Sassy needs mate

[Guest]

Sassy galloped across an open field. She stoped in front of a stallion. Her bay coat shineng with her white tail and mane compelting he coat.

[Guest]

Ok nbmbbbbb i take it you are new to the whole RP thing. you cant just write :

She stoped in front of a stallion

You write something like this:

Sassy galloped across the open field, the wind teasing her tresses (mane) and her banner (tail) waved behind her, she slowed to a stop. What a sight her beautiful bay coat shining with a sweat shine whilst her snow white mane and tail stilled. A lone eagle soared above her in the heavens (sky) its shadow floating on the ground towards her......

(wow i was getting carried away there !!!)

there is an example.

[××Eris××]

oh dont be so picky lol! some people might be slow typers. it would take forever to write somthing like that!

[Guest]

All of the sudden appears a strong stallion ,black as a dark night sky .He stompes by all of the other mares
and walks right up to Sassy.He rears up ,snorting he was blown away by her beauty.He flips is mane and
admires her .


p.s. I'm new so i hope i'm doing this right.

[××Eris××]

yup ur doin it right! lol

[Guest]

thx, lol

[××Eris××]

now all u have to do is keep complimenting her, make urself sound like a hottie and hope it works out for the best

[Guest]

ya your right

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