Re: Warrior Cats Rainclan. (Re-opened)

[P r o m i s e r]

(OK cool!)

Ravenstar smiled and chatted with Snowpelt for some time. "You know. I think this might be the first time since the beginning of leaf-fall we have talked." Ravenstar meowed, rather happy he saw the real Snowpelt. Of course, Ravenstar still loved her, but he wouldn't saw a word until he felt it would be a right time. "Again, thank you for fetching Oaktail." Ravenstar added.

Cougartail's eyes widened as he saw a band of ShadowClan cats stalking towards them. "Treepaw!" He yowled, him and the cats racing down and hissing at the ShadowClan cats. "Sharptooth!" Mountainclaw snarled. Sharptooth looked guilty, but mouthed "I'm sorry" to them.

"Do you hear that?" Ravenstar asked Snowpelt, pricking up his ears. He darted out of camp and in the direction of the noise, and anger clawed at him as he saw Tigerfoot attacking Treepaw. Ravenstar snapped and bashed into the slightly smaller tom, his claws unsheathed. "Don't you touch any of them!" He yowled as the battle between RainClan cats and ShadowClan cats unfolded. After RainClan had won, the deputy of ShadowClan known as Hawkfeather said, "This isn't over. We will meet you in battle in 3 days! At Fourtrees!" He yowled as he lead the band away.

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~Snowpelt~
I laughed slightly and then said,
"Really...all I did was scream help. No big deal."

The brief battle had begun and I had targeted one cat. It was the one that was attacking Cleo. I followed after Ravenstar and once the tom was off Cleo I attacked. I pinned him but let him go after I heard Ravenstar's announcement.

Then I looked around for Cleo. I had only briefly listened to Cleo's plan. Specifically the part about me distracting Ravenstar. I didn't pay attention to the other half.
"Where's Cleo?" I asked, starting to slightly panic. I looked around and caught a whiff of her scent but I was still scared. I followed the smell of her scent and then looked at Ravenstar, eyes wide.
"The scent leads out of camp... Cleo left camp." I mewed.

[Dark**Light]

(aslo I need to change the names. Found out actual names. It was Bluepaw, Sunpaw, Larchpaw, Redpaw, Silverpaw and Moonpaw. So just make the names Treefur, Bluefrost, Suntail, Larchflame, Redclaw, Silversong, and Moongaze. lolz...I looked at my old posts and that's how I found the actual names. So it's Bluepaw, Larchpaw, and Redpaw that are missing. IT MATTERS TO ME, OKAY! lolz...it really will annoy me now that I know their actual names)

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(OK TIMESKIP TO THE BATTLE!)

Ravenstar lead the Clan to Fourtrees, Cougartail and Riverpelt trailing next to him. ShadowClan was face to face with the ShadowClan Leader, Lionstar. A bulky ginger tom with silver eyes. Ravenstar meowed a battle cry and the two Clans collided, Ravenstar was battling with Tigerfoot, Cougartail was battling Grayfur, Mountainclaw was battling Jaytail and the Clan was just battling. Blackpaw was battling with a young warrior as Leafstorm battled a tom 3 inches bigger than her. Ravenstar was now fighting Lionstar. The two collided and hissed. Soon, Ravenstar pinned him and sank his teeth in Lionstar's neck, taking Lionstar's 4th life.

[Dark**Light]

~Cleo~
I had stayed with Bluepaw, Larchpaw, and Redpaw at their camp. Then I heard Ravenstar's battle cry.
"Guys...the clan is fighting. We have to help." I hissed. Bluepaw agreed and Larchpaw and Redpaw just went along with the flow. When we approached the battle site we saw that the fight was split even. Everyone was fighting someone. It was dead even. Nobody could team without having an extra clan member not fighting anyone. I looked at Bluepaw, then Larchpaw, then Redpaw. They all nodded and we burst into the fourtrees clearing. I yowled loudly as I raced in with Redpaw and Bluepaw at my tail. My fur was fluffed up so I looked larger than I really was. I raced over to help Blackpaw and Bluepaw took on a cat that was teaming on our sister, Moonpaw. And it turned out to be Silverpaw who wasn't fighting. She was going around with Oaktail (her mentor) and helping heal the wounded. Larchpaw raced over to take on my spot with Blackpaw. Then I raced over to Shabertooth. He attacked Bluepaw and my siblings. He needed to pay. I hissed and swiped my claw along his flank. He yowled and then I swiped my claws along his belly, killing him instantly. Then I raced over and was right beside Ravenstar as Lionstar was brought back to life. (He was only on his 4th life. He still has a few more to go...like 5 or something.) Lionstar was brought back to life and I helped Ravenstar fight him. The moment Lionstar had stood back up I leaped onto his back and dug my needle-sharp claws into his back. Lionstar yowled in pain. He tried to shake me but I only latched on tighter. I sunk my teeth into his shoulder and tasted the blood in my mouth. I hissed loudly and scratched above Lionstar's eyes. I only just missed his eyes. But I wanted my enemy to see me when he lost his 5th life. I yowled and, in one fluid movement, leaped off his back, slid under him, and scraped my claws along Lionstar's belly. Then I puffed up and hissed as he yowled in pain.

I was angry and ready to kill. Shadowclan had chased my siblings away and brought me much pain. I was ready to kill as payback. I was full of fury. I was ready to fight. Ready to help. Ready to prove myself.

(Geez...Cleo went all kamikaze in there! She was just like bam Bam BAM! You're done son! Cleo must've gotten a hold of some Redbull or something she was just like...all out for REVENGE!)

[P r o m i s e r]

(LOL That's what happens when you give Cleo Catnip. xD)

Ravenstar stopped Cleo from taking another one of Lionstar's lives. "Remember the Warrior Code? We do not kill!" He scolded, fur fluffed up, making him look twice his size. But he calmed. "Let's just fight." He meowed. Then he saw the strongest cat in ShadowClan pinning Snowpelt down. His name was Heavyclaw. When he was about to kill Snowpelt, that's when Ravenstar jumped in. He scraped his claws along Heavyclaw's back, and sank his teeth in his foreleg. Heavyclaw yowled and sped off. "Snowpelt..." Ravenstar whispered, nudging her cheek. His aqua blue eyes had sparks flying in them, just like when he first fell for Snowpelt.

[Dark**Light]

(lol yeah. Note to self--NEVER EVER give Cleo catnip)

~Cleo~
I listened to Ravenstar but then challenged him.
"But you took one of Lionstar's lives. Why can't I? Plus, I already killed that Sabertooth or whatever. And in my defense he deserved it. He did try to kill THREE of my siblings." I said. But then I went back to my normal self and just continued to fight. I chased after Heavyclaw, going back to my kamikaze self and just going nuts with fighting. I would have thought that Shadowclan would have surrendered when Lionstar lost a life and he was this ( ) close to losing another life...and to an apprentice! But noooOOooo. They gotta be all 'NEVER GIVE UP! NEVER SURRENDER!' Why can't they be normal and catch a clue brick?

~Snowpelt~
I laughed when I saw Cleo going kamikaze and thought she was really cute with her fur fluffed up. I started to panic when Heavyclaw had pinned me and was about to kill me. I yowled for help and then saw Ravenstar coming. I felt fireworks like the first time when he touched me. I felt like I was going to wake up from this "nightmare" and have it be before the flood, before the fight, before the disappearances. Then I noticed Bluepaw, Larchpaw, and Redpaw all fighting. They had come back to help. I smiled and thanked Ravenstar for saving me.
"Now I really owe you. How am I ever gonna repay you?" I said.

[P r o m i s e r]

"By never forgetting I still love you." Ravenstar replied, nuzzling her gently before whirling around to fight with Cougartail. The two of them battled until the fight was over. Ravenstar yowled a victory along side Cougartail. These two cats were like two peas in a pod. Ravenstar padded over to Blackpaw and touched his nose to Blackpaw's. "You fought like a Warrior." He murmured before returning back to Snowpelt. "You know. You were a good love life." Ravenstar flirted a bit, his depth-less blue eyes looking like drowning pools.

[Dark**Light]

~Cleo~
Bluepaw, Larchpaw, and Redpaw all dropped our jaws.
"Okay...fine. We pretty much saved the clan and all...but no. It's cool. We do that on a regular basis. It's cool. Just walk right by us! WELL BYE!" I meowed. I was just joking and hoped they saw that. The three of us walked back to our tiny camp and sat down and talked about our fight. Everyone especially loved how I almost took Lionstar's 5th life. Apparently that was the highlight of the entire fight for Bluepaw, Redpaw, and Larchpaw.

~Snowpelt~
"That's one way. But isn't there some manual labor or something that I can do?" I joked. I nuzzled him and then watched as Cleo was still in fighting mode and joked around with Ravenstar.
"I think you owe thanks to Bluepaw, Larchpaw, Redpaw, and especially Treepaw. they fought well. And Treepaw was right by your side." I said.

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"You could do some hunting." Ravenstar suggested, giving a slight purr. Ravenstar nodded. "I do owe them a thanks." Ravenstar replies, padding over to them. "Guys. I owe you all a thank you. Thank you all for being there to fight. Especially you, Treepaw. What you id was beyond what I expected of a newly made Apprentice." Ravenstar meowed, touching his nose to each of their ears. "You guys earned yourself the first pick off of the Fresh kill pile." Ravenstar added, turning away and looking back at them with a smile before padding back to see Cougartail and Snowpelt together. "Look Snowpelt. I should apologize for being such a mouse-brain that one day. I was only standing up for Ravenstar. I am his best friend after all." Cougartail meowed.

[Dark**Light]

~Cleo~
I looked at all my siblings then back to Ravenstar.
"I only did what I thought was necessary to help the clan. We all did. The clan needed us so we fought." I said. Bluepaw nodded and followed after me and Larchpaw and Redpaw followed us, too. We padded into the warrior den and said hello to Sorrelfur. She freaked. She was so glad we were back.

~Snowpelt~
I laughed at Ravenstar's comment and then walked up to him.
"There's something special in Cleo. I can feel it. I think tonight she'll be the talk of the clan. She already is. Did you see the way that a few of the warriors looked at her? Like they admired her. I know I do. If I were a cat from her background I would have barely even poked my nose into the fight. Let alone go barging in with two other cats following you and then end up fighting right beside the clan leader. She's a special cat. Hold on to her. She could do great things for the clan. I know Riverpelt and Sorrelfur will be proud of them." I said. I nuzzled Ravenstar and then continued. "I think you should make an announcement about Bluepaw, Larchpaw, and Redpaw coming back, and the success at the battle today. Just for those who weren't there, like the queens or a few apprentices and warriors. And don't forget the elders." I said. I laughed as I thought about one of the older elders. The snappy one. I don't remember her name but she was a grumpy one.

[P r o m i s e r]

At the camp, Ravenstar leaped up onto High Rock. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather around High Rock!" He yowled before cats started to swarm the area. Cougartail was sitting closest. "Four Apprentices fought like mighty Warriors. Those Apprentices are Treepaw, Bluepaw, Larchpaw and Redpaw. They have returned to RainClan and fought through the battle. ESPECIALLY Treepaw. She took away two of Sunstar's lives, and went after Heavyclaw. That was beyond what I expected. I welcome them back to RainClan, and thank them all for doing such a big part in the battle." Ravenstar meowed to the Clan.

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Leafstorm sighed, sitting next to Bramblefur. Her wounds stung from the battle.

[Dark**Light]

~Cleo~
I looked straight at Ravenstar during the announcement but I felt that all eyes were on me. I padded into the apprentice den and curled up in my nest. I was tired and my muscles ached from all the fighting I had done earlier.

(sss. In a rush. g2g)

[P r o m i s e r]

Ravenstar jumped off of the High Rock and padded up to Snowpelt. He touched his nose to cheek, and let out a warm purr. Ravenstar's dark aqua eyes searched her icy blue for a few heartbeats before his attention turned to Cougartail. "Hey Cougartail. Do you mind doing some hunting with Blackpaw?" He asked. "Yeah sure!" Cougartail replied, bounding off with his Apprentice.

[Dark**Light]

~Cleo~
I looked up to Riverpelt and Ravenstar. I wanted to be like them someday… Maybe even become Deputy. Then I started to think…which in my case, is never a good thing. The first thing I thought about was Who was leader before Ravenstar? Then it got worse… ‘Why is Riverpelt Deputy if Cougartail is Ravenstar’s best friend?’ The worst part of it was I actually went up to Ravenstar and asked him that last question.
“Ravenstar, why is Riverpelt Deputy if Cougartail was, and still is, your best friend?” I asked.

(Just trying to find a backstory of how Riverpelt became Deputy…something more interesting….you can make it up cuz I’m lazy…and stuff. I don’t care what it is.)

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Ravenstar gazed down at Cleo and smiled. "Ah, that i a story I will never forget." Ravenstar replied, making himself comfortable. "You see, Cougartail was born in WindClan. And the day I became Leader was when Riverpelt saved Blackfur as an Apprentice from the river. If Cougartail was in RainClan at the time, I would have chose Cougartail." Ravenstar told the young Apprentice, his mind drowning with the past. "I was made Deputy by the former Leader Crowstar, because I saved him when he was on his last life. My Warrior name was Ravenclaw." Ravenstar added, leaping up onto High Rock once again. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather around High Rock!" Ravenstar meowed. When cats had surrounded the High Rock, he began to speak. "We have seven new Apprentices in need of Mentors. I have thought hard, and decided the Mentors." Ravenstar meowed, gazing around. "Bluepaw's mentor will be Riverpelt. Larchpaw's mentor will be Sorreltail. Moonpaw's mentor will be Oaktail. Redpaw's mentor will be Snowpelt. Silverpaw's mentor will be Fireclaw. Sunpaw's mentor will be Cougartail... And Treepaw will be my Apprentice." Ravenstar meowed out.

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(Sorry about that. My sister keeps forgetting to log out of her account.)

[Dark**Light]

~Cleo~
I looked up on high rock, not knowing that the announcement Ravenstar was about to make would change my life…
I was now Ravenstar’s apprentice. That was a high honor. My jaw dropped and I walked up to Ravenstar after the ceremonies.
“Wow…why did you put me as your apprentice?” I asked. I looked around and Bluepaw was excited to be Riverpelt’s apprentice, Larchpaw was also excited…I don’t blame him. Moonpaw was definitely excited to be becoming a medicine cat. And she would be training with our aunt. Redpaw looked up to Snowpelt, so she was happy to be her apprentice. And Sunpaw…she walked up to Cougartail, holding in his excitement… Then I looked back to Ravenstar.
“I didn’t expect you to pick me as your apprentice…I mean…I’m a kitty pet. I have no clan blood. So why me?” I asked.

~Sunpaw~
I calmly walked over to Cougartail, containing my excitement.
“Wow…so you’re my mentor!” I burst out with excitement. I flipped head over paws and then laughed. Then I looked over at Treepaw. She seemed to be containing her excitement the best. She looked so serious compared to everyone else. I was a close second…until I did a flip...

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(Did Sunpaw fall in love with Cougartail or something? XD)

Ravenstar gazed down at his new Apprentice and licked her ear. "I see something special in you, Treepaw. The way you fought at the battle made me feel like you'd be one of the best Apprentices RainClan would ever see." Ravenstar replied with a smile. He flicked his ears at her next comment. "Its the heart that makes a Warrior. It took me time to think over my decision, but I'm sure I made a good one. You will grow up to become a great Warrior." Ravenstar told Cleo, his aqua blue eyes showing kindness and pride. There was something Ravenstar saw inside of Treepaw, and new it was good news. But he just didn't know exactly what it was.

Cougartail smiled at his new Apprentice. "Yes I am, Sunpaw." He replied, touching his nose to hers. "Treepaw looks so serious about being the Leader's Apprentice. That is something she should be proud of." Cougartail sighed, his silver eyes gazing down at Sunpaw.

[Dark**Light]

(nah. she is just excited to have somebody close to Ravenstar as her mentor.)

~Cleo~
I was surprised at Ravenstar’s words. During the battle I only did what my gut instinct was telling me to do. It was all reflex. Then I looked back at Ravenstar.
“So when do we start training?” I asked, letting a slight smile slip out.

~Sunpaw~
I stared at Treepaw and then noticed a smile come across her face.
“She just smiled. That’s a good sign.” I said.

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"Well, before we start training, I'd like to tell you about StarClan. You may have heard a little something about it." Ravenstar replied, laying down with Cleo under the stars. "My father is up there. His name was Leopardstar. Leader of RiverClan." Ravenstar explained, remembering the massive tabby with blue eyes. "So is my mother. Her name was Nightfur." Ravenstar added. "You see, Cleo. All of our great Warrior ancestors are up there. Even the great Firestar. And they all watch over us in even the toughest times."

[Dark**Light]

~Cleo~
“Wow.” I said listening to the stories. When Ravenstar mentioned Firestar I was interested. I had often heard my mother talking about him. Apparently he was my mother’s great uncle. So I had heard some stories about him.
“Who was Firestar?” I asked.

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"Firestar was the great ThunderClan Leader. He always followed his heart, not the code. Even as an Apprentice." Ravenstar replied, his dark blue eyes gazing up at the stars. Ravenstar glanced at Mountainclaw. "Could you go get Snowpelt. I'd like to spend some time with her to." Ravenstar meowed. He nodded and padded into the warriors den. "Snowpelt. Ravenstar wants you to stargaze with him and Cleo." Mountainclaw meowed, laying down in his nest. Cougartail was on one side of Ravenstar, while Cleo was basically in Ravenstar's arms in front of his chest he was that big. So there was a spot for Snowpelt on the other side of Ravenstar.

(I never was a huge fan of Firestar, although he's kinda cool. My 2 favorite evil cats are Tigerstar and Scourge, while my two favorite good cats are Whitestorm and Graystripe. )

[Dark**Light]

(My two favorite evil cats were Tigerstar and Darkstripe. My two favorite good cats are Bluestar and Mistyfoot)
~Cleo~
I listened to what Ravenstar said. Then I said,
“He was a kittypet, wasn’t he. My mom talked a lot about him. He was my mother’s great uncle. My kitty pet mother, that is. Not to be confused with Sorreltail. So I have his blood in me. And when I was fighting at the battle I followed what my heart was telling me.” I said. Then Snowpelt came over. She congratulated me on the news and then sat down beside Ravenstar. Then Sunpaw raced over and skidded to a halt and looked up at Cougartail.
“Hiya Cougartail.” Sunpaw mewed before running back to the apprentice den and going to sleep.
“Did she have catnip or something?” I asked, jokingly.

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