but cut myself short, realizing he had already answered that question. Shaking my head slightly, I tilt my head upwards to get a better look at him, but failing because of the sunlight.

[Emoticon]

[b]As she talks, I look at her puzzled, why is she like this? She looks like she banged her head in a metal piece, but that doesn't matter. I say to myself, "That's a fine name, never heard of it ..." I don't finish my sentence, Then I looked in her eyes and could tell something was wrong, trying not to freak her out I stop gazing in her eyes. "Is something wrong, kiera? I don't have ESP or anything but i can tell theirs something wrong." This was the first time I ever walked up to a girl since high school, I was so nervous I felt like biting my fingers. I tried not to show it but I started shaking a lot in my legs. Don't mess it up now... I say to myself. I felt like running away to another land were I would be all alone. Everybody stares at me because I have a sad face, they point at me too. I felt like crying. My life was miserable, Everyone will call me a baby and I had no friends. But I had to keep going, hoping my life will get better, but it hasn't. In fact, it's been getting worse.

[• Echo]

Kiera
I find myself shifting uneasily under his gaze as he looked at me, studied me... Averting my gaze down to the ground, trying to focus more on my breathing than his eyes so as not to pass out. Flicking my gaze up to look at him when I heard his voice break through the uncomfortable silence, I shake my head. "No... No, I'm fine, I think," I say quietly, shaking my head again. "I wonder how long I was lying there..." I think aloud, my voice now soft and clouded as I look back at the spot where I had lain, the colors and details blurred and swimming in front of my eyes. Bringing myself back into the land of reality, I look back up at him. I could tell he was nervous, and that made me ervous, not knowing why he was or if he was planning something, or, or... I had no clue, and it fustrated and confused me.

[Emoticon]

-jastifid-(I can't even get my bio's name right lol!)
"oh....ok. Well..."*You see me trying to start up a conversation*"umm....oh yeah. How did you end up here? I'm not trying to get into your business or something. I just...Nevermind."*i walk back, my head is looking at the ground and I kick sand of my shoe. I start to sweat a little, I hold my hands together, Like I was disapointated.I think to myself"no...no snap out of it! People don't act like this. just calm down and act normal.""Do you want to come to my place? do you need a place to stay or something? I got a room for someone else..."*I change like I was a different person with a personailty. My hair is soggy and wet. I shake it to get the rain off my face. I shake a lot on you by acdent.*"oh, sorry"


"Do you even have an house? It's going to be sunset here you might wanna hurry and get home. You can stay with me if you like. I gotta change out of these wet clothes because there starting to get me a cold. You might wanna change too. Do ya wanna be friends? I would like to get to know ya better, If I can"*You see me smile and see my white teeth.*"Oh when I was nervous like that I just tend to get a little weird and stuff. I need to calm myself down and relax and all that."*My teeth start to chatter and I start shaking.*"Do you want to come with me for a place to stay or are ya fine? Well hurry and your decision because this is getting weird like i'm talking to a tree. It seems you don't talk much, Do you?. "brrrrrr..." I say at loud on acdent.

[• Echo]

{Where did the rain come from??}

Kiera
I smile small when he asks if I talk a lot, shrugging. "I sometimes do, but it seemed that you were the one who was talking without breathing between sentences," I say. "And I just walk around a lot, nothing special about me being here. I guess I just... Fainted, from the heat or something. Must not have drank enough water," I lie, shrugging my shoulders as I struggled to answer the bombarding questions he was asking me. Wiping a little of the water off my brow, I force a smile up at him. "No, I'm sorta on my own lately, staying wherever I can. Really, it's always been like that," I add, so quietly he almost couldn't hear the words. "And it's okay, everyone gets nervous, it's natural." I smile small, my teeth straight and white. Looking up, I see the dark clouds returning, biting my lower lip as I shivered, making it seem like the movement was from the cold even though it wasn't. "Uhm... Sure," I say, not really realizing the words were coming until they were already out of my mouth, and I was unable to take them back. "That would be nice."

[Emoticon]

Oh i thought their was rain lol
~Olrandor~
ok. No more questioons or anything, I try to e quiet all the way to my house."*I look at you. I can tell your dying of boredom but I didn't relize that i said I wouldn't ask no more questions so I couldn't ask another question.*"Do you want to doanything, Kierai ? I've got sometime before I have to go to work. Just thought i would walk at the beach to relax from all the noise and tension. Well, I guess were hear at my house." *You see a two-story house with red paint on the oustside. The living room is tan, and the house is mostly tan all thorgh the house. I put my wet coat on the coathanger by the door.*

(I'l make a topic about his house in the houses forum ok?)

[• Echo]

{lol, no problem, and okay!}

Kiera
I smile dryly, glancing over at him. "That's another question," I say, then shrug. "I don't really know; I haven't really spent anytime with other people lately," I say, following him into the house. "Nice place," I say, turning my head slightly to look at him.

[• Echo]

{Are you going to make the topic?}

[Emoticon]

lol sorry im going to make 2 topics but the other one is for my new bio

[• Echo]

Lol, it's no problem

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