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Post by Guest Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:58 am

R.I.P
Danielle
11/06/09



I can still hear your voice,
I can still feel your love.

And even though its been a year,
It feels like only a month.

I know you're in a better place,
Away from the twisted minds of Humankind,

But I still can't shake the feeling,
That somehow it didn't end right.

I remember in the hospital,
Saying you'd be okay.

I never meant to lie,
I only wanted it to end that way.

And now that it's all over,
I finally can see,
What a loving sister,
And best friend you've been to me.

So you'lll always be in my heart,
Always on my mind.

I'm proud to let my tears fall,
You taught me to do that,
And even though I didn't listen then,
That's all I'll think abut now.

I know you're in a better place,
So know that when I'm crying,
I'm only crying for myself,
Because I'll miss you always,
And you should be happy now.

I know you've got your wings and halo,
Flying free in the clouds.

I hope you remember me,
As much as I will you.

But don't let my sadness sorrow you,
For it's only temporary.

I'm not saying I'll ever forget you,
But I'll see through the pain someday.

I'll be abe to laugh and smile,
Cry and pain again.
Even if right now it's nothing,
The pain will come again.

I'll always remember that one day,
When the hospital called one last,
I'll put on a brave smile,
But I'll be crying inside.

Because I know that you wouldn't want it that way,
You'd want us to be happy,
That we knew such a wonderful girl,
Bringing everyone joy and love.

And even though Death got you in the end,
You fought long and strong.

So fly my angel,
Rest with Jesus in the clouds.

For you have truly been, an Angel,
And the best friend I could have ever wished for.



Post what you thought of it please. Crying or Very sad

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Post by Guest Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:30 pm

Is this about your best friend? Cause if it is it makes me sad..... But its also very interesting

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Post by aphrodite Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:10 pm

thats really good.... but sad... Sad Crying or Very sad Sad Crying or Very sad Sad Crying or Very sad Sad Crying or Very sad

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Post by LoveOnHerArms Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:16 pm

wow that really good bt man i about cryed! Sad
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Post by Guest Sun Dec 13, 2009 5:20 pm

that would be my cousin... She just died of cancer, she was my best friend =/ Our birthdays were only 9 days away Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad

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Post by Guest Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:03 pm

Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad I have water works going on here! I am so sry.

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Post by LoveOnHerArms Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:07 pm

awwww wow! Sad Sad Sad im so sorry valley of tears!
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Post by Guest Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:01 am

it's okay, at least now she's happy again...

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Post by Guest Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:26 pm

is it really so wrong for me to be mad that she's gone? To wish she could've stayed? I know she tried... But is it so wrong to miss her, to want her back, when I KNOW she's with Jesus now?

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Post by Guest Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:54 pm

No its not. That happens to me all the time. My best friends (even though they are animals) die and I hate the lord for a while and want them back. its like he takes away everything I love just to watch me suffer.

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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:08 pm

no its perfectly normal last year two of my friends where in a car crash one died bt his little bro lived,we all where mad and wished they both had lived and wanted him back...bt no matter what we do hes gone..
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Post by Guest Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:47 pm

Hey could you tell me who the poems by?

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Post by Guest Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:48 pm

me.

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Post by Guest Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:50 pm

Okay What is your actuall name and could I use this poem as my speech piece?

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Post by Guest Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:52 pm

uhm, I guess you could, and my name is Maye Wilson.

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Post by Guest Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:20 pm

KK Thanks Very Happy

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Post by Guest Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:27 pm

Everyone loved the poem but one question, Is it published?

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Post by Daydreamer Tue Feb 02, 2010 5:27 pm

omg i am so sorry but the peom its fantastic!
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Post by Guest Tue Feb 02, 2010 10:26 pm

thank you, glad you enjoyed it. and sorry, it is not published, I'm only 13 Laughing but I hope it gets published later in life

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