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Post by LoveOnHerArms Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:40 pm

Promises were a funny thing, people made them all the time but most of the time they were broken and shattered.


Rain was pouring down in the sleepy little town, normally summer rain brought life helped things grow but not today, no for the twenty-two year old the rain was just rain something to mask the tears that were streaming down her face. Clothed in soaking wet jeans, a old band shirt and a mens flannel shirt over that.Auburn curls were soaked clinging to her face and back, hazel eyes lifeless looking out silent tears falling down her face. He had promised her he would be alright, that he would come home. That was the only promise Craig ever broke, Ally and Craig grew up together, starting dating in high school, when they graduated they were still dating. Craig proposed a couple nights later as they laid on their hill looking up at the stars. A couple weeks after that he told her he joined the army. Ally didn't fight it or freak out on him, he talked about joining up since they were kids, it was just who he was. He left a day after her twenty-first birthday promising her he would come back and marry her, they would have the life they talked about.

But now those dreams were shattered. Craig's mom had gotten the call only a week ago saying her son had died in action, she called Ally crying and the the girl's heart had dropped right then. After that everything seemed to be a big blur too her, people stopping by, telling her how sorry they were, the hour long ride to the cemetery where Craig was going to be buried at. A couple buddies of Craig told her how sorry they were and told her how great of a man he was, she knew all of that already but gave them weak smiles telling them 'thank you' Craig talked about a couple of his army friends a lot in the letters and calls she had gotten from him. Ally couldn't tell you their names right now, her mind felt numb. After that she drove back home with Craig's parents while his buddies fallowed behind, they were going to stay with them for a while or thats what Beth told Ally.

It started to rain on the way home, once they got have to the house Ally slipped out of the car and looked over at Beth telling her she was going to her little place to change out of the black shirt and blouse she was waring, Beth looked at her eyes red but she looked worried about the younger lady and asked if she wanted someone to drive her. Ally just shook her head and started down the driveway, down the sidewalk to her place, by the time she got to the door, she was soaked to the skin.Kicking off the wet flats she changed into jeans a old band shirt and one of Craig's flannel shirts. Walking back out the door she sniffled,she didn't go back to Beth's house, she couldn't take anymore people telling her how sorry they were and all the looks, the hushes tones as she walked by and everything she wanted to be alone. Walking through the rain was better then being in a house full of people that felt sorry for you. Hugging herself she walked to their hill just outside of the sleepy little town. Sniffling she sat down in the wet grass hugging her knees to her chest. A sob escaped her from her mouth, soon her small frame was trembling as she sobbed clutching Craig's dog tags. She sat there sobbing for almost a hour before she just sat there looking out silent tears falling down her cheeks as the rain came down soaking her.


And thats where Ally sat, curls clinging to her face and back, hazel eyes lifeless looking out at nothing as silent tears fell down her face. The girl stood around 5'4 with a curvy frame, people called it the hour glass frame. Hugging her knees tighter to her chest Ally sat there in the rain looking out feeling numb and alone, she started shaking from the cold as night started coming still she didn't move clutching the dog tags to her chest.

(Looking for someone to play one of Craig's army friends, please give me something to work with. Thanks! )
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