Re: Warrior Cats Rainclan. (Re-opened)

by Cheradongirl95 Sat Dec 15, 2012 7:42 pm

-Wintersong-wails and leaps down into the yard.cleans his fur with fretful licks."Please no!!"Looks like a lost kit,starved and helpless without its family.Crouches staring at him blankly

by P r o m i s e r Sat Dec 15, 2012 7:47 pm

I knew she needed comfort, so I rested my muzzle on her forehead. "I'm so sorry..." I whispered t her, as a tear fell down my cheek and landed right on her paw. I never cried. Never in my life had I cried. "WinterSong. I will help you take care of your kits... I promise." I meowed to her, another tear trickling down my cheek.
"FoxFur was a good Warrior. He will be welcomed to StarClan." I meowed.

by P r o m i s e r Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:35 am

(Eh, Bump?)

by Cheradongirl95 Sun Dec 16, 2012 2:26 pm

WinterSong-draws back quickly "Thank ypou RavenStar."Her voice was cold with sorrow.She padded away and slipped over the fence.A fews seconds later,two toms appeared out of the bushes in front of her. "Boo hoo.Poor little Fox-whatever died!" the tom spat at her and circled her."Yeah,its not like he did anything for you."He follows the other tom and they herd her with hisses and lashes of claws towards a twoleg barn.Mice squeaked inside,as they proceeded to shove her in there,and close all means of escape with boulders that only 2 cats could manage to move,and even then they would be exhausted.

by ZeldaWolfy Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:38 am

After thinking through her challenged mind,she just raged and leaped off the tree,her fur was puffed up to make her look tall,her head low as she padded through bushes and clawed at the ones that were hard to get by. Her scent was ShadowClan,going into their territory once again. She couldn't choose,she was there was a between,so two worlds could be one. Her head lifted up,ears pricked back as she heard two cats hissing. She drew her lips back,catching they're scents. She was angry,and why not take it out on some rascals? Besides,they smell mischevious. She padded away toward the noise,quickly crouching down as she saw the toms laying outside the rock,exhausted. For toms,they were quite small to her,her head tilted. "Meh,there not from my clan.." she mumbled. "Thats a good thing though." she smirked,her haunches lifting up as she was prepared to lunge at them if they escaped by any chance.

(Sorry if I might've barged in. Let me know if you were planning on something so I can just delete this.)

by P r o m i s e r Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:12 am

Following the cats, I noticed a small hole in the roof and jumped up. Slipping through the hole, landed on my paws inbetween WinterSong and the 2 toms. "Anybody lay a cla on her, and I'll rip you BOTH to shreads." I hissed,my blue eyes shone like fire and my claws nsheathed.
Lashing out at one tom, I clawed him to the ground then bit the others flank with ease, considering I was bigger and stronger. "Now... Does either of you she-cats want to fight now?" I snarled sarcasticly. "Cmon WinterSong. Slip through that hole in the roof." I meowed before helping her through it, then clawing both of the cats in the face before jumping up after her. "Don't mess with RainClan you flea bitten mangy cats!" I spat before looking at /winter/song.
"You OK, WinterSong?" I askd her, my black pelt still bristled.

by Dark**Light Mon Dec 17, 2012 3:28 pm

~Snowpelt~
I padded out of the camp after grabbing a vole. I then found a river. I swam across and then walked a bit farther into the other side of the river. Then I came upon a Twoleg nest.
"There aren't supposed to be twolegs here." I spat. Then a wail for help startled me.
"I'm coming!!" I roared. I dashed through the forest, still carrying the vole. Then I saw a small black kitten surrounded by two very large cats.
"HELP!" The small kitten yowled. I dropped the vole and sprang onto the back of one of the toms. The other tom leaped toward me. I leaped off the other tom's back and watched as the two clumsily bumped into each other. The kitten smiled and laughed a bit.Then the toms snarled and looked at the kitten.
"Hey dumb and dumber...." I growled, "Why don't you pick on someone your own size." I continued.
"Very well..." A tom said.
"Consider yourself lucky..." The second tom said to the kitten. Then both cats walked toward me.
"Ah-ah-ah...I'm smaller than you....you can't pick on me. I hear there is a very large cat...about the same size as you...somewhere over that-a-way." I said, waving my tail toward the clan camp, "His name is Ravenstar. He's the biggest cat in the place. So don't mess with any other cats. You'll have fun with Ravenstar." I said in a mocking tone. The kitten smiled. I went to pick up the vole and then took it back to the kitten.
"Here...eat this." I mewed.
"I can't...I still drink milk..." The kitten said.
"Well...okay. Where is your mother?" I asked.
"Up there..." The kitten mewed, looking up to the sky.
"She's with Starclan? How did that happen?" I asked.
"Those two meanies hurt her real bad. She has gone to sleep and isn't waking up...or moving. She is sharing the anger and not feeding us either." The kitten mewed, helplessly. She hadn't realized that her mother was dead...poor thing. Maybe I could take her back to the clan and have Sorrelfur nurse her. She's a little older than her kits...but she might be willing to feed her. I looked back toward the camp and then said
"What is your name?"
"Cleo..." she mewed. Her green eyes glowed brightly and looked helpless...and empty of love. I picked her up by the scruff of her neck and walked back to the camp. I leaped across the smaller part of the creek and then walked into the camp entrance. I saw Sorrelfur and dropped the kitten off. I told Sorrelfur everything about the poor little kitten. Ravenstar was still out with Wintersong. I knew it because his last scent here was stale. Then the two toms walked into the camp.
"Riverpelt, get all the queens into the den and make room in the middle for a fight. The apprentices may circle around for a little lesson today...and the warriors may narrate what I am doing to their apprentices. This is live warrior fighting." I spat. Riverpelt nodded and shuffled all the queens and their kits into the den. Then Oaktail came out with healing herbs. Prepared to help me if I got hurt. The warriors and apprentices circled around the camp center and made way for the two toms coming into the center. I sat in the circle, blending in.
"So this is Rainclan...so sorry...it's nothing compared to Shadowclan."the tom spat.
"Yep. You got that right Darkstorm." the other tom spat.
"Oh great...I wonder where Ravenstar is...probably hiding...trying to blend in. What do you think, Shadowtail. Think anyone will offer to sacrifice their life for Ravenstar's?" Darkstorm hissed. There was a short silence. I shoved Spottedpaw out of the way, gently, and hissed at the two Shadowclan warriors.
"Oh dear...back for more? You couldn't bear the fact that I kicked your sorry tails, could ya?" I spat. There was a silence from the toms.
"Thought not..." I hissed, "Ravenstar...if you're in the audience...stay out of this. I can take care of myself. I am strong enough to live without you..." I hissed to the audience. Then I shot my head back to the toms.
"Oh dear...it's that dainty little kittypet we saw in the woods sticking up for that kitten." Shadowtail growled.
"Alright...let's cut to the chase...am I gonna get a chance to kick your tails outta here or not?" I spat.
"Oh... feisty. Dibs." Darkstorm growled.
"Oh you wanna see the real me?" I hissed.
"What? A dainty little kittypet that sleeps on cushions because she's too afraid of the dirt?" Shadowtail said. Darkstorm lunged toward me. I rolled out of the way and scraped my claw down his side as he fell to the ground.
"Nope. Guess again. Strike one." I said. Shadowtail ran toward me and I leaped into the air. I landed on his back and I scraped my claws down his back.
"A stupid apprentice." Darkstorm growled before I landed on Shadowtail.
"Nope. Guess again. Strike one for you Darkstorm." I hissed. Darkstorm shook his head and leaped toward my from behind. I heard his clumsy paws pounding against the ground and I turned around and fell back onto my back. Darkstorm leaped toward me and I kicked my paws against against his stomach. He was thrown through the air and landed clumsily in a heap on the ground.
"A sucky warrior." Shadowtail growled.
"Nope...Guess again. Strike two...watch out Shadowtail." I joked. Shadowtail tried for up close combat. He tried to pin me but I reached right under him and pulled on his front paws. He lost balance and fell on the ground. He stood up and looked around for me.
"An idiotic Deputy." Shadowtail snarled.
"I'm charmed that you think I could make it as Deputy...but nope. Strike three." I hissed...I quickly turned around and pinned Shadowtail to the ground. I administered a killing bite. Shadowtail had a quick and painless death, "You're...out." I snarled.
"That's it! You are a dead cat!" Darkstorm yowled. He was very angry now. He charged toward me and I tripped him. He fell and skidded to halt in front of my apprentice, Graypaw. He hissed and then padded slowly toward me.
"Sorry...but you're wrong...again. Strike two..." I mewed, calmly.
"Oh dear...we have an incompetent cat here..." Darkstorm growled. He took one final lunge toward me. I easily dodged it and then said
"Oh dear...how did you two ever become warriors...tisk tisk. I may need to file a compliant to your previous mentors...or maybe the clan leader." I smiled and then, in a swift movement, pinned poor little Darkstorm down.
"I wouldn't say I'm incompetent...because that's strike three..." I hissed. I was about to give him the final blow when Firepaw mewed,
"You should tell him what you really are. Then he could share it with his friend when they meet in the Dark forest..."
"Or Starclan..." I mewed.
"I thought only good cats went to Starclan." Firepaw mewed.
"These two warriors are good cats...they just made bad decisions...very bad decisions." I mewed.
"Tell him what you really are, Snowpelt." Graypaw said.
"Alright...alright." I sighed. Then I laughed in Darkstorm's face, "I am a strong warrior that, obviously, shows no mercy..." I hissed.
"She's also a very good friend." Riverpelt chimed in.
"And mentor." Graypaw added.
"And god-mother..." Sorrelfur meowed from the nursery. I smiled. Then my gaze hardened. I killed Darkstorm, disposing of any evidence that they had attacked us...and any chances of him limping back to Shadowclan and organizing an attack patrol. Then I made it look like the had been caught in barbed wire and we tried to rescue them. The same with Shadowtail. Riverpelt took the two bodies and came back later with thanks from the Shadowclan leader. I laughed and then sat in the middle of the camp where my mocking scene unfolded.

(I was thinking that maybe Ravenstar comes back to see the fight unfold and then when Snowpelt is alone he says like "You're also a very good love life. I would like it if you stuck around as my mate" Or something romantic like and stuff like that. but idk...your choice.)

by P r o m i s e r Mon Dec 17, 2012 4:41 pm

I watched the fight unfold, and my ears flattened. But brave as I was, I stepped out into the middle of the camp and hissed at the two toms. "I am not a coward! If I were you two, I'd get off of my territory now." I snarled angrily, lashing out my claws with rage.
"Anyobody that is in ShadowClan get off of my territory. I won't tolerate any cat from ShadowClan here without a good reason." I meowed more calmly now, before seeing a gray figure leap down on me. My old enemy, GorseClaw. Clawing him, I kicked up at his belly and hissed. GorseClaw bit my paw, and using a trick only I knew of, I unsheathed my claws in his mouth and clawed his tongue.
GorseClaw leaped out of camp, knowing I could rip him to shreads. "Anymore of you ladies wanna dance?" I asked sarcastically glancing at ShadowClan. "I wont back out of any fight, or any challenge you throw at me. And I have something to say to all of you, before the fight starts." I meowed.
"I have been a bad leader to SnowPelt lately. And that being so, I want to apologize to not only her. But to RiverPelt and the rest I have mentally hurt. I am sorry to all." I meowed softly.

by Lavender Mon Dec 17, 2012 4:46 pm

(Okay I really wasn't too sure, how to sorta jump in but I guess i'll just give it my best go!)

Briarkit yawned as the light seeped into the nursery, she felt the rasp of her mothers tongue on her brown, soft, downy pelt. She could feel the rhythmic breathing of another kit beside her. She opened her eyes as she stood up, and opened her eyes, giving her lithe body a stretch. Her mother chuckled watching her, "Darling, you're getting too big for the nursery, I wonder when Ravenstar will appoint you a mentor". Briarkit's bright green eyes lit up in excitement, "Who do you think it'll be!" She squealed jumping up and down, her tail lashing through the air unable to contain herself. Her mom chuckled, "Go play outside Briarkit before you disturb any of the younger kits"

Briarkit nodded her head before bounding out of the den, running into Snowpelt on her way out, who was carrying a small kit. She forgot about what her mother told her in a mere second before running back, "Who's that? She doesn't smell like Rainclan! Whats she doing here?" She said, going on with the questions. Her mother, Softfur, gave her a stern look. "Aren't you going to be a handful..." she meowed, but she looked at her Snowpelt with a curious gaze, awaiting her answer.

Briarkit stopped asking questions, the moment she heard loud caterwauling outside of cats. She poked her head through the nursery, before seeing the Shadowclan cats. "Mother look! We're being invaded! We must go out and fight!" She said ready to bound out, but Softfur grabbed her scruff and pulled her back into the nursery before nipping her softly on the ear, "You aren't an apprentice yet, you'll be doing no such thing" she meowed sternly, but her eyes traveled to the clearing of the camp, as she watched Snowpelt leave to fight the trespassing cats.

by P r o m i s e r Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:02 pm

(I'm gonna pretend that my last post didn't happen. xD)

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather around High Rock!" I meowed before watching BriarKit, and other cats gather around. "It is time we have BriarKit her Apprentice name, and mentor. She will be named BriarPaw, and I will mentor her." I meowed to the camp, and leaped down to touch noses with BriarPaw.
"We will start training tomorrow." I whispered softly, with a smile as my large muscles rippled under my huge figure.

by Lavender Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:09 pm

(Aha Alrighty!)

Softfur shook her head, watching the cats go back to their daily business as the fight finished. She listened to the cats call the meeting, and smiled down at Briarkit, "Well you're going to be an apprentice soon, so you might as well come" she said scuffing her around the ears playfully. They went and sat down, nearer the edge of the gathering of cats. When Ravenstar started to say the words to the apprenticeship ceremony she looked over at Briarkit with a look of pride, then horror when she saw all the burrs and mess of Briarkit's coat "Look at you! You're a mess at your ceremony" She meowed quietly before running her tongue roughly over her pelt.

"Mom!!" Briarkit shouted before pawing at her muzzle, she stood up and raised her chin in the air, her paws shaking with excitement. Who would be her mentor? She listened as Ravenstar said her name, then appointed himself as her mentor. She panicked slightly, the clan leader was going to be her mentor!! She started to feel unsure of herself, before being prodded forward by her mother. She bounded up towards Ravenstar and touched noses with him. " I can't wait!" she squeaked, and she looked slightly embarrassed at her squeak and cleared her throat, and tried to stop shaking. She was going to be the best apprentice Rainclan would see!

by P r o m i s e r Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:19 pm

"I cant wait either, BriarPaw." I meowed before padding into my den. The next morning, I took BriarPaw out to hunt. "Alright... The trick is to keep all of your weight in your haunches." I explained to her, before smelling the air for anything. We were near WindClan territory, and fresh prey. "Now, what do you smell?" I asked BriarPaw.

by ZeldaWolfy Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:50 pm

BrokenClaw listened to everything,being a more of an observer. She got her life back on track,sticking with RainClan as she made that her life. She heard that RavenStar got an apprentice. She knew the little kit should be very happy,maybe even jumping in joy! She sighed as she left the circle,doing her routine. Border patrol,hunt for the elders,and maybe watch over the clans kits for a bit. She padded along the borders,her nose high in the air as she smells scents. "RavenStar is down there.. I'll go the other way so I don't interrupt." She said,her personality somewhat nice. She instead if walking away,sat down and rubbed against a tree,itchy.

by P r o m i s e r Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:05 pm

I noticed BrokenClaw, and brought BriarPaw towards her. "Morning BrokenClaw. This is my Apprentice BriarPaw." I meowed lightly, my tail twitching.

by ZeldaWolfy Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:11 pm

She looked at RavenStar. Her stature was taller over time,and her body was more muscular,and her eyes were sharp. "Hello." She said to RavenStar,looking now at the apprentice. "Hi." She tries to smile but,fails as she only smirks.

by P r o m i s e r Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:30 pm

(Um, BrokenClaw isn't bigger or stronger than Ravenstar. :/)

"BriarPaw, this is BrokenClaw. A close friend of mine." I meowed to the Apprentice, then pressed my nose to BrokenClaw's flank in a greeting.

by ZeldaWolfy Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:49 pm

(Sorry! I was getting confused with another rp! x.x)

BrokenClaw touched his flank back with her wet nose,purring as she sat down and awaited a reply from the young apprentice. "Quite small for an apprentice. To me at least." She sort of picked on BriarPaw.

by P r o m i s e r Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:55 pm

Giving BrokenClaw a warning glance, I looked down at BriarPaw. "Its alright, BriarPaw. She's just joking." I mewed lightly to the newly made Apprentice, and smiled. "BrokenClaw, I have been wanting to talk to you. W-Why have you been.... Well, declining my affection?" I asked, hoping to StarClan I said the right thing.

by ZeldaWolfy Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:26 pm

She lifts her head,a sly grin. "Or am I?" She liked to tease. She looked at RavenStar,hearing his words as she sighed. "It's not you,don't think that. I'm just trying to find the right time to say yes.. I wouldn't be asking this in front the kit." She narrowed her eyes.

by P r o m i s e r Tue Dec 18, 2012 7:32 pm

"Come on BriarPaw. I want you to meet WinterSong." I meowed and lead her to the Nursery. "Hey, WinterSong. This is my new Apprentice, BriarPaw." I greeted, and pressed my nose to WinterSong's. "How is everything going? Is there anything you need?" I asked, wanting to help her out.

by Cheradongirl95 Tue Dec 18, 2012 7:36 pm

-WinterSong-"Thanks,RavenStar.I could use a vole,and maybe a drink."Forces a grateful smile.Pads sadly into the nursery,just wanting to be alone.How could this happen to me?Starclan you have tooken my life from me!!She flopped down.Im sick of this life!She wanted to screech,she trys to make a sound,but nothing happens.Let me start this over again!Let me hold on to the time when nothing mattered!But she couldnt erase the things she'd done.

by P r o m i s e r Tue Dec 18, 2012 8:03 pm

I nodded and quickly got a vole, and a leaf with water on it and brought it to WinterSong. I could tell she was upset, and I nuzzled her lightly. "Hey, its OK. Its going to be OK." I whispered, leaning my body on hers and grooming her pelt. "I'll help you with the kits, that's a promise. I swear on the name of StarClan I will never let anything happen to them." I assured her.
"I gor your vole and water." I added, pushing it towards her with a forepaw.

by Dark**Light Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:15 pm

~Riverpelt~
I padded out of the camp and led a small hunting patrol of Snowpelt and Graypaw. I would have taken my own apprentice...but I didn't have one. After we hunted, Snowpelt broke off at the training hollow to train Graypaw. I padded up to Ravenstar and said
"When my kits are grown, may I have one of them as my apprentice? And by then, Snowpelt should be ready for a new apprentice. And Sorrelfur might want an apprentice. May I pick the kit I would like to apprentice? I will take two. I'm their father and I will willingly take two. And Brokenclaw may have an apprentice too. And the last one may go to Firepaw or Graypaw if they have proven themselves by then." Then I padded into the nursery and told Sorrelfur what I had asked of Ravenstar. Sorrelfur said that would be great. She let me take my pick. There were:
Sunkit
Redkit
Larchkit
Silverkit
Moonkit
and
Bluekit.
But there were seven kits...I only remembered Sorrelfur giving birth to 6. The small black kitten was the runt of the littler...but it was shoving it's way past all the other kits to get to the milk. I saw something in this kit.
"Who is this little kit?" I asked as I rubbed my fur against her. I saw potential. I wanted her as my apprentice.
"She's Cleo." Sorrelfur said. "You can take her as an apprentice if you'd like her." Sorrelfur continued. I smiled and requested Cleo and Bluekit for my apprentices to Ravenstar.

by Cheradongirl95 Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:27 pm

WinterSong-"Thanks."Mews flatly.It was great and all,but did she Really need help?Yes you do!Your a single she,that may give birth to as many kits as SorrelFur!The thought of it left a bitter taste in her mouth.PetalFur would know what to do!!Unlss the whole of Starclan has left..

by P r o m i s e r Wed Dec 19, 2012 4:52 pm

"Your welcome WinterSong. I'd do anything to help." I meowed then looked at RiverPelt. "Of course they can mentor, and you as well. Congratulations on your kits RiverPelt." I meowed cheerfully, then padded to the Nursery to see the new kits. "Hello, SorrelFur. How are you and the kits?" I asked, before nosing her muzzle lightly in a greeting.
"I have agreed to having your kits mentored. I wish your kits to grow healthy and strong." I told her, and looked over at SnowPelt. "You are welcome to mentor one of them to, if you like. These kits will grow to be fine Warriors." I said, looking down at them. "I believe Cleo shall have her Clan name. From this day forth until she has earned her Warrior name, she will be known as TreeKit." I meowed, holding my head high.

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