Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
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Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
by Spritz Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:04 pm
Sooo this is an idea i had awhile ago. Seems like its gotten popular around here, so i decided to post it. Here's the intro/backround.
-The Devil’s own kin-
Long ago, before humans walked the earth, a huge herd of horses, powerful magnificent equines, ruled over all creatures- the kings and queens of life itself. Every slithering, creeping beast looked up to these horses, these powerful animals that demanded respect and obedience with a mere glance, a swish of the tail, the flickering of an ear. It was for these horses that there was order, peacemakers as they were. Everything started when four of them, two mares and two stallions came into existence. Each was granted with a power- one that could be used to either help or hinder. As a group, these four conversed, appointing themselves the guardians of the land that was bestowed to them; and they did their duty with no complaints. Night after night the four stood, mighty and noble; standing guard and protecting the valley’s occupants. Through powerful gales and vicious storms; four hundred years they brought peace to this place, the number of these powerful guardians growing with each year that passed.
Then, everything crashed to pieces. The humans came. By themselves, they proved no threat to the mythical horses, who had intended to welcome them to their home with respect. But they came with spears and bows, armed with weapons only the devil could imagine. They were on a hunt; and these horses, they were the prey. The numbers of these humans were far too great, they surpassed any danger that the guardian’s had ever thought of before. Peaceful as they were, they tried to avoid fighting and killing anything or anybody without reason. But it was too much. A bloody war against the humans and the equines broke out, and the creatures were outnumbered greatly.
They were captured, and though they fought as a group, a family, it made no difference. Subject to cruel and horrible torture, they soon died off from the hands of the humans. A few of the more mellow steeds were used as war mounts, treated as the stupid, dumb animal’s that the humans rode, forced to wear a painful metal bit and carry them on their broad backs. The stallions were to breed with domestic mares, but each one that became pregnant died without cause- even before the foal had time to develop. Centuries later, these horses are nearly extinct. Over the years, they had altered themselves, power turning into hate- hate for the humans who had tortured their kind. Never again would they be the same, and though they were thought to be gone forever, a handful of these now demonic creatures were still alive and thriving, their numbers growing rapidly. All they could think of was revenge- they were driven by it, nearly growing mad in the process.
They team with life, lurking in the deepest, darkest of forests and waiting until the day they would be impenetrable, so strong that even the humans with all of their weapons cannot hold them back. Both their minds and bodies have been effected by this terrible rage and anger, and now there is no trace of the noble, peace loving breed they once were. Never again would they become whole.
It is these horses we speak of now, these twisted, now demonic beings that roam the earth for one purpose.
Info:
These creatures call themselves the Sephra's. Since their downfall, they have forgotten what they once were, giving into dark powers and anger. These creatures are trained to hunt and kill. Of course, they haven't always been like that, but now this race is totally different than what it once was. These Sephra's have learned to adapt to their surroundings, able to go for weeks without eating and staying perfectly healthy. They have no need to feed on grass and greenery, finding blood much more desirable. Many deer and other animals fall prey to these mighty hunters, and it might take two or three to satisfy the apatite of one of the larger studs. Mares come into heat just as often as normal equines do, this is the only time they are capable of producing offspring. They live very long, easily reaching a hundred years and still feeling young. There is not one Sephra however that has lived its full life, dying by old age, so it is unknown how long these animals can really live.
Appearance:
They stand higher than the average horse, the smallest of the adults reaching 17 hands at his withers. Some have long, lion-like tails, others appear to look like normal equines except size and weight- along with a slightly feral look to them that they carry alone. They do not always look alike however, and a few of them are granted with huge wings, some with curved horns growing out of their forehead. Colors do vary. Some are darkly colored, others have lighter shades; either way, each one of these equines are killers, and all have long, sharp fangs that they use to feed on animals. Stallions are a few hands taller than mares are, and they are overall more heavily muscled and their body structure is bigger. The mares have the advantage of silence however, they can move swiftly through the forest without much detection at all.
Personality:
Sephra's can be very stubborn, and they each have an individual sense of authority. This sometimes leads to rather brutal disputes when it comes to leader positions, but the fights always help to even things out in the small herd. The stallions are very dominant, they can get aggressive and protective easily, and it is never uncommon for fights to break out over the right to a mare. The mares are a bit more mellow, but they can kill with a swift snap of their powerful jaws and would easily feast upon the flesh of any given animal; anything but another Sephra. Filly's are bred as soon as they are old enough, to continue to keep the Sephra's black blood flowing into a new, stronger, more powerful generation. Colts are introduced to mares early on.
Lemme know if you decide to want to make an RP with me on this idea. (: Please dont steal it.
-The Devil’s own kin-
Long ago, before humans walked the earth, a huge herd of horses, powerful magnificent equines, ruled over all creatures- the kings and queens of life itself. Every slithering, creeping beast looked up to these horses, these powerful animals that demanded respect and obedience with a mere glance, a swish of the tail, the flickering of an ear. It was for these horses that there was order, peacemakers as they were. Everything started when four of them, two mares and two stallions came into existence. Each was granted with a power- one that could be used to either help or hinder. As a group, these four conversed, appointing themselves the guardians of the land that was bestowed to them; and they did their duty with no complaints. Night after night the four stood, mighty and noble; standing guard and protecting the valley’s occupants. Through powerful gales and vicious storms; four hundred years they brought peace to this place, the number of these powerful guardians growing with each year that passed.
Then, everything crashed to pieces. The humans came. By themselves, they proved no threat to the mythical horses, who had intended to welcome them to their home with respect. But they came with spears and bows, armed with weapons only the devil could imagine. They were on a hunt; and these horses, they were the prey. The numbers of these humans were far too great, they surpassed any danger that the guardian’s had ever thought of before. Peaceful as they were, they tried to avoid fighting and killing anything or anybody without reason. But it was too much. A bloody war against the humans and the equines broke out, and the creatures were outnumbered greatly.
They were captured, and though they fought as a group, a family, it made no difference. Subject to cruel and horrible torture, they soon died off from the hands of the humans. A few of the more mellow steeds were used as war mounts, treated as the stupid, dumb animal’s that the humans rode, forced to wear a painful metal bit and carry them on their broad backs. The stallions were to breed with domestic mares, but each one that became pregnant died without cause- even before the foal had time to develop. Centuries later, these horses are nearly extinct. Over the years, they had altered themselves, power turning into hate- hate for the humans who had tortured their kind. Never again would they be the same, and though they were thought to be gone forever, a handful of these now demonic creatures were still alive and thriving, their numbers growing rapidly. All they could think of was revenge- they were driven by it, nearly growing mad in the process.
They team with life, lurking in the deepest, darkest of forests and waiting until the day they would be impenetrable, so strong that even the humans with all of their weapons cannot hold them back. Both their minds and bodies have been effected by this terrible rage and anger, and now there is no trace of the noble, peace loving breed they once were. Never again would they become whole.
It is these horses we speak of now, these twisted, now demonic beings that roam the earth for one purpose.
Info:
These creatures call themselves the Sephra's. Since their downfall, they have forgotten what they once were, giving into dark powers and anger. These creatures are trained to hunt and kill. Of course, they haven't always been like that, but now this race is totally different than what it once was. These Sephra's have learned to adapt to their surroundings, able to go for weeks without eating and staying perfectly healthy. They have no need to feed on grass and greenery, finding blood much more desirable. Many deer and other animals fall prey to these mighty hunters, and it might take two or three to satisfy the apatite of one of the larger studs. Mares come into heat just as often as normal equines do, this is the only time they are capable of producing offspring. They live very long, easily reaching a hundred years and still feeling young. There is not one Sephra however that has lived its full life, dying by old age, so it is unknown how long these animals can really live.
Appearance:
They stand higher than the average horse, the smallest of the adults reaching 17 hands at his withers. Some have long, lion-like tails, others appear to look like normal equines except size and weight- along with a slightly feral look to them that they carry alone. They do not always look alike however, and a few of them are granted with huge wings, some with curved horns growing out of their forehead. Colors do vary. Some are darkly colored, others have lighter shades; either way, each one of these equines are killers, and all have long, sharp fangs that they use to feed on animals. Stallions are a few hands taller than mares are, and they are overall more heavily muscled and their body structure is bigger. The mares have the advantage of silence however, they can move swiftly through the forest without much detection at all.
Personality:
Sephra's can be very stubborn, and they each have an individual sense of authority. This sometimes leads to rather brutal disputes when it comes to leader positions, but the fights always help to even things out in the small herd. The stallions are very dominant, they can get aggressive and protective easily, and it is never uncommon for fights to break out over the right to a mare. The mares are a bit more mellow, but they can kill with a swift snap of their powerful jaws and would easily feast upon the flesh of any given animal; anything but another Sephra. Filly's are bred as soon as they are old enough, to continue to keep the Sephra's black blood flowing into a new, stronger, more powerful generation. Colts are introduced to mares early on.
Lemme know if you decide to want to make an RP with me on this idea. (: Please dont steal it.
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Re: Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
by Emoticon Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:23 pm
Sounds very interesting, though whats the difference between an literate and an advanced/normal post?
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Re: Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
by Saviour Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:30 pm
I suspect she means that not only does she want you to post long replies, but that she doesn't want too many typos, misspellings, and improper grammar. Just a theory, though.
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Re: Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
by Emoticon Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:36 pm
As long as the grammer check doesn't give me the flippin' run around then I should be good ^_^
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Re: Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
by Emoticon Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:42 pm
Lol took me 2 minutes just to fix the errors from that post and it starttomess up.<<< beautiful example. And this thing keeps making me click the options menu and turn off my wifi, happened twice now and I'm afraidtotype more.
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Re: Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
by Spritz Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:00 pm
Yep, sort of what savior said. I'd really love longer posts, like a few paragraphs and such. And plus grammar and spelling is always very nice(: I dont mean to be too picky or anything. I just want it to be a good interesting RP with detail. Honestly though, I mis-spell things alllll the freaking time, so I just run it through spell check and make sure everything is okay.
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Re: Oooohkay. An advanced/literate RP idea.
by Emoticon Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:28 am
Lol its fine, I'm not typing on my computer atm, so I'm using this this thing. I have spell check on my web browser and I know of a grammer check site. But when I type long things, I get distracted and kinda makes it go slower.
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